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The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 6
« on: July 28, 2013, 03:33:32 PM »
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A story possibly fraught with Potter references, I am training Dobbinsworth, a free elf, to be my butler. He is a very enthusiastic fellow.

Here is the chapter list, you can find the most recent chapter here.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2013, 03:35:28 PM »
Chapter 1

This here, this is Dobbinsworth. And I am training him to be my personal house elf. A free elf.


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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth
« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2013, 04:43:08 PM »
Wow he really lookes a lot like a house elf from harry potter! Except that he has no wrinkles haha. Especially those big green eyes are very well done ^^
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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth
« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2013, 04:53:29 PM »
Thank you! I based him off of the chapter illustrations, rather than the movie versions, because it was easier, and more attractive.

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2013, 06:04:41 PM »
Chapter 2

Expectations

I have decided upon my expectations of a good butler for me.

1. Always ready to dance, and good at it too!



2. Ready to carry on an interesting conversation. (Logic)



3. Good at cooking something besides the house. And Mac'n'Cheese.



4. Able to fix and upgrade my home. (Handiness)



5. A sense of independence!



Somehow I get the feeling that this update was about something besides what a great dancer he is...
Oh well! You'll get to see him dance a lot!

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 2
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2013, 04:26:55 AM »
haha nice ^^. I'm wondering, the 'I' person in this story is that you or is there some other sim in the house we haven't seen yet? e.e
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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 2
« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2013, 08:36:48 AM »
"I" is my simself.

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 2
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2013, 12:01:18 PM »
Hooray for house elf dance sequences!  Nice job, Squirt  :=)

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 2
« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2013, 10:04:32 PM »
Chapter 3

I decided Dobbinsworth ought to be social. It wouldn't do to have him be a hermit. I need him to do my shopping for me!
So I sent him to the Rodeo Go Go Bar, and as usual took to many screenshots.


"My precious! My precious!

So, he met this lady, I think her name was Singh something, I don't recall. But she and Dobbinsworth made fast friends. Maybe it wasn't a good idea to make him a daredevil, maybe rebellious would be more suited to him. What's that purple stuff? Wait, Dobbinsworth, No!



I know what you're thinking, "Hagnes?" but no, it is not the infamous Agnes. Just a random unfortunate townie.



I took some shots of this guy on the bull, maybe he's enjoying this too much...



And like many before him, Dobbinsworth practiced his posing. Because that is all a pool table is ever useful for, right?



For some reason I decided that Dobbinsworth should be better at playing music with a pool table than with a guitar. Because I said so. He made some money off of it also!



I heard some whooping and hollering, and found a woman in labor.


"Okay, now think. Who planted this one?"

I decided that perhaps it was time dear Dobbinsworth learned the facts of life. He escorted the woman to the hospital, where she gave birth to her son. He got a nifty "It's a boy!" moodlet off of it too.


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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #9 on: August 03, 2013, 11:41:18 PM »
Did Dobbinsworth impregnate that young woman?  Must say, a Dob-boo would be rather awesome...

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #10 on: August 04, 2013, 12:10:19 AM »
No, he'd never met her before. This was only the second day in game. I just clicked on the woman and there was the option to take her to the hospital. But I will consider Dobboos! ;D

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #11 on: August 04, 2013, 03:57:41 AM »
Another story by Swirl-Girl. I found this story now when I open unread topics. Great story so far. And since it is based on Harry Potter, I will really like this story. I am a great fan/reader of Harry Potter. And so, this story is Bookmarked and I will be reading and following this story:)

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #12 on: August 04, 2013, 08:14:11 AM »
Yay! ;D

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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2013, 06:21:56 AM »
Random labours are always fun :P.
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Re: The Training of Dobbinsworth: Chapter 3
« Reply #14 on: September 01, 2013, 08:49:12 PM »
Hahaha! I love this story!!! Mainly because he is a good dancer, all stories are better with a dance sequence and random women in labor! P.S I am in favor of Dobboos.