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The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 5 : All about Beatrice
« on: August 13, 2012, 10:48:29 AM »
So, this is my first attempt to make an immortal dynasty and i decided to make a classic story that takes place in Sunset Valley. It won't be a story kind of dynasty, i'll just play it and see how it will go.I'll explain some things at the end of post. And here is the story:

The Athanatoi Immortal Dynasty


Prologue:




Apollo Athanatoi was looking at himself in the mirror. He was the most famous sim around, throwing concerts and parties all the way from Bridgeport to Starlight Shores. The whole world knew about him, but then he understood something. He was getting old. And he couldn't stop it. Or maybe there is a way? He heard rumors about the food of the gods, so called ambrosia. But there where he lived, it was not possible to get it. So, he decided that it was time to stop being a celebrity, and try to find a way to live forever, and keep his famous blood living in his descendants.


Chapter 1: Moving in ( Sunset Valley)



So, this is Apollo. His traits are: Natural cook, Angler, Green thumb, Friendly and Ambitious.
He likes Pop, Mac and cheese, and his favourite color is Aqua. His Lifetime Wish is to become a Celebrated Five-Star Chef.
He changed his style, as you can see. He is now just a normal man living in a suburban town.
On the other side of the road, there was a pond, and he began fishing just as he moved in:



Then he takes a trip to the Sunset Valley library:



He instantly learned some skills such as gardening, cooking and fishing.
Then he goes to the gym and eats some ice cream, which is his first meal since he moved in.



Sleeps at the fire station:



Meets new people:





And Agnes Crumplebottom. Hmm… (just look at her car!)

Few days have passed, he got a job in the culinary career, and he bought some items to make his life easier. Im sure he will do just fine.





See? Now that's some outdoor cookin' !

Tomorrow he meets Agnes at the beach and they are having a date:





And then he decides to pop the question:



And she says yes!



They decided to get married immediately under the beautiful night sky full of stars (just look at their faces)





Whoop!

She decided she will no longer mourn her husband and start a new life. The money she brought to the family was used to build a small but cozy home.



Next time i will post some pictures of their home and there will be few surprises!
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The surname Athanatoi means "Immortals" in Greek.  That is all for now.
Hope you enjoyed my first immortal dynasty post!  :)

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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2012, 10:52:38 AM »
A very nice start.  Good luck with your game! Agnes is always a good addition just like her car is always a good addition to the bank account!
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2012, 10:56:24 AM »
Thanks! I'm glad that my story already has a viewer. And i noticed how much her car is worth a bit later, so i built even bigger house, but i'll put that later.

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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2012, 11:48:41 AM »
Excellent start great choice of Agnes as the wife her car is very useful. Cute dog by the way
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2012, 07:48:39 PM »
Great post! :D I enjoyed it, and I really like the name Anthonoi, too. It's cool how you found the Greek word for immortal!
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2012, 09:24:49 PM »
Nice start! I will be watching!
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 1 : Moving in (Sunset Valley)
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2012, 05:39:25 PM »
Thanks guys! Here is the new post:

Chapter 2 : More and more skills, births and birthdays!

So, let's continue with our recently created dynasty.
This is the house:





Apollo's favorite color is blue, so it's only normal that the walls in the living room are blue.









Small, but good for now.
I never really liked Agnes' style so i decided to give her a new hairstyle:



 No new clothes, though, because the dresser is too expensive!
They needed some privacy, so the only pic we get here is this one:



Back to the daily activities. Apollo is preparing waffles, which they will be eating a lot in the future (along with pancakes).



While Agnes decided to try out something new:





Her first creation is great, don't you think?
But, something happened unexpectedly. She felt very sick, so she threw up.



Must be of all the watermelons she ate (hint?)
Apollo started his garden, and Agnes decided to do some painting. This time she will paint Apollo's portrait:



Here she remembers how Apollo proposed to her:



Whoop! Looks like there is a nooboo on the way!



And here's the portrait:



And a sculpture in the making:



Finally, the day has arrived and Agnes woke up in pain.



Apollo is panicking:



And Agnes is thinking about teddy bears:



Watching her like this makes even me hurt :P



But it was all totally worth it when Beatrice Athanatoi was born! So, congratulations to the couple for their baby!



Now isn't she adorable:



Apollo and Agnes had to go somewhere for the opportunity, so Beatrice was left alone with a teenage babysitter who knows nothing about babysitting. She just stood there while poor Beatrice was starving and peeing in her diapers.



It was nearly time for Agnes to become an adult, so i bought her a birthday cake and made a private birthday.



There she is as an adult. Still haven't changed her clothes, so she looks like a widow all the time. Hopefully, that will change with time. Stay tuned for new posts about the Athantoi Dynasty!



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You have a nice dynasty going here.
I like the color combinations in all the rooms of your house!
And Agnes' hair look much better this way. I am looking forward to her different outfit!
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Thanks  :D Here is the new chapter:   

Chapter 3 : Beatrice turns toddler!

Apollo has started to raise his gardening skills, so here is his small garden near the house:



Agnes  bought her camera at the consigment store:


She is also doing very well with her sculpting career and skill


Apollo is playing with Beatrice. There's a lot of love there:


But time passes by and Beatrice is closer to her birthday:

It is a nice decor considering their funds.

Pauline Wan and Molly French, who are both Apollo's friends also attended the party


But, guess what, some uninvited guests started to come to the party, including Fiona McIrish ( if i am not mistaken)

And the Goths, who are a bit older than when i started playing:

Still, they are family, so of course Cornelia had to see her sister and her niece growing up.
And more and more uninvited guests (why is this happening??)


Guess that's it for the guests.


Of course, Apollo was showing off with his cooking skills, so he prepared home made hamburgers for the guests:


And, Cornelia Goth decided to clean my house in the middle of the party, which is great! I have had this dirty counter since they moved in, but didn't have time to clean it, so Cornelia did me a favor:


Beatrice in her mother's arms in front of the cake. Not everyone was cheering, but hey!


There she is as a toddler:



Love her eyes, lol :D



The guests had a great time, despite not having a radio to play the music, uninvited guests, and no fun! I guess Apollo's hamburgers did it :D



And again, Apollo really loves his daughter:


Sweet dreams, Beatrice!  :)


Of course, a little makeover might be in order for Beatrice and Agnes, but guess what got a huge makeover!



Their house!



I made it in classy, European kind of style. I didn't realize at first  how much Agnes' car was really worth, so i was nicely surprised when i was checking her inventory! Their jobs and her car made a net worth more than 60,000 simoleons. Great, huh?

In the next chapter you will see how house looks from inside!  :D


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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 3 : Beatrice turns toddler!
« Reply #9 on: August 19, 2012, 11:20:27 AM »
Very nice house!  You will have uninvited guests come to your parties if you are a celebrity and/or have the legendary host LTR.  I love uninvited guests because you never know when they might come in handy.

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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 3 : Beatrice turns toddler!
« Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 07:03:32 PM »
Sounds like things are going well! Your house looks great.  And it's funny, Cornelia Goth cleaned the counter at my sim's party too! I was like, "That's an odd thing to do at a party, but thank you!" I had busy sims, and I hadn't gotten around to telling them to clean it. ;D
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 3 : Beatrice turns toddler!
« Reply #11 on: August 24, 2012, 08:52:43 PM »
Thanks! And no, my sims are not celebrities and don't have that Lifetime Reward, so i don't know where the uninvited guests came from, lol  ;D

Chapter 4 : The New House

View from above:


The kitchen:



The dining room:





Master bedroom:



Bathroom 1:



Bathroom 2:



Kids' room:



The living room:





It is also an office:



Hallway:







And this is where the worst thing that happened in my dynasty occured. I finished the whole house, tried to make a basement, and all of sudden: bam! The game crashed, and i almost lost the will to play the game again :P So, i had to start the house all over. Thank God, i already had the walls and floors placed on the lot, so i managed to make it again. And the results are in those pics :)

Back to our family:

Agnes potty training Beatrice:



And Beatrice's new clothes:





And her new haircut (the photo didn't turn out very great :P ) :



She is already learning a lot:





New chapter soon!

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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 4 : The New House
« Reply #12 on: August 25, 2012, 03:15:39 AM »
Your house is really good! Sorry you had to redo it though, I hate game crashes. My game crashed and I lost thousands of simoleons from a great sale at the consignment store! Boo to game crashes. And Beatrice is cute. :)
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Re: The Athanatoi Dynasty - Chapter 4 : The New House
« Reply #13 on: August 27, 2012, 10:00:20 AM »
Thanks :) Sorry to hear you had crashes too, it's really annoying.

Chapter 5 : All about Beatrice

With the new house and little Beatrice growing up, the Athanatois find themselves in need of work, work and work. Even little Beatrice, you know.

But, first things first, i have grown really tired of Agnes' tragic clothes, and a little makeover might be in place:


(have you noticed the new hair? )









I had to share this pic, lol  :D


And now back to Beatrice:
I also forgot to mention her traits: Artistic and Excitable  :)

Beatrice is watching the TV, but it might be a bit disturbing because she is watching a cowplant eating a sim  :o  And Agnes is painting her portrait.



Here she learned how to use the potty:




To talk:


And to walk:


Agnes is advancing in her sculpting career:


Apollo is checking real estate (too expensive! )


And some of the museum pieces, although there is no museum :)


Apollo is doing well in his cooking career, but he still loves to garden:


But there comes a time in life when a sim has to age up:




Nice party! Apollo will never forget it.

And of course, something we all like:


Apollo, make a wish! - I want to be immortal! -


We better hope it happens!



Now Apollo is an adult, he really should think about advancing in his career and building his skills...

But oops...


What was that?

Just joking, she ate bad pancakes  ;D

Nice garden:


Ooo, Agnes is doing some nice sculptures here:


And that would be all for now. New chapter coming soon!