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This is my second attempt of the Immortal Dynasty. The story will carry on from the first attempt, which can be found here.

Chapter Guide
Prologue
Chapter 1: New Beginnings
Chapter 2: Whirlwind Romance
Chapter 3: Dream, Part I
Chapter 4: The Wedding
Chapter 5: Closer
Chapter 6: The Second Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 7: Mysterious Lover
Chapter 8: Made of Steel
Chapter 9: Wishing For Time
Chapter 10: Unbreakable Bond
Chapter 11: Young Love
Chapter 12: No Regrets
Chapter 13: Shang Simla
Chapter 14: Dream, Part II
Chapter 15: Unanswered
Chapter 16: Explanation
Chapter 17: The First Immortal
Chapter 18: Europa
Chapter 19: Lovers in China
Chapter 20: Happiness
Chapter 21: The Third Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 22: Immortals Die Too
Chapter 23: Strange
Chapter 24: Al Simhara
Chapter 25: The Call
Chapter 26: Teenagers
Chapter 27: Insane
Chapter 28: Life as Leda
Chapter 29: Leda's Love
Chapter 30: The Happiest Birthday
Chapter 31: The Second Immortal
Chapter 32: Introducing Leda
Chapter 33: The Fourth Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 34: The House of Love
Chapter 35: Possessed
Chapter 36: Goodbye Cyllene
Chapter 37: Little Lysithea
Chapter 38: Too Many Boys
Chapter 39: At Peace
Chapter 40: You Give Love A Bad Name
Chapter 41: The Third Immortal
Chapter 42: Lysithea
Chapter 43: Love at Last
Chapter 44: The Fifth Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 45: Lysi's Little Girl
Chapter 46: All Grown Up
Chapter 47: The Mirror
Chapter 48: Learn to Live Again
Chapter 49: Teen Angst
Chapter 50: Loss and Love
Chapter 51: Mali's Wedding
Chapter 52: The Sixth Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 53: One Last Step
Chapter 54: The Fourth Immortal
Chapter 55: Himalia
Chapter 56: The Life of Little Erin
Chapter 57: The Scream
Chapter 58: Leader of the Free World
Chapter 59: Whatever Will Be, Will Be
Chapter 60: Adult At Last
Chapter 61: Drawing Close
Chapter 62: The Fifth Immortal
Chapter 63: Erinome
Chapter 64: The Chamber
Chapter 65: Sadness and Opportunity
Chapter 66: Vows
Chapter 67: Love Lost, Love Gained
Chapter 68: The Seventh Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 69: Toddler Years
Chapter 70: The Sixth Immortal
Chapter 71: Amalthea
Chapter 72: Teen Romance
Chapter 73: Cast Away
Chapter 74: Hanging by a Moment
Chapter 75: An End for a Beginning
Chapter 76: A New Start
Chapter 77: Dreams Do Come True
Chapter 78: The Final Mortal, Gone
Chapter 79: Ready for Number Eight
Chapter 80: The Eighth Moon of Jupiter
Chapter 81: Time Flies By
Chapter 82: Childhood
Chapter 83: Cheeky Little Ellie
Chapter 84: The Connection
Chapter 85: Active Ellie
Chapter 86: New Love
Chapter 87: Reaching Out
Chapter 88: Out of Reach
Chapter 89: The Ultimate Sacrifice
Chapter 90: The Seventh Immortal
Chapter 91: Elara
Chapter 92: Older by the Minute
Chapter 93: Live to Love
Chapter 94: Endless
Chapter 95: Drawing Near
Chapter 96: The Final Day
Chapter 97: The Final Immortal
Chapter 98: Ellie's Expectations
Chapter 99: Amalthea' Assumptions
Chapter 100: Erin's Estimate
Chapter 101: Mali's Imaginings
Chapter 102: Lysi's Thoughts
Chapter 103: Leda's Understanding
Chapter 104: Europa's Experience
Chapter 105: Reunited
Chapter 106: Floating
Chapter 107: The Mysteries Revealed
Chapter 108: Goodbye
Epilogue

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2011, 08:04:43 AM »
My name is Callisto. It means the moon of Jupiter.
My past is hazy; I can hardly recall anything of my childhood. I don't even remember my parents.
But there's one thing I do know. If I'm to ever find answers, I need to do something extraordinary. I need to create an Immortal Dynasty.

You see, when I came here, I had just one thing in my possession. A book.
It looked like an ordinary book, and I wouldn't have believed a thing inside of it if it weren't for a note that was scribbled in the cover.

"Callisto, I love you. I always will. I pray that you're safe. Read this book. Believe this book, as I could not. I could not, and it's landed me in more than trouble. It's doomed me to a life of torture. Please Callisto, read this book and follow it's instructions. You're the only hope we have.
My darling Callisto, I love you.
Love Mummy Luna"


I never knew my mum. Who she was. What she was like. What her favourite thing to do was. I didn't even know her last name. I didn't know our last name.
But I knew my mother's name was Luna.
I didn't know my mother, but I loved her. That's why I honoured her in my name. Callisto Moon.

What I need to do is near impossible. But I want answers. And more than that, I want to save my mother from the danger she's in.
All I know is it's going to be hard. It's going to be extremely hard. But I've got to try. I've got to create a dynasty of immortals.


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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2011, 08:15:08 AM »
Fascinating start, wonderfully written! :D Welcome Callisto, I'm looking forward to your adventures (and of course photos ;) ).
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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2011, 08:41:12 AM »
Didn't read your first attempt but I'll definitely read this one! :)

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2011, 08:44:19 AM »
Yay! Welcome Callisto! You know, it's funny even when we do fail, we immediately try again! I've failed three times, good luck with this attempt Alexandria!!

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: May 03, 2011, 09:25:58 AM »
Welcome Callisto! Good luck this time around Alexandria. I was hoping for Luna but little Callisto all grown up will be just as great. :D
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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2011, 09:27:29 AM »
I'm sorry you weren't able to continue your other dynasty, Alexandria, but this one sounds very interesting.  Good luck to you and Callisto!
 
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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2011, 09:48:17 AM »
What a brilliant start!  :D
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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: May 03, 2011, 10:13:31 AM »
Great start! I look forward to reading more! :)
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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #9 on: May 03, 2011, 10:34:01 AM »
I was hoping you'd begin your new attempt with Callisto after Luna tried so hard to get Hermes to save her! Brilliant start, or second start, I should say. I love how you intertwined this attempt with your first one.

Did you save Callisto to your bin and turned her into a YA with CAS, or did you create her "from scratch"?

Good luck again! Maybe you can try the "post-it" route like I am - my whole screen is framed with post-its about what to do when in what order. It's very helpful to not forget the "simple" things such as a portraits.


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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: May 03, 2011, 11:11:08 AM »
Yay good luck Callisto!

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #11 on: May 03, 2011, 11:13:34 AM »
Thank you so much everyone ;D

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Before I realised what I had done wrong in my other attempt, Callisto had just become a young adult. So I saved her to the bin. I actually think she's quite pretty (I'll put pictures up soonish!).
I have a stack of notes next to me, reminding me what to do, but I just completely overlooked them! Oops.

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: May 03, 2011, 11:52:00 AM »
Brilliant restart, I'm so sorry about the other dynasty. It's so easy to overlook things like portraits. Good luck second time round! ;D
Good luck again! Maybe you can try the "post-it" route like I am - my whole screen is framed with post-its about what to do when in what order. It's very helpful to not forget the "simple" things such as a portraits.
Hehe, that's what I do. My parents are mad 'cause a) I use up all the Post-its, and b) the glue of the Post-it is stuck on the side of my screen (I use a laptop).

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: May 03, 2011, 12:00:50 PM »
Love the prologue!  :D

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Re: The Moons of Jupiter: An Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #14 on: May 03, 2011, 12:01:34 PM »
My name is Callisto Moon, and it is my fate to become immortal.



I'd read the book cover to cover, making sure that I didn't skip a word. Life fruit. Death fish. Ambrosia.
I wondered how I'd even be able to start - I was so low on money. I entertained the thought in my mind of myself driving about Sunset Valley looking for an expensive house or car, and just convincing them to help out, but decided it was a silly idea.
Ten minutes later, I was in the car searching.

I came across a house on the other side of town. Expensive car, expensive house. I guessed it was a good place to start.


It turned out the lady that lived there was actually a lonely widow named Agnes. I felt cruel thinking it, but it really was a bonus.
Using my charm, I became best friends with Agnes in no time. She revealed to me how lonely she felt in her huge house by herself. I was considering asking her to move in with me, but thought I should wait it out. After all, I'd only known her for half a day.


I headed to the library to read up on gardening, when something stopped me in my tracks.
The most gorgeous eyes I'd ever seen, on a man with a sparkling smile.
I'd never believed in love at first sight. The feeling was strange.
It was as though my feet took over from my brain, as I started to walk over to him. I introduced myself, and he smiled. It was an amazing smile.


His name was Thornton. Thornton Wolff. I felt like I'd do anything to have him.
We talked for hours, late into the night. I was hardly able to stand by the time I made my way to the fire station to sleep in one of the free beds.


The next day, I decided it was time to take action. I invited Agnes to my "house" and straight up told her that she needs company, and I need money and then asked her to move in. I was actually quite surprised that she accepted. I guess honesty works!





With the money that Agnes brought in, we made ourselves a house. A big house at that. Almost big enough for 8 immortals.


For now, the plan remains a secret. I hate to use this woman; she seems genuine. However, my family's safety means more to me than a strangers money. They mean everything, and I intend on doing anything to save them.


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Sorry that the first chapter isn't great quality - not only is it 2am, but I always struggle to make the "meet X sim, make them move in, etc" part interesting.
But I'm glad to be starting afresh :)

Callisto's traits are Green Thumb, Loves Outdoors, Over-emotional, Ambitious and Charismatic.

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Wonderful restart!  Congratulations on Agnes moving in and the house looks great.
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Callisto is a really pretty sim! You can definitely see the similarity between her and Agnes. I wonder if she'll ever find out she just met her great grandmother!

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Loving this new story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I think Callisto is very pretty and Agnes' make over is brilliant.
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Wooooo!  Go Callisto!  I'm so excited for a new beginning - excellent story, as always!

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Woooow... Calisto's pretty. :)
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Wow. Callisto is amazing, and Agnes looks great too. ;D You can really see Agnes' dominant genes in Callisto. Hehe.  :D
Brilliant restart and I have a feeling that I said that already. Hehe  ;D Yeah so I have.
Brilliant restart, I'm so sorry about the other dynasty. It's so easy to overlook things like portraits. Good luck second time round! ;D
I'll just repeat what I said before.  ;D
Good luck second time round! ;D Hehe

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Great restart Alexandra! Love the new look for Agnes and love how Calisto looks! :D
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Wow Callisto does look like Agnes! She's gorgeous!! Thornton is rich as well lol. The house is gorgeous!!


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Callisto looks much like her mother. That means - gorgeous. The house looks very pretty, as well as Agnes.
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