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« Reply #15 on: May 01, 2013, 12:47:56 PM »
I know who the old woman is now ;D
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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #16 on: May 01, 2013, 01:09:35 PM »
Are you guys sure you know?  I'm really good at keeping secrets.

Anytime any of you can PM with guesses and I won't confirm or deny but hey it's always fun to get PMs.

Thank you everyone for the wonderful comments and excitement.  It really warmed me coming online to find them especially since I woke up feeling really bad. 

@Iless - yeah they are fourth generation townie.    Eight original townies from Sunset Valley are a part of their genetic line.   You can even see some of each person in the two twins I think.   

As for which twin will get chosen.  I'm not sure I even know right now.  I hate making decisions.   ;D

Just as an FYI for you guys - this story will obviously have less priority over  The Race but sometimes a girl just has to go with a gut feeling which is what this was.  I had an idea and suddenly the pieces were right there for me to follow.     Needless to say *fiendishly delighted moodlet* is now active.    More to come soon.   

@Rhoxi - it was hard to choose immortal over life states for this one then it just hit me when I was talking to someone that an Immortal dynasty was the way to go.  I really like the life states dynasty with it's freedoms but the immortal dynasty is something I played for over two years so yeah it feels good to be doing another one. 
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« Reply #17 on: May 01, 2013, 01:23:40 PM »
This sounds really interesting. I couldn't possibly make a guess, but I will make sure to bookmark!

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« Reply #18 on: May 01, 2013, 01:30:35 PM »
*excited moodlet* this will be good!

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« Reply #19 on: May 01, 2013, 01:44:48 PM »
Awesome start! I can't wait for the next update

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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #20 on: May 01, 2013, 02:07:50 PM »
The Sim Bin

Pretty soon the darkness began to fade as my eyes adjusted.  Was I now there?  I could see a door in front of me so I tried it.  It opened easily so it's not like I was locked in this space.

I stepped out into a corridor that was full of soft lighting there were lots of doors all over the walls with weird and strange creatures mingling about.   One young man said something about having to go.  He was headed for the Exchange.  He went into a room full of light and coding then disappeared before the door had even shut. 

I was utterly lost.   Was this the Sim Bin that grandmother had talked about in the book?  An official looking guy with a hot dog suit on came into the hall holding a megaphone.

"Alright - Dan Flame?   I'm looking for a Dan Flame!  Your ride is waiting behind door number 3468.  Dan Flame to door 3468.  Also, anyone seen Colt Brooks?  Got a private message for him from Sunlit Tides.   If anyone figures out what door he's hiding behind, send him to the front desk!"

The hot dog suit put down the megaphone and gave me a raised eyebrow.  "You're new.    Have no clue what's going on huh?"

I shook my head.  "Is this the Sim Bin?"  He laughed and used the megaphone to point at all the doors.  "They're all Sim Bins, kid.  Most people don't leave the one they're in.   What door did you come from so I know where to put you back?  I'm surprised when you arrived you didn't get greeted."

"But I came into a dark room and I don't know what door it is anymore."

Hot dog became confused.  "A dark room?  The only dark room in this place is janitor's closet.  What's your name kid?"

"Sunset.   My grandmother sent me here."

Sudden understanding lit his eyes as he wrapped his fingers about my bicep.  "I know exactly where to send you kid.  Just don't get lost."   

With that he lead, almost dragged me towards some sort of people conveyor belt in the center of one large corridor.  We kept walking past people but it made us go like five times faster than if we had just been walking along the hall.  We hopped off at the end of the long hallway and stepped into another common room type thing with doors all around.   There were a lot of people I recognized hanging around.   I saw several versions of all four of my great grandmothers.  I saw various other versions of my great grandfathers, too.   Then there were other people I recognized from their memories and videos.     

"What is this place?"

"Sunset Valley mixer.   Every now and then they all sneak out of their rooms to talk about things they've done.  Dynasties. legacies, and stuff for fun.  You know."
 
"Not really." 

"Oh right.  Well just through here then."   He once again started leading me but this time it was around the crowd.  I couldn't believe just how many there were.   I could see five Agnes's all standing near the edge talking about how no one ever uses spice brown to their liking.   It was when I looked past them that my feet actually stopped moving.    My parents were there!  They were dressed in the clothes from their wedding picture but it was them.


I'd know them anywhere.  The hot dog pulled at my arm muttering something about not now.  He was right of course.  What would I say to them?  That I believed what Grandma had wrote so I was doing it?  They always thought it was weird that I spent so much time with her anyway.   They'd thought she had been a little batty.   Of course, I could see them talking to at least two versions of her right then so I wasn't sure what to think.   I decided it was best to keep following hot dog. 

Finally he brought me to a door and used a key ring I hadn't seen before to open it up.  He turned on the light inside and looked back at me.    "This is your stop kid.   You're on your own and try to not fail or get into any trouble.   I'll see if I can find a way to sneak your book in there sometime soon ok?  Just try to remember the names she left for you.    Oh and Good luck."   

That's when I got pushed into the lighted room.  I went to ask a question but I had already lost him.   I was doing that travelling thing again.   At least this time there was some light.
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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #21 on: May 01, 2013, 02:26:31 PM »
Ahh, another Rica story!

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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #22 on: May 01, 2013, 02:40:02 PM »
WOW, Can those guys not stay put where I put them?? LOL

I love it Rica!! I can't wait to find out more!!

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« Reply #23 on: May 01, 2013, 03:23:52 PM »
Oh I love it! I'm sure there's a Riverview mixer somewhere too :P

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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #24 on: May 01, 2013, 03:35:36 PM »
I really like how you tell stories, Rica. I can learn new things here :)
And I am totally clueless... when reading yours. I thought that I...
Well... will try get along with the next chapter though, until "aha" moment found.
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« Reply #25 on: May 01, 2013, 05:05:03 PM »
I think I see some Bella in the man... And Pauline  Wan, an umnamed Sekemoto or Zelda Mae in the mother. (All in the eye shape.)
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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #26 on: May 01, 2013, 05:32:24 PM »
What a brilliant concept. Really taking it beyond the obvious there. I take it back, I thought the old lady was great-grandmother. If she's grandmother then I don't know who she is. It's so fitting that the official guy is wearing a hot dog suit ;D
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« Reply #27 on: May 01, 2013, 05:55:28 PM »
Yay, a new Rica dynasty! I love the concept of using a descendant of townies.
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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #28 on: May 01, 2013, 06:09:50 PM »
Definitely some Steel genes in the father! The mothers facial structure...I can't place it...:/
I love the way you described the Sim Bin.

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Re: Revenge - A Dynasty Served Luke-Warm
« Reply #29 on: May 01, 2013, 08:00:27 PM »
Ahh, another Rica story!

*bookmark*

Thank you.

WOW, Can those guys not stay put where I put them?? LOL
I love it Rica!! I can't wait to find out more!!
They never do.   You know how it is.  If Artie wasn't busy, I'm sure he'd be hopping around, too.

Oh I love it! I'm sure there's a Riverview mixer somewhere too :P

Oh I bet there is.  I can name just a few of who would be there, too.

I really like how you tell stories, Rica. I can learn new things here :)
And I am totally clueless... when reading yours. I thought that I...
Well... will try get along with the next chapter though, until "aha" moment found.

Thanks Eld.  It's ok to be clueless.  In time all answers will be revealed.

I think I see some Bella in the man... And Pauline  Wan, an umnamed Sekemoto or Zelda Mae in the mother. (All in the eye shape.)

I knew if I showed the parents people would be able to start guessing.  Each parent has four original townies in them.  I'll show pictures of their parents eventually, too.

What a brilliant concept. Really taking it beyond the obvious there. I take it back, I thought the old lady was great-grandmother. If she's grandmother then I don't know who she is. It's so fitting that the official guy is wearing a hot dog suit ;D

The old lady was the great grandmother.  The twins call her grandma like I did my great grandmother.  Sorry for confusion.  And yeah the official guy had to wear a hot dog suit.

Yay, a new Rica dynasty! I love the concept of using a descendant of townies.

Thank you.   Yep 8 original Sunset families all come together into two gorgeous kids. 

Definitely some Steel genes in the father! The mothers facial structure...I can't place it...:/
I love the way you described the Sim Bin.

I think once everyone starts to hear who the immortals are it will become one of those.. "Why didn't I see that before!" kind of things.  Or that's the plan.  I hope it works out that way.

The Sim Bin idea came to me right at the end.  I've used it before in my Lost Little Gnome Legacy but not in so many words as much as just the room she was in.   I like to think that just because they're in the Sim bin they're not just waiting.  You know?




I think I've decided that I'm going to name the eight immortals after the original townies. So one of the right guesses is about to be revealed as Simon or Prudence take on their new personality and their new life.   Good idea or would you guys rather wait for me to decide it's time to bring in next gen.
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