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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #15 on: December 24, 2010, 12:57:05 PM »
Ok.  You wanted some criticism so here it is.  DON"T CHANGE A THING!  I am having more fun reading this story than you can ever imagine.  I have a terrible sense of humor and Billi just tickles me.  And she has such a fine "manor".  lol
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #16 on: December 25, 2010, 03:06:33 AM »
Ok.  You wanted some criticism so here it is.  DON"T CHANGE A THING!  I am having more fun reading this story than you can ever imagine.  I have a terrible sense of humor and Billi just tickles me.  And she has such a fine "manor".  lol

Aw, you're to kind Joria! I'm having a ball writing it, so I hope it's okay. I never planned to have the pacing so s-l-o-w. It just happened, and I hope it's not too boring...
Anyway, keep the commments coming, it makes me so proud! :D
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #17 on: December 25, 2010, 07:14:00 AM »
I think your legacy is so funny keep up the good work.

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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #18 on: December 26, 2010, 06:51:47 PM »
It's Boxing Day.  hint, hint
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #19 on: December 26, 2010, 07:35:15 PM »
Huh? I don't get it...
It's the 27th over here, anyway, but if you have somthing in mind let me know! ;)
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« Reply #20 on: December 26, 2010, 09:49:08 PM »
What's Boxing Day, again?
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #21 on: December 26, 2010, 11:13:48 PM »
Well, it's the day after Christmas, and a long time ago (Not sure when) people would put presents and food in boxes to give to poor people. Charity at it's best! :D
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #22 on: December 26, 2010, 11:14:49 PM »
Ah. Darn, I missed it! >:(
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« Reply #23 on: December 26, 2010, 11:24:49 PM »
Um, well nobody really does anything on Boxing Day, anyway. Mainly just eating leftovers ;)
So you don't know what Joria's talking about, then?
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #24 on: December 27, 2010, 02:16:21 AM »
Alright! On we go-
Chapter 4-Spending Time With Shayne

SUNDAY


And call him she did.
Billi- Yeah, you should come over. Right now. You know, I live right next to the Lock Ness Monster's holiday home.
Shayne- Um, I'm at work, so...
Billi hung up on him, and and a minute later...


She was failing at darts. But noneless, Shayne headed over.


Is a caption necessary? I think not.


For some reason, Billi could not ask him to go steady, so instead she settled on learning his traits, with the Observant reward. He's a Charismatic, Brave, Clumsy, Computer Whizz. And he's Easily Impressed. Well, that explains a lot.


By the time Billi got home, it was already well into night time, so there was only time for a quick bit of toilet salad and a shower.


And a call to Tessie, telling her about the days events. Pretty sure she doesn't care.

MONDAY

As usual, Billi jumps in the carpool the next morning, and heads of to work. There is defiantly a promotion in sight.


Told you so.


Billi rushes off to harass Tessie because she completed an opportunity when talking to Shayne. It was to use Get To Know.


After that completely pointless excise, Billi heads home to buy a sculpting thingy. (In case you forgot, she's a Savvy Sculptor)


And by that night, she's made a lovely... Chair.


The Manor is at it's finest!
Sorry about the fact this update was so long coming. :P More comments make Billi and me happy!  ;D
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #25 on: December 27, 2010, 02:19:26 AM »
Nice! Glad Billi got the man. ;D
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #26 on: December 27, 2010, 02:50:43 AM »
Um, well nobody really does anything on Boxing Day, anyway. Mainly just eating leftovers ;)
So you don't know what Joria's talking about, then?
Not a clue. ???
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #27 on: December 27, 2010, 03:11:08 AM »
Makes two of us... Well, I'm sure she's stop by and enlighten us soon.
Hope you enjoyed the update!
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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #28 on: December 27, 2010, 04:08:30 AM »
You said you would have an update on boxing day Joria was telling you it was boxing day to remind you that you promised an update. At least I think that was it.
When I was a child I would cry every boxing day.When my mum asked me why I said because its the longest time ever till next christmas.

Great update by the way.

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Re: The (Extremely Revised) Tunic Legacy
« Reply #29 on: December 27, 2010, 04:35:57 AM »
Thanks ratchie, I got it now!  :D
Glad you guys liked it, you don't think it'll get boring as the pacing is so slow? I never thought of Boxing day like that, but when you think about it, it is such a long time til next Christmas :(
EDIT- Sorry, Joria, for me wondering about your hint. Silly me! *Smacks palm to head*

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