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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 21 October)
« Reply #50 on: October 22, 2012, 04:50:50 PM »
That might explain why the Witch-Ghost twins in my dynasty show up as flesh in the mirror.
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 21 October)
« Reply #51 on: October 22, 2012, 07:12:24 PM »
I think that's only for ghosts that are mixed with other supernaturals. When they're at the mirror, the game decides to show them as their occult state, instead of with the ghost overlay.

When I tested to see what happens when taking a ghost to the dresser, I made a ghost in CAS with no other supernatural states affixed to him. He showed up as a ghost when I tried to plan an outfit.

Anyways, wouldn't Vernon have grey hair like the rest of Twinbrook's ghosts?

He does.

That might explain why the Witch-Ghost twins in my dynasty show up as flesh in the mirror.

They used to become flesh, but since Supernatural, when ghosts became editable in CAS, they now show up either as ghosts or, in your case, the other occult they are.
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 21 October)
« Reply #52 on: October 23, 2012, 03:36:08 PM »
They become flesh by taking them to the mirror, and stay that way for the duration of your mirror use, as far as has happened to me.
I think that's only for ghosts that are mixed with other supernaturals. When they're at the mirror, the game decides to show them as their occult state, instead of with the ghost overlay.

When I tested to see what happens when taking a ghost to the dresser, I made a ghost in CAS with no other supernatural states affixed to him. He showed up as a ghost when I tried to plan an outfit.

Yes, my ghosts are still ghosts in CAS.  I can only see their hair colour by trying to change it and then cancelling.

...by the way what hair color does Vernon have?
Anyways, wouldn't Vernon have grey hair like the rest of Twinbrook's ghosts?
Do you know, I never looked at his hair in CAS  :-\ . Going back to earlier saves and checking, it's as I thought.  He had grey hair when he arrived but it changed to black when he had the Young Again potion.  Someone must have programmed him to be grey as an elder but darker when young :).

Wow, both girls are beautiful
Well, I'm not sure about beautiful but they're not bad - neither of them seems to have inherited Vernon's nose.  I'm sure it can't last, though  :P.

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« Reply #53 on: October 27, 2012, 11:10:28 AM »
Chapter 4: This Sporting Life

As she grew up, Chris developed an enthusiasm for all types of physical activity.  From being the star of her ballet class, she moved on to martial arts.





With homework, her part-time job and frequent visits to the gym, she had very little time for a social life.  She did have a boyfriend for a short time, but neither of them was really serious about it.



Fluffs didn’t approve of Damion and she suspected he fancied Vicky anyway.  They soon split up.

High school seemed to drag on forever but finally she graduated and was free to do something useful.



Her classmates had voted her ‘most likely to become a sports star’ and it had a certain appeal – but she knew the Llamas were struggling at the moment and their new coach had come up with a horribly intensive training schedule to try to improve their performance.  Chris liked working out, but on her own terms – and she was pretty sure that martial arts didn’t feature in the coach’s plans.  On the other hand, team games weren’t the only way to be a sports star.  Maybe she could be a star athlete and body builder – or a Sim Fu champion.  She might not be surrounded by adoring fans begging for her autograph… but wasn’t that a good thing?

Still, she had to earn a living somehow.  Mamma had lectured her about the virtues of a steady job but Chris knew perfectly well that her mother had been a ghost hunter before she married.  A profession like that sounded much better than trailing off to an office, or even the stadium, every day.  So she decided to become a private eye.  The pay wasn’t bad, the hours were flexible and she could justify the gym as a business expense.  Besides, it was fun.





Although you did meet some odd types.  The expert psychiatrist she consulted for one of her cases really looked as though she should have been one of her own patients.





Sometimes Ana despaired of Christabel.  The girl had no sense of family duty.  She’d repeatedly tried to take her aside for a little talk about immortality and matters arising but Christabel always had an urgent appointment elsewhere.  Maybe she thought the mother-daughter chat was going to be about something embarrassingly conventional, like avians and insects.

It was probably time for another talk with Deirdra.



“Ana! Hi! How’s the baby?”
“The baby is now a young woman – and so is her younger sister… and that is why I wished to talk to you.”
“Wanting to enter glamorous grandmother competitions, are we?”
“Certainly not! Although it would be nice to have babies around the place again.  No, the problem is with Christabel – my elder daughter, the ghost.  She is obsessed with sport and this silly private eye business she has started up.  She appears to have no desire to settle down, or even to talk to me about serious matters, like completing tasks and finding a spouse.“
“What about your other daughter?”
“Victoria?  She is human.  Well, mostly human.  You said I had to have a family of ghosts, so Christabel must be the one to fulfil the requirements.”
“Yes, but couldn’t you take Victoria into your confidence?  It seems to me you need someone to talk to as much as anything.  If she knows what needs to be done, maybe she could steer her sister in the right direction  – and maybe even help with her tasks.  And if Christabel’s rebellious, what about some judicious disapproval?  Not too much, mind – just enough to goad her into doing what you want, to spite you.  Her enthusiasm for sport sounds quite promising.  Let’s see what we can do with that…”



Victoria was in the garden, of course.



To her surprise, Ana found that Victoria was intrigued by her life story and was willing to become her accomplice.  She was finally developing some of that endless curiosity that that Ana had had in earlier centuries and was delighted to learn that, with the combination of Ana’s genes and the treatments she was developing, she was likely to live long enough to do all of the things she wanted.  She even had some ideas about possible improvements to Ana’s potions – some of the plants she was growing seemed to have interesting properties.  It seemed, too, that she was keen to travel in search of new plants and fish.  Maybe she could also pick up some useful ideas from other cultures.





Victoria might finally be turning into the daughter Ana had wanted for so long but other developments were less happy.  Vernon had refused further doses of youth potion, saying he was pleased to have lived long enough to see their children grow up and was now content to grow old.  As he felt the end approaching, they spent almost all of their time together.





But Vernon was alone in the bathroom when he finally lost his grip on the mortal realm and slipped quietly back into his urn.











Chris was pleased to have a sparring partner.  Practising with the board breaker and meditating could only take you so far.  She’d tried to teach Fluffs Sim Fu but, although Fluffs found it funny to pose like a martial artist now and then, she usually just stood and laughed if Chris invited her to spar.  Vicky, on the other hand, was a student who was threatening to overtake her teacher.  Maybe it was because she’d been to China and studied at the Academy there.  Still, Chris could feel herself improving rapidly now that she had a training partner and soon she’d achieved mastery of both martial arts and athletics.



With the Twinbrook hacking scandals finally cleared up, Chris decided she had time to visit China herself.  Vicky had bought a small house near the Forbidden City, which was a good base for seeing the sights.  Not that Chris wanted to spend much time on the standard tourist round.  She was there because Vicky had told her about the martial arts tournament that was about to take place.  Becoming a Grand Master of Sim Fu really would be sports stardom.  Sadly, things didn’t go quite as she'd planned.  She won her first few fights easily enough but then began to suffer defeats.  Still, she’d reached the third rank when one of her opponents refused to come over and fight.  In between repeated attempts to invite him over, she sparred with Vicky – but both her week’s holiday and the tournament were over before she’d improved her ranking.



Back home, she continued her training – there were still other goals she wanted to achieve.



Still, it was all beginning to seem rather pointless.  Failing to achieve her dream of winning the martial arts tournament had left her life feeling somehow empty - but then a conversation with Vicky led to everything changing.

“Hey, Chris, I met someone yesterday who feels the same way you do about art.  He hates it too.”
“Really?  Was it someone in the shop when you were selling those vegetables?”
“No, it was last night, in the graveyard.”
“What were you doing there at night?  Trying to prove how brave you are?”
“No, I was fishing.  There are some really odd fish in that big pond.  Anyway, I met Steward and we got to talking.”



“Steward?  I don’t remember a Steward.  He must be someone who started working there after I left.  Is he a mausoleum clerk like I was or a gravedigger?”
“Neither.  He’s a ghost.  Would you like to meet him?”



Summary - generation 2

Heir: Christabel Goole
Life state: electrocution ghost
Traits: Perceptive, loves the outdoors, heavy sleeper, athletic, can’t stand art
Lifetime wish: Physical Perfection



Toddler requirements: best friends with both parents, reached  level 3 in two skills (xylophone, logic books)
Child requirements: on honor roll, one opportunity completed (ballet recital)
Teenage requirements: on honor roll, reached  level 3 in mausoleum clerk part-time job, had a romantic interest (Damion Jeter)



Unique best friend: Fluffs (imaginary friend)
Two career rewards: frosted door, case board
Three unique opportunities: Hacked!, Digging for Dirt, The Case of the Hacker Elite
Four unique Lifetime Happiness Rewards: Professional Slacker, No Bills Ever, Opportunistic, Moodlet Manager
Five unique 5000+point wishes: master athletic skill, work out for 12 hours straight, reach level 10 of Investigator career, break 500 more boards, master martial arts skill
Six unique skill challenges: Body Builder, Timber Terminator, Marathon Runner, Fitness Nut, Master of Meditation, Sim Fu King
Seven items for mausoleum: gems from board breaking


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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 27 October)
« Reply #54 on: October 27, 2012, 03:48:32 PM »
Congrats on completing Generation 2!
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 27 October)
« Reply #55 on: October 28, 2012, 01:09:21 AM »
Really great update. Congratulations on completing your Generation 2 requirements so quickly! (At least it seemed quick from this angle.) Sad to hear about Vernon. Will he still haunt? And will he be a yellow ghost or a grey ghost now?
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 27 October)
« Reply #56 on: October 28, 2012, 08:01:44 AM »
Congrats on completing Generation 2!
Thank you.

Really great update. Congratulations on completing your Generation 2 requirements so quickly! (At least it seemed quick from this angle.) Sad to hear about Vernon. Will he still haunt? And will he be a yellow ghost or a grey ghost now?

Thanks.  It didn't seem that quick to me  ;)  I wish she'd managed to win the tournament - all those sparring matches took ages.  Chris did complete her requirements earlier than Ana, but then she started as a teenager.  I was expecting the big wishes to be the thing that took the time in this Dynasty (and they were the limiting factor for Ana) but Chris actually completed six unique wishes before she'd finished the challenges.

I don't know about Vernon, because he's been Ana's inventory since, waiting for me to rebuild the house and put in a proper mausoleum for him to rest in.  I suspect he will haunt and is still yellow.  He didn't complete his lifetime wish but did have over 140,000 happiness points, so he should have had the fancy urn, but he still has his old basic one.  A restored ghost running out of time doesn't seem to be the same as a normal Sim death: there was no Grim and no mourning by the rest of the family.  It was just like a ghost going back into its grave at dawn.  In fact, if he'd lasted past 90, I probably wouldn't have had the camera on him and would have missed it altogether.

He still appears in the family tree as Ana's husband, as well.



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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 27 October)
« Reply #57 on: October 28, 2012, 07:07:28 PM »
Well that's all cool to know about ghost spouses. I expect you will be the resident expert on ghosts when you finish this dynasty! Shame he missed out on the fancy urn though.
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 27 October)
« Reply #58 on: October 29, 2012, 03:40:24 AM »
Congatulations for Gen 2 and good luck with te future generations :)
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« Reply #60 on: November 04, 2012, 12:35:07 PM »
This isn’t a proper story chapter, just a chance to show off the rebuilt house – I’ve mostly been building rather than playing this week.  The first rebuild was intended to be the basis for the final house but I hadn’t left quite enough space for stairs and couldn’t get the basements to work.  The first two houses were grey stone but I decided to go for red bricks and Victorian Gothic this time.


Front view


Back view


The house at night


Dining room


Study (still needs some more furniture)

The living room is currently acting as a foosball room.  There will eventually be a games room in the top basement level but I ran out of money.  I’ll post pictures of the finished versions of both rooms later.


Christabel’s room (she’s a yellow ghost who likes blue).


Poor Vicky is still sleeping in a child’s room at the moment.  She’ll move into a basement bedroom later. (Her favourite colour is also blue.)


The other children’s room

The family mausoleum is on the third basement level, hopefully safe from meteor strikes.  It’s only partly decorated as yet.


Ana’s area (with all of her career rewards, not just the 'official' two)


Chris’ area


Vernon’s final resting place…


…and Cecily’s.

They both come out to haunt most nights (and Vernon is still yellow).





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« Reply #61 on: November 04, 2012, 12:47:02 PM »
Awesome house!

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« Reply #62 on: November 04, 2012, 03:32:17 PM »
The house looks great!
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« Reply #63 on: November 04, 2012, 03:45:31 PM »
So jealous, what a gorgeous house!
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« Reply #64 on: November 05, 2012, 02:32:17 AM »
Wow I love the house! :D
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« Reply #65 on: November 05, 2012, 01:05:11 PM »
Will you come build the Bloodthornes the house of their/my dreams? Please! Hellion and Wilhemenia problably wouldn't notice, but, the heirs will!

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« Reply #66 on: November 10, 2012, 07:30:29 AM »
I have just read your complete story and gazed at your house. I have only one word that says it all: wow!
But maybe that doesn't do you enough justice ;) ...I absolutly love your story. Your background story was intriging and really pulled me in to the story. Genius how you wrote some from a different perspective. I love how the whole puzzle seems to come together. It shows you have put a lot of time and energy in this wonderfully creative and inventive story. Plus you are a terrific builder. Wow!
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« Reply #67 on: November 10, 2012, 01:39:44 PM »
Thank you, everyone.  The house was really supposed to look spookier than it does but its still my favourite of my Sim houses.

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« Reply #68 on: November 10, 2012, 02:46:17 PM »
Chapter 5: Love-Life

That night, Chris went along with Vicky to the cemetery – but the only ghost they met was a little girl.  Vicky was planning to spend the next few nights fishing there and promised to phone when Steward appeared again.  Chris went back to her cases but, oddly enough, the next one involved strange goings-on at the graveyard and she was already there on stakeout when Vicky called her over and introduced Steward.





Chris was so pleased to meet another adult ghost that they spent the whole night chatting.  Vicky was clearly less interested – she wandered off to fish for a few hours and rejoined them as dawn was breaking, yawning rather pointedly.



As it got lighter, Steward stopped talking mid-sentence and drifted back to his grave.



Chris looked at it thoughtfully – if she picked up the gravestone and took it home, would Steward go too?  Mamma would probably know.



Ana was delighted that Christabel was finally talking to her, even if it was only to ask her professional opinion as a former ghost hunter.  Still, it was clear that she was falling in love with this Steward.  Maybe ghostly grandchildren weren’t so far off.

With Steward’s urn now on her dressing table, it was easy for Chris to see when he appeared.  She took to sleeping in the day so that she’d be awake when he was around, and only worked on nights when it was clear he wasn’t going to emerge.



It was a frustratingly slow romance, though.  Steward was always exhausted and in need of a bath when he appeared and even curing him with her moodlet manager took time out of their precious few hours together.  She knew now that he was grumpy and disliked children, which didn’t bode too well for her future plans, but maybe he’d come around to having a family later.  Perhaps that was why he refused to take their relationship any further than kissing.

Eventually, she confided in Vicky, who persuaded her to talk to Mamma.  It was a decidedly awkward conversation to begin with – but at least ghosts don’t blush visibly.  In fact, Mamma was surprisingly down to earth.



“Men are such romantics!  I had exactly the same trouble with your father – although I did, er, win him over eventually.  Maybe the scientists at the laboratory can bring Steward back to partial life, as they did with Papa.   I am afraid I am out of touch with their current research but they do still owe me a few favours.  And I know someone else who might be able to help…”





“Good morning, Deirdra.”
“Hi, Ana.  Is that daughter of yours a sports star yet?"



“I think she has given up on that dream – but she has finished her tasks and found a suitable partner.  She is dreaming of weddings and children now – but it seems unlikely that either will ever happen unless Steward can be revived in some way.  He seems even more afraid of commitment than my dear Vernon.   I have talked to the scientists and they will ‘see what they can do’.  I suppose we will just have to wait to hear from them.”
“It sounds as though you could do with some proper help.  Can’t rely on humans.  Some of my friends would be willing to join in.  I’ll tell you where their lamps are hidden.”



“Oh, Deirdra, thank you.  What would I do without you?”



Eventually, the scientists contacted Chris and she hurried straight over with the urn.



With Steward around full-time, she felt able to take things more slowly and let him get used to the idea of having a girlfriend.





They went out on several all-night dates and then, as the sun was rising one morning, Chris proposed.



A few days later, Christabel Goole and Steward Curious were married.  It was a quiet ceremony at Willowglen Amphitheatre, with just the bride’s mother and sister as witnesses.





Before long, Chris was sure she heard chimes.



When she told her mother she was pregnant, Chris was surprised by the warmth of Ana’s response.  She’d been expecting medical advice but not hugs.



And she certainly hadn’t expected to hear Ana’s life story - or that it would be so... unusual.  At the end of a long talk, they agreed that Chris’ children and their descendants would grow up knowing all about Grim and the tasks they must complete.  One generation of misunderstanding and estrangement was more than enough.


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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 10 November with chapter 5)
« Reply #69 on: November 13, 2012, 07:00:08 PM »
Great update! I am very curious what the nooboo will look like!
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« Reply #70 on: November 16, 2012, 05:28:10 PM »
Well, I can reveal that the Twinbrook noses make their presence felt in generation 3  ;)

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Chapter 6: You Only Live Twice

Steward had known when he woke up that morning that it was going to be a bad day.  Of course, he quite often woke up feeling like that.  This time, though, he was right.  He’d gone out looking for a peaceful place to read his book – one with no children around.  If he had his way, they’d all go to school seven days a week, instead of running around at weekends making a noise and disturbing people.  When it started to get dark, he thought it was just cloud but then it got too dark to read and he looked up – just in time to see the meteor rushing down on him.  Typical, he thought, just before he stopped thinking anything at all.

When he was next aware of his surroundings, he was in the cemetery.  He was dead, then.  At least it was quiet – and mostly free of children.  There was Wilhelmina, the child ghost, but she was a quiet little thing – and mostly fainted when she saw Steward, anyway.  He could almost get to like that.  The adult ghosts were a pleasant enough bunch, although they rarely all came out at the same time.  Occasional living Sims would visit at night, but they were mostly anglers in pursuit of deathfish.  Then one of them started talking to him.  She said her name was Victoria and she was part-ghost herself.  Despite this delusion, she was reasonably good company.

The next time he emerged from his grave, she introduced her sister Christabel – who was a ghost.  Clearly Victoria's mad story had some basis, after all.  Christa was a charming young lady, if a little over-eager when it came to romance.  It was no great surprise to find himself in her house the next time he awoke, although placing his urn in her bedroom seemed rather forward.

He wished the wretched woman would let him have a bath in peace, though.  After so many years without one, it was pleasant to relax in hot water.  She kept using some strange device on him instead.  It removed the dirt efficiently enough but it just wasn’t the same as a proper bath.  And then he’d have liked a nap on a comfortable bed.  The house seemed to have plenty.  Instead, she kept trying to kiss him – and clearly wanted more than that.  Young hussy.

But then he woke to find himself outside an unfamiliar building with Christa – and it was evening, not the early hours of the morning.  She explained that he had been returned to partial life by the scientists who worked there.  They had done the same for her father, apparently.  Now he could carry on with the life that the meteor had interrupted, even though he was still essentially a ghost.

His revival, if you could call it that, seemed to have had a good effect on Christa, too.  She was prepared to settle for a dignified courtship now, and seemed much more like the delightful person he had thought her at first.  When she asked him to marry her, he was happy to accept.

Her mad mother was the only real drawback.  The old bat was remarkably well-preserved physically but she was clearly losing her marbles – assuming she’d had any in the first place.  She offered him a potion of her own devising, one that she said would make him young again, but he refused.  Even assuming the stuff actually worked and didn’t make him as crazy as she was, why would he want to be a callow young man again?

Then, one day soon after their wedding, Christa told him she was pregnant.  Didn’t she know he hated children?  He’d thought it was only overindulgence in her sister’s excellent cooking that was making her put on weight.  And then she had triplets.  Three babies in the house!  How was he ever going to get a decent night’s rest?



Chris wasn’t too surprised to have to give birth with no husbandly support.  In fact, Steward didn’t even wake up.



Mamma had told her she could feel two heads, so she wasn’t alarmed when the contractions continued and Henry was followed by William.



Edmund was an unexpected bonus, though.



As they grew older, it became apparent that they weren’t the cutest toddlers in the history of the world…


(Henry)


(William)


(Edmund)

…which didn’t stop their grandmother, mother and aunt from doting on them.









Surprisingly, for a man who claimed to dislike children, Steward seemed quite fond of William – perhaps because he was the one who resembled his father most obviously.





During his sons’ childhood, Steward reached his elder birthday and Vicky made him a very special meal.







He asked why Christa and the boys couldn’t have some of this wonderful food too but apparently there were 'reasons'.  Something about a family curse.  Honestly, sometimes he wondered if they were all as potty as his mother-in-law.

Still, his sons were developing well.  They were clearly showing the good influence of their father’s genes.  Well, two of them were: Henry and Edmund grew up brilliant, hardworking and inseparable.



William was very much the odd one out.  He'd inherited his mother’s love of ballet…



…although he was rather fonder of Auntie Vicky’s cooking than was strictly desirable for an aspiring principal dancer.



He was given to playing noisy games, too – usually when Steward was trying to work.



Their friendship began to deteriorate.  It was becoming clear that young William had a temper – and, once teenage hormones were added, they often ended up yelling at each other.  At least he’d stopped all that prancing around – he now seemed to be keener on making music than dancing to it.  It was still infuriatingly noisy, though.  Why couldn’t they make silent guitars?  He could have a proper one when he could play some decent tunes.





Will was developing other interests, too.  He’d met Doris Tisdale on his very first day at school and their friendship was now taking on romantic overtones.



By the end of the school prom, they were boyfriend and girlfriend.

Hal and Ed hadn’t discovered girls yet.  They spent most of their spare time playing chess or reading.



Still, it paid off academically.  They kept being moved up to more senior classes and graduated from high school some time before Will.  They moved into the house next door, where there was no guitar practice to distract them from their studies, but they could still stay in touch with the family.

With the boys growing up, Chris decided it was time to think about her own life again – and to have another shot at sports stardom.  Following in Ana's footsteps, she applied for a new job.



Steward was getting older, although he refused to slow down or retire.  He lived just long enough to see Will graduate as valedictorian.  That evening, he was out in the garden when Grim came for him again.





Chris placed his urn in the family mausoleum, next to her gem collection.  She knew she’d see him again soon, just like Papa and Cecily.




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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 17 November with chapter 6)
« Reply #72 on: November 17, 2012, 02:06:00 PM »
Wow. A man's whole life (and second life) in one chapter. You sure take the quick approach. Good writing for sure.
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 17 November with chapter 6)
« Reply #73 on: November 17, 2012, 10:27:37 PM »
I really enjoyed reading from Steward's POV. We rarely think about the spouses of our dynasties and/or legacies. It was a refreshing change to hear Steward's thoughts on everything.
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Re: The Ghosts of Twinbrook (updated 17 November with chapter 6)
« Reply #74 on: November 17, 2012, 10:34:00 PM »
Steward sounds like a totally unpleasant person, but I felt bad for him. I don't think he was expecting such a bad second life.

I found the picture of William practicing ballet to be oddly amusing.

 

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