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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - What to Wish For
« Reply #1150 on: July 28, 2013, 09:11:32 AM »
Poor Ilene. It must be so boring to spend 25 years in a cell and only see your boyfriend every few years. I can't wait to see Ilene as an elder.
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - What to Wish For
« Reply #1151 on: July 28, 2013, 02:36:08 PM »
Arrrgh!!! Always a Cliff Hanger with you!  >:( :)

In my defense, it actually was the picture limit this time.

Great update. Happy:D Birthday to Illene. Yay, only few days remaining  to complete the dynasty. I am getting excited. Can't wait to see the completion of the dynasty.

One more day, to be exact  ;D .

I really like Pete.  The fact that he admits how hard things are make him all the more human.

Good! I was worried that it would ruin his "knight in shining armor" image, but it makes me like him more, too.

Poor Ilene. It must be so boring to spend 25 years in a cell and only see your boyfriend every few years. I can't wait to see Ilene as an elder.

Do you know how boring it might be for the Watcher? Hmph!
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« Reply #1152 on: July 28, 2013, 03:05:31 PM »
Chapter 129 - Angel's Wings

  I can hardly believe that I'm an elder. Wasn't it yesterday that I was kissing Pete goodbye? My head knows that it has been 50 years, but my heart feels so young that it can't be true.



  I only made myself an Everyday outfit--I won't really need anything more.



  Now I rock anxiously in my cell as Kara and Nicholas finish my museum pieces. But, eventually, the fast rocking slows to a gentle, quiet wave. I have no reason to be nervous, anxious, or even apprehensive. This is what I have waited all my life for.



  And so I am almost cheerful when Kara pages me, Code Complete. As I teleport up to the Ambrosia room, I begin to feel a rush of joy and--triumph.



  I learned the pattern of buttons to replicate Ambrosia long ago, and sparkles begin to fizz and condense into a plate of Ambrosia. In my research, I have seen thousands of pictures of the mysterious food, but nothing quite compares to the real thing. Slowly, I reach in and remove the plate from the white replicator, turned pink by my mother's pink torch.



  For the others, the Ambrosia arose emotions that transported them to the very beginning of their lives, so that they experienced all of the touch, taste, sight, smell, and sounds of the many years. I am different from the others. It all goes by in a rush, almost nothing more than a dancing rainbow.



  There is my Mother, in the rare moments where she is happy, looking down at me like I'm the only good part of her life. Here is the spray of the ocean water against our faces as we speed around in her boat. The soft sand cushioning me beneath the blanket. Then Pete--Pete is everywhere, laughing, talking, kissing, promising that he will be there for me forever.



  But, most of all, I see the ocean. The silver mist against silver water, so that sky is indistinguishable from waves. Enormous walls of water smashing on the rocks, causing sprays of droplets to fly into the air. The ocean that is soothing, yet tempestuous and thrilling.



  There has always been a part of me that I could not understand. Something otherworldly and mysterious. Now, as the colors bloom around me, I can feel that part seeping out of my skin, joining with the rainbow surrounding me.



Week 51, Day 5, 7:12 A.M.

  Suddenly, the colors are gone. I am changed. I am Immortal. And, finally, I am free.



  My tattoo is of angel's wings.



  We all come up to take our picture before it's time to leave.



  Aaaaaand . . . the ban on congratulations has been lifted  ;) .

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1153 on: July 28, 2013, 03:06:57 PM »
Please move to Completed Dynasty board.
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1154 on: July 28, 2013, 03:10:48 PM »
CONGRATULATIONS!!!  *confetti rains down*  It is so wonderful to see you completed it, though I have to say, it's very bittersweet as well.  Now what am I gonna read?  ;)

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1155 on: July 28, 2013, 03:10:59 PM »
Yay, azokka!! *confetti * congrats on an epic finish to an amazing dynasty! Can't wait to see where the epilogue takes us :)

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1156 on: July 28, 2013, 03:11:04 PM »
<claps hands wildly> You did it! Congratulations on a fantastic story and a wonderful accomplishment!



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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1157 on: July 28, 2013, 03:26:56 PM »
CONGRATULATIONS!

I was nearly crying reading the last bit. It was so emotional. Reading the story made me really attached to the characters, and seeing their group photo brings back nostalagic memories to me!
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1158 on: July 28, 2013, 03:30:29 PM »
Yay! I love this story, and I'm so happy you finished! ;D I really loved all the characters personalities, and I can't believe it's about to end.
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1159 on: July 28, 2013, 03:33:53 PM »
A million and one congradulations Azokka. The Immortals are finally free.   ;D
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1160 on: July 28, 2013, 03:46:47 PM »
Congratulations! This was such an awesome dynasty. Really well done. c:

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« Reply #1161 on: July 28, 2013, 03:50:26 PM »
CONGRATULATIONS!  ;D
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1162 on: July 28, 2013, 04:18:09 PM »
Congrats on finishing such a great dynasty.

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1163 on: July 28, 2013, 05:15:12 PM »
Yay! Well done for completing such a great dynasty! It was a wonderful read, and I hope this isn't the last we'll see of the elysi. They're a wonderful bunch.
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1164 on: July 28, 2013, 05:20:09 PM »
Wooo  Congratulations, It doesn't seem too long ago that you started and now you're finished.  ;D

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1165 on: July 28, 2013, 05:42:53 PM »
Congratulations Azokka for  completing the dynasty. *confeti* This story/dynasty was great to read. And even if the dynasty is complete, I hope you are continuing the story. Looking forward for the epilogue.
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1166 on: July 28, 2013, 05:55:33 PM »
I cheered out loud whn I learned this was finished. Congratulatins! I've enjoyed every update.

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« Reply #1167 on: July 28, 2013, 06:17:13 PM »
Oh my gosh. Best. Ending. I thought I would want more, but that update where she rocked in her room for 50 years--although, shouldn't that have made her 90? Maybe I read it wrong--it was like a scene from a movie. I could picture it so clearly--and it was amazingly poignant. Loved it. Well done, and congratulations on finishing against all odds!
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1168 on: July 28, 2013, 06:38:46 PM »

Yippie! And congratulations on finishing. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading every second of this dynasty, and I'm excited to see how you wrap it all up! Poor Ilene Azzoka, such a sad and lonely life. The shot of her by the ocean really was gorgeous.

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1169 on: July 28, 2013, 06:41:43 PM »
Congratulations!! Hooray!! I'm so excited! Well done ;D ;D
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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1170 on: July 28, 2013, 07:21:16 PM »
Yay!! Congratulations! I'm going to miss the Elysi's though. I've become attached to them and I don't want to see them go. :'(  I guess I'll just have to download them all from the swap shop!

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« Reply #1171 on: July 28, 2013, 08:21:48 PM »
Way to go, Azzoka!  Congratulations, and thank you for this wonderful story!

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1172 on: July 28, 2013, 08:30:00 PM »
Congratulations!

Even though I haven't commented on your story, I have been reading it and I'm pleased you've successfully gotten through.

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Re: Elysi Immortal Dynasty - Complete
« Reply #1173 on: July 28, 2013, 10:39:01 PM »
Congratulations! I've been an avid reader for a long time and I'm so glad you finished! I hope there's an epilogue coming soon.

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« Reply #1174 on: July 29, 2013, 12:02:54 AM »
Congratulations on finishing the dynasty! Although I have not commented here, I have been reading and enjoying your story.