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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #575 on: February 01, 2011, 10:53:45 PM »
Congratulations on wrapping up!  I'll miss the Mans.
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #576 on: February 01, 2011, 11:11:20 PM »
Ambrosia and Metro Man for the win! Congrats on finishing your Dynasty!
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #577 on: February 02, 2011, 02:38:36 AM »
Congratulations on an amazing story.

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #578 on: February 02, 2011, 10:57:48 AM »
Congrats on completing the Dynasty, Metro!

Oh, and may your video card RIP.   :'(

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #579 on: February 02, 2011, 03:44:28 PM »
Congratulations! That was an excellent ending! Metro, you should be proud of yourself. :)
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #580 on: February 02, 2011, 04:08:35 PM »
Congratulations Metro :D
Your dynasty was awesome... I laughed out loud at every update... I love your sense of humor :)
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #581 on: February 02, 2011, 04:15:22 PM »
Congratulations Metro :D
Your dynasty was awesome... I laughed out loud at every update... I love your sense of humor :)
Do you want a new video card for Mans?  ;) It will be sad here without Mans and without Dreamweavers...

I totally agree! What am I going to do with my free time now?  ;)
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #582 on: February 02, 2011, 06:59:24 PM »
Go Crazy! I mean No Crazy! I mean... well, I do not know how to feel. Congrats Metro, the Mans are the most funny dynasty to ever exist.

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #583 on: February 02, 2011, 07:12:19 PM »
Metro what a great dynasty and a great story, full of humor and memorable characters - bravo! 

And the ending was absolutely perfect - what else would Crazy do but something - well - crazy?   ;D

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« Reply #584 on: February 02, 2011, 07:42:35 PM »
Golly, what can I say that hasn't been said already?!  ;D
Awesome ending, absolutely hilarious, and completely unexpected (in terms of Crazy's Insaneness, I mean).
I'll miss the Mans, but especially Crazy. He stole the show! And literally at the end....goodbye Recipe, Queenie, Girly, Crazy, Sporty, Sound, EeyoreWrite, and Metropolis Man! I'll miss you!

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #585 on: February 03, 2011, 02:39:25 AM »
Looks like you keep your Manhood! ;D  Congratulations Metro!  :D
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #586 on: February 03, 2011, 08:20:53 AM »
Thanks for the nice comments everyone. I had several different endings in mind. After Metro ate Ambrosia one option was to have the whole family get in a car, then I would have hit the special effects and they would have gone through a time warp and ended up in Bridgeport to start anew. Another option was to basically follow through with what I hinted at in the ending I chose and have Metro and Angelique walk off in the Sunset together with the reader knowing that I was going to make them young again to start their own family. My final idea was to shift the focus back on Recipe and have him experience some special effects of some kind to throw him back into a new Sunset Valley where he meets Agnes again.

The ending I did end up using came to me literally an hour before I penned it. I chose it mainly because it had humor whereas the other endings did not. The others would have been nice and might have made some of you say "awwww, how sweet" but I looking for one final smile. ;)

I'll miss the Mans a lot. Recipe was probably my favorite. Since it all started with him I had the most time to develop his character, but all of them had their own personalities come through via the wacky dialogue. I know Crazy was a forum favorite and he was a very close 2nd for me.

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #587 on: February 03, 2011, 08:27:15 AM »
but I looking for one final smile. ;)
You definitely got that Metro! I don't know which one was my favorite, Crazy was well crazy but I think I liked EeyoreWrite best. Probably cause everytime I saw her name, I thought of Winnie the Pooh!  ;D

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #588 on: February 03, 2011, 09:57:11 AM »
I've just been getting caught up on the last few episodes of the story.  Trust you, Metro, to come up with a Crazy end to your story!  Perfect.  Congratulations on finishing your dynasty and giving us a funny, touching story.
 
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #589 on: February 03, 2011, 10:57:20 PM »
Congratulations Metro!
I will miss reading this and laughing my head off :)

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #590 on: February 03, 2011, 11:18:49 PM »
Congratulations on finishing Metro!
I just read through all of your Dynasty last night and today :D

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« Reply #591 on: February 04, 2011, 09:49:29 PM »
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The others would have been nice and might have made some of you say "awwww, how sweet" but I looking for one final smile.
As Esther1981 said, you definitely succeeding in getting a lot of smiles. I always believe it's better to end with a bang and good ol' laugh than a lot of people just saying "awww....how cute/sweet". Not saying the latter isn't a good way to end a story of course!  :D

Congrats again!

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #592 on: February 05, 2011, 09:24:07 AM »
Your ending was a reaction to Pam's ending.
Pam: Awww! Carina and Chris are finally back together!
Metro: Haha! Classic Crazy

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #593 on: February 09, 2011, 03:21:55 PM »
Clever way to wrap it up, Metro. I'll remember how you used images in this one if I ever do a story for the guide again :P

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #594 on: February 11, 2011, 12:37:03 PM »
Congratulations on completion. Really enjoyed what you shared, just kind of sad that I wasn't along for the ride but kind of glad too as I got to read it all in one go without any waiting. 

Especially enjoyed hearing about Metropolis Man teenage years and, like many others, thought Crazy Man was really quite cool - especially how he ended things  :D

Hope you'll share some more things, liking your quirky sense of humour.

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #595 on: February 12, 2011, 11:27:11 PM »
Kudos, Metro!  You done good, man and it was a terrific way to go out with a .....a....fuzz out?
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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #596 on: February 16, 2011, 03:09:08 AM »
Congratulations on finishing the challenge and thanks for a great story, Metro! Crazy sims will never be the same again after Crazy Man. :D Or hotpants, for that matter. Or any of the other things you've so cleverly joked about. :D

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #597 on: February 16, 2011, 08:28:44 PM »
Congrats Man!!! That was one awesome, unique ending!! You rock!

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Re: The Man Dynasty 5.0 — This Time it's for Total Manhood (Finished)
« Reply #598 on: February 17, 2011, 01:12:11 PM »
OMG, Metro, I don't know what you do for a living but I sure hope it puts your creativity and sense of humor to use!  I've had to take a break from reading quite a few times because I was guffawing loudly in inappropriate places or at very real risk of wetting my pants/shooting coffee out of my nose.

Thank you for some of the best, most uncontrollable laughs I have had in a looooong time!

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« Reply #599 on: February 17, 2011, 01:23:16 PM »
OMG, Metro, I don't know what you do for a living but I sure hope it puts your creativity and sense of humor to use!  I've had to take a break from reading quite a few times because I was guffawing loudly in inappropriate places or at very real risk of wetting my pants/shooting coffee out of my nose.

Thank you for some of the best, most uncontrollable laughs I have had in a looooong time!
Hehe that's Metro. Many occasions I had mountain dew coming out instead of going down lol. I learned NEVER drink (or eat) while reading the Man's!  ;D ;D About the laughing part, well it's a good thing my family didn't come in the room and had the TV up loud haha.