Author Topic: Miraj's Mission  (Read 1025 times)

Offline karlissa

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Miraj's Mission
« on: May 27, 2014, 03:54:01 PM »

I'm Miraj Alvi, I was minding my own business when I heard a voice.

A Laptop appeared in my hands and then I was told to look behind my home until I saw something that wasn't right.


I saw VJ giving Dad a very hard time but that was nothing unusual sadly.

I soon found a ladder leading underground that was not there before.

I went in and found a room with nothing but an easel in it. Then I heard the voice again, telling me to open the door.

I went through a dark narrow corridor and soon found...

A bookshelf, I had watched enough TV to know where this was leading.

Then the voice spoke to me.

"I am Karlissa and I am the watcher of this realm, though I am a watcher I can't control everything, I need you to help me and you seem to be the perfect person for the job"

I asked "Why me?"

He Replied "You have the good trait and the neat trait, they will lead you to spot something off. This basement will be your mission headquarters and also can you report your mission status on that laptop, I'm sure the other watchers would appreciate being informed of what is going on in the realm you live in. I have a few tips for you for now, make sure to meet officer Keaton and keep a good eye on your household funds Miraj, I know you can do this"

Then silence...




I explored the room that would be my mission headquarters.

I hope I do not disappoint though I must question why I have to check the household finances though and I don't get why he doesn't just tell officer Keaton what's going on!

I guess I'll find out in time. I guess I'd better clean up whatever messes VJ has left behind this time. He does tend to rummage through our trash, I wonder why?
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Offline RaiaDraconis

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2014, 04:13:41 PM »
Oooh, I'm already loving this! Miraj deserves the spotlight for once. :)

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Offline Audren

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2014, 04:40:11 PM »
I didn't realize teens and adults could fight each other. That's something new to me. I also really like Miraj, so I'll be reading this regularly.  :D

Offline Magz from Oz

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2014, 10:40:05 PM »
I really like Miraj so I'm bookmarking this.  Great start to your story karlissa.  I'll be reading but may not always comment.
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Offline Lisa46

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2014, 11:37:50 PM »
Oooooh, what's the mission? I love the Alvis so of course I will watch. Miraj make done of the most beautiful teens- ever.

Offline karlissa

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #5 on: August 19, 2014, 11:13:31 AM »
I'm sorry but my computer is bust, I should be able to continue soon though when I get a new computer.
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Offline Nutella

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Re: Miraj's Mission
« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2015, 09:28:07 PM »
I'm moving this to the Stories Graveyard due to inactivity.  @karlissa, you can revive this story by contacting a moderator.



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