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Chapter 23: Brooke's Bff
« Reply #105 on: November 30, 2014, 03:26:05 PM »
I've lost a load of photo's So we lost some of brookes childhood  :'(

But she aged, without a party since no one wanted a fuss!

Brooke: Arn't I pretty?
Red Bella: HEYYYY!!



Von: Yay you got rid of the red hair!!
Bella: I love red, But I'm the only kid with brown hair, So I'm going to show off!
Jack: Omnomnomnom



Brooke: Gee Von, You lost my photo's of my cake, GOOD JOB!
Von: Sorry, But come on, You didn't want a party
Brooke: I'm not liking this look
Von: I'll change it later!

( Brooke tried a more classical look but it didn't suit her character at all )



Lenny: Wow, Brooke you look good!
Brooke: Lenny! Lenny Holiday? Didn't you have braces and a bowl cut?
Lenny: Ahh, My dad and mum don't have good parental skills, I mean my sister is a hippy!
Brooke: I think  you aged well
Von: He's a Keeper...



They became Bff's ...



And they went on a date to the museum....







Von: Brooke your a lil romantic sim at heart!

Brooke: Happy birthday bro!
Jack: Love you Uni!



Bella: I'll teach you important lessons...
1: Don't let Dad Dress you
2: Don't listen to Von
3: Marry a rich man

Jack: A rich... Man?


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Re: The Voncreep Legacy : Gen 2 Joe: Chapter 27: The lost return??
« Reply #106 on: November 30, 2014, 09:53:56 PM »
Awww, I liked Bella as a red head.. although she is a pretty sim no matter what I guess! I am loving Brooke though - and the handsome grown up Lenny! Welcome back MrVoncreep!



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Re: The Voncreep Legacy : Gen 2 Joe: Chapter 27: The lost return??
« Reply #107 on: December 01, 2014, 07:43:55 AM »
Wow, I'm loving the story so far! I'm so excited to see what the boys look like as teenagers!
I didn't fall! I simply attacked the floor with my awesome ninja skills!

“We believe in ordinary acts of bravery, in the courage that drives one person to stand up for another. Becoming fearless isn't the point. That's impossible. It's learning how to control your fear, and how to be free from it.”
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Re: The Voncreep Legacy : Gen 2 Joe: Chapter 27: The lost return??
« Reply #108 on: December 10, 2014, 09:02:21 AM »
Update coming soon

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Re: The Voncreep Legacy
« Reply #109 on: June 11, 2015, 12:21:29 PM »
I'm moving this to the Stories Graveyard due to inactivity.  @MrVoncreep - you can revive this story by contacting a moderator.

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Re: The Voncreep Legacy
« Reply #110 on: October 05, 2016, 01:18:32 PM »
Reviving story as per author's request.

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Re: The Voncreep Legacy Remastered!
« Reply #111 on: October 06, 2016, 08:29:17 AM »
Hello guys!

Its finally time, I've tweaked the original posts and now I'm going to start adding whole new ones!

the only problem being some photos have been lost in the 2 years since I started this, but we will finally get to see the Voncreeps in all there glory

the next update will be out later today!



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Chapter 24: New Beginning
« Reply #112 on: October 06, 2016, 09:16:15 AM »
Its been almost 2 years since I started this, And now we will finally carry on, ALOT of photos are lost and some may be really out of order.
I will try put them in a proper order for story sake but please know that the next few chapters might be rocky
 
Preparing for the big birthday party

Alice: I'm making some garlic noodles
Trey: I'll make a cake
Von: I'll make uhhhh jokes!





Trey: MMMMM cake
Von: Happy birthday
Trey: Wait i'm turning into an elder?

The boys look cute as teens





Von: Dance like the reaper is chasing you
Summer: Who's the reaper?



So Trey became a real silver fox in his old age but he's still busy as ever
Trey: unlike you and updates eh?



The kids had a quick homework sesh, then Bella made them all some drinks




Joe and Jack went to see some people in there class at school

Joe: Winnie did you make these burgers they're great
Winnie: Yeah * snort * haha I uhhh I cook alot since my parents aren't very good at it
Joe: Well your mum does go to space alot astronaut food isnt too good I guess
Winnie: Yeah, you'd think that being the daughter of Liberty lee, sim nations greatest astronaut would be fun but its actually pretty terrible
Joe: Yeah famous parents are tough mine are both painters
Winnie: Oh I forgot that you where a Voncreep, Wow I'd love to see what your house is like
Joe: Come on over bring your brother too



Felix: Hello, what a lovely house
Jack: Wow... Uhhh you, haha
Joe: Are you okay Jack?
Winnie: Felix your blushing whats wrong
 


Brooke finally found a style she liked



Brooke: Shhh I'm playing World of simcraft with Lenny
Von: Just gotta show the forum my little gamer



Trey looks pretty proud in this picture



Joe: Hey whats the answer to this question?
Jack: Joe its asking what your name is.....
Joe: Your name is Jack! The answer must be Jack



Joe: Hey uhhh Winnie I got ya something
Winnie: Oh my god Joe!, Thankyou



Spencer: Is Bella in?
Joe: Yeah who are you?
Spencer: I'm Bella's boyfriend I live up the road
Brooke: You're A kim lewis, And you're dating Bella?
Spencer: Yes?
Brooke and Joe: Bella's got a boyfriend, Bella's got a boyfriend, Bella's got a boyfriend !



Bella and Alice's birthday





People kept eating the cakes so Bella, Alice and spencer kept moving around



Bellas seems to be waiting for someone



Bella: Yo, Spencer... I well don't get the wrong idea but I really like you
Spencer: Bella, I really like you too



Bella: Will you marry me, or whatever?
Spencer: Yup!



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Chapter 25: Baby crazy, Career Ladies
« Reply #113 on: October 06, 2016, 10:54:41 AM »
Nothing really happened during there teen years, they all spent time on there own getting closer to there partners and learning skills

Bella started working out, along with going through levels in her career

Bella: Just gotta keep fit to stay ahead in my career
Von: It's good to see you've got drive
Bella: I wanna be ready to go out on my own
Von: Hey, don't talk about leaving I'll probably start tearing up



Brooke and Lenny have been getting on like a house on fire, they've exchanged promise rings

Von: Smile
Brooke: Aww I love it
Lenny: Use that the filter we look great
Brooke: You always look great
Lenny: Nawwwww



Brooke joined the Tech guru career, She always loved gaming so it was only natural



Bella has been working hard and from starting at level 3 from getting an A grade, Shes reached level 5 already!



Lenny came over to visit Brooke

Lenny: Hey watcher
Von: Call me Von
Lenny: Yeah, well when can me and Brooke move out together?
Brooke: Lenny sweetie I need to speak to you



Brooke: I really really love you Lenny, Will you marry me!
Von: Ohhhh gurlllllll
Lenny: Yes! Can we get a place together now??
Von: Once shes at level 10 in her career



Felix and Jack seem to be really ... Close freinds

Felix: When are we going to tell them
Jack: Just a little while



Spencer came over to visit Bella and well, One of the couples decided to... well
Von: Isn't that Alice's bed?
Alice: What's happening in my bed?
Von: You don't wanna know



Meanwhile the heir of the legacy decided to make some bbq food
Joe: HELP HELP HELP OH DEAR HELP
Von: Dear god someone help him I won't loose another legacy heir



Brooke: ** Joe you need to be careful
Von: Chestnuts roasting on an open fire



Bella: These burgers aren't to bad considering you nearly died making them
Joe: Well I've gotta get the ladies somehow
Von: I don't think girls are attracted to people who set themselves on fire



Bella: HEY GET OUT
Von: Is that a pregnancy test
Bella: VON GET OUT




Jack: Bro, I'll help you get in shape! Which girl is it you want to impress?
Joe: Well Uhhh its not... nevermind



Bella is looking alot bigger recently, maybe its because shes rising in her career so much
Bella: Well Von, Theres somthing we need to talk about...
Alice: Bella sweetie are you okay
Bella: Mum... I'm
Von: Just tell her Bella
Bella: Mum I'm pregnant

I didn't take many photos of Bella during her pregnancy but here's a cute one

Von: Happy birthday Jack and Joe
Joe: Uhh Von I need to speak to you
Jack: Hey Von did you invite Winnie over?
Von: Yes,yes don't worry what do you need Jack


Von: What are you upto ?
Jack: Practising for my new job as a writer
Von: Oh great!, what was it you needed to talk about







Felix: Are you going to tell him?
Jack: Yeah its time, Von I'm..
Von: You're gay? you know i've seen you two and its great you're a cute couple
Jack: Oh
Felix: See he doesn't care
Von: To be fair I was more bothered by Bella's red hair
Bella: Spoil sport



I'm sure everyone will be happy for Jack and Felix



A little family meeting to introduce Felix

Alice: Aww I'm so happy for you too, Felix you where such a cutey as a kid !
Bella: Jack why didn't you tell us sooner ?
Joe: Bro, Felix is like my other Bro, It's like.... Bromance



Bella: Oh one more thing I'm pregnant
Alice: WHATTTTTT
Von: We'd best end this here before things get alittle crazy

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Chapter 26: Goodbye Cowboy
« Reply #114 on: October 06, 2016, 02:42:21 PM »
Bella: I feel like a over emotional balloon
Brooke: Is the baby on the way?
Bella: I sure hope so



Bella: I feel like I'm going to explode 
Von: Atleast you're not on the fish taco's
Bella: I don't get it?
Von: Nothing 



Brooke must of been jealous of Bella starting a family because she called up Lenny to get her own Noobo



Brooke: I think I've rushed things a little bit
Von: Nah nooboos are great



Trey: I sense nooboos
Brooke: Dadddddddddddd
Trey: I may be grey haired but I'm gonna kick Lenny Holiday into next century



Bella: AHHHHHHHH DADDDDDDDDDDD
Alice: Close your legs Bella I cant be a granny yet!
Bella: Mum I swear to go this like sucker is getting out now
Trey: Yay nooboos!



Meet Blake Voncreep ( Kim-Lewis )

Bella: Awww you are not that gross
Von: Bella You aren't supposed to hold a kid by his shoulders
Bella: My baby my rules looser
Alice: NOOOOOOOOOO I'M MELTING I'M MELTING!! I can't be a granny!



 Not to be out done, Joe decided to move things along with Winnie
Joe: My sisters are having Nooboos and I want you! ..... Bro
Winnie: Ohhhhh Joe *snort* I love you !!!




Trey seems to be really enjoying old age, Grandkids and marriages

Trey: Go to sleep, go to sleep, go to sleep little nooboo



He was a great daddy and a great grandad

Trey: I'm not quite a Great granddad yet hahaha
Von: did you just make a Dad joke?
Trey: No I made a granddad joke !!
*Groan*



Trey and Alice both don't have much to do after reaching the top of there careers they, Make time for there family and for eachother and just paint to keep the family going for years



Blake aged up

Von: you grew up into a cute lil guy
Blake: Don't call me cute i'm manly
Von: Sure Blake



Trey is also keeping fit in his old age

Trey: Gotta keep fast to outrun the reaper
Von: I really hope you live forever




Alice was painting when suddenly Trey rushed into the room

Alice: Hey hot stuff! what're you running for
Trey: Mrs Alice... I
Alice: You haven't called me that in years Trey
Trey: I... I was thinking of when we met, when Von ran up to my house and made me come over. When I first laid eyes on you
Alice: Sweetie whats wrong??
Trey: Alice I'm so glad we met, I'm so glad we did all we did. I love you and our kids so much Alice, I really do
Alice: Trey... Trey don't do this
Von: Trey come on you can just drink another potion of youth
Trey No.... It's time guys...



Alice: Trey please don't go
Von: Alice please tell the reaper to stop



Bella: I heard crying what's happening?
Alice: Your dad he's
Bella: VON DO SOMETHING
Brooke: What.... DADDY
Jack and Joe tried to get him to get up but to no avail 





Grim: Trey Voncreep, It's time to go
Alice: Please don't take him we need him
Trey: All of you need to quit fussing... I'm fine, and you'll all be fine, Alice keep on painting and don't worry about me, Bella marry that Spencer boy before its too late, tell blake I love him, Brooke I'm sorry I can't help you with your little one on the way but I'll be there in spirit, Jack... Joe my boys, I want you two to look after your mother, and sister you hear me?
Von: Trey.... I'm going to really miss you
Trey: Aww shucks Von, thanks for letting me be in this story, thanks for everything
Von: Goodbye Cowboy



RIP Trey (Wollf) Voncreep



Note: For some reason Trey turned into a ghost before he performed the dying animation idk why.
One final time Farewell Trey

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Chapter 27: Flying the nest
« Reply #115 on: October 06, 2016, 05:00:21 PM »
After last part, The family are having moments to themselves

Joe: I really need you here Winnie, fancy coming to move in?
Winnie: You sure? I'd love to !



Alice and Brooke had some mother daughter bonding over some piano lessons, Another skill alice mastered over the years

Brooke: I miss day
Alice: We all do sweetie, we just gotta be ready for your baby !
Brooke: Yeah, I guess, I hope its a little girl
Alice: Either way I'm sure i'll love them



Alice spent the night crying herself to sleep



Brooke: Oh my I don't feel good this morning



Brooke: Ohh darn this hurts oww oww oww
Joe: Ewww is that a head ? an alien?
Brooke: Owwy oww

Welcome Evie Voncreep



Felix: Jack you wrote a story about me?
Jack: Yeah! I love you so its worth it!



Felix: I love you Jack you cutey
Jack: Stop being so soppy



And it's done Brooke reached level 10!

Brooke a E sports gamer



Bella isn't quite there in mixology because the career is so slow to climb



Brooke began to set up for her wedding and getting ready to move out

Von: Congrats Brooke!

I lost so many photos but This is Evie afew days later

Evie: Ewww a boy
Blake: Bite me blondey
Evie: I will use that violin to knock you out



Bella: Evie its fun to spend time with you Evie
Evie: Thanks auntie Bella, Here you be the mummy and i'll be the daddy
Blake: Mummmmm Evie glued my shoes to the floor
Evie: No I didn't
Bella: Blake don't lie Evie wouldn't do that

Alice is finally accepting that shes a grandma
Blake: Do ray me.... uh Von sucks
Alice: Great work, but don't insult the watcher or he'll make you old
Von: I'm not making you old, I'm just not stopping it




Von: Hey Evie what're you upto?
Evie: Killing Blakes sims
Blake: NOOOO Von stop her
Von: Evie you really are an evil sim
Evie: If you tell my mummy I'll make your life hell
* gulp  *



Due to Evie trying to burn the house down with Blake inside the two have been separated and gone to live with their dads, The girls will join
them tommorow once they're married !

Alice got herself a nice new Cupcake machine
Alice: I'm going to gain so much weight from this
Von: I'm sure everyone's going to 



Joes been climbing the career ladder too, Being level 6 in the Secret agent career



and Winnie decided to reward him
Joe: VON BRO LEAVE
Winnie: Come here Mr bond



Von: Winnie you might wanna slow down on the food, you're getting a little belly, Not that its a bad thing!
Winnie: I don't know whats going on i'm just getting fat even when I work out all day



Brooke: Hey mummy! I'm here ready for the party
Alice: Don't remind me!



Alice is playing some lovely music for her birthday party



Von: Jeez Joe slow down!
Joe: * Hick* what?



Von: You don't have to make your own cake, It's your birthday
Alice:  No,no I gotta keep active



Bella was supposed to be aging up today but...
Von: You've got a long life ahead Bella, I can't believe you're moving out today
Bella: Now Von don't get soppy



Von: Alice you didn't get the kids to come sing happy birthday?
Alice: I'm not really up for a big fuss Von
Von: Suit yourself



And just like that my founder reached elderhood



Happy birthday Alice!

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Re: The Voncreep Legacy Remastered!
« Reply #116 on: October 06, 2016, 05:27:50 PM »
Wow!  When you update you UPDATE!  Great story going on and I'm glad to see you are working on this.  Bookmarked!
What?  Grannies can't play games?
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Re: The Voncreep Legacy Remastered!
« Reply #117 on: October 06, 2016, 06:04:34 PM »
@Joria

After not actually posting a proper update for 2 years, I thought I'd give something special !
Hope you enjoy

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Chapter 28: Wedding Fever
« Reply #118 on: October 06, 2016, 06:50:24 PM »
Alice went to bed without even really talking to her kids I guess she just needs a moment to herself

Von: Alice, You okay gurl?
Alice: Not tonight Von...
Von: Alice...?



Bella: Come on ma ave a drink
Alice: Thanks sweetie, When is the party starting?
Bella: What party?
Alice: Brookes wedding, Von said he'd set it up
Brooke: VONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN YOU CAN'T THROW WEDDINGS WITHOUT MY CONSENT
Von: Shhhh bridezilla





First of the kids to get married Brooke and Lenny!

Lenny: I can't wait to finally start my life with you Brooke, You're the light of my life
Brooke: Shut up nerd, and kiss me
Von: Nawwwwwwww





Brooke had a quick potion of youth before leaving, gotta make sure she hangs around for awhile

Brooke: Gotta pop out the nooboos
Von: And stay alive for a long time!




Alice: Naww I'm so proud of you kids
Brooke: Love you mummy
Lenny: Love you too mummy in law







Alice: Bye baby
Brooke: Bye mum!
Lenny: I'll take great care of her Von
Von: Bye Brooke, You stay safe and look after Lenny will ya
Brooke: Bye Von, See you soon!



Brooke and Lennys new home along with Evie!
and word around town is shes expecting another



Congrats Mr and Mrs Holiday

Von: Whoa Winnie you're gonna pop !
Winnie: I'm trying to hold this nooboo in
Joe: Little nooboo hurry up







Trey: Woooooo I'm here to clean your plates wooooooooooo
Von: Trey you're back!



Winnie: ** you Trey my waters broke!
Trey: Woooooo nooboo heirs!!!!



Wnnie: AHHHHHH
Von: Is it a girl
Joe: Is it a plane?
Trey: Is it 2 spo0ky 4 u ?

Welcome to Victor Voncreep



Alice: Hello Jack dear
Jack: What's with the new outfit ma?
Alice: Well I'm getting on and I really liked this outfit

Gardening is Alice's newest passion





And Alice had a Ghostly visitor



There must be something in the air tonight



Alice: For old times sake?
Trey: Woooooooo hoooooo





To end this update we see Jack, who's been writing alot of books and never seems to leave his study



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Chapter 29: Winnie + Joe 4 eva !
« Reply #119 on: October 06, 2016, 07:15:30 PM »
Joe: Gotta get in shape for my wedding tommorow
Von: *drools at the booty*



Bella: Hey Joe care to join?
Alice: We can't sleep so we're dancing the night away
Joe: Sure girls!
Von: Just don't be too tired for tommorow



The next day

Winnie: Oh trey * Snort * you look so good in that suit
Joe: Broooooo... you are so beautiful
Von: *Tears up*





Bella's boss catered this event




Alice decided to pull out her wedding dress for the event



Alice: Making them a cake for the wedding
Von: You're so sweet, Hey you dyed your hair?
Alice: No this cakes sweet and I wanna look good for the photos it will be gone by tonight



Von: Brooookkkkkee
Brooke: Hey Von, Joe,Winnie the wedding was just beautiful
Winnie: Thanks sis, can I call you that?
Brooke: You're part of the family now Winnie!



Victor aged up and he's a charmer!
Alice: BLARGGHHHHHH




Winnie: Urgh this nooboo won't stop kicking!
Von: You've really popped since yesterday's wedding
Winnie: *snort*



Winnie is a real stunner even with her baby bumb




Kevin, Alices old stalkers granddaughter Alyssa is hanging around the lot
Alyssa: What I wasn't in the bush SHUT UP



Winnie: Pushhhh pusshhhhhh
Von: Practising for Nooboo 2?
Winnie you got it!



Even Alice is jogging

Von: Your next skill to max?
Alice: Maybe Von, maybe



Winnie is climbing through the astronaut career like no tommorow

Winnie: Pregnancy won't slow me down



Winnie: OHHHH OHHH my waters have broken!
Von: Please let it be a girl



Victor: I'm going to be a big brother?
Von: You sure are bud



Is that what I think it is?
Winnie: *sobs* Its a girl, a beautiful baby girl
Joe+Alice: AN HEIR



Welcome, Sherry Voncreep