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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 2
« Reply #15 on: April 28, 2012, 07:09:48 PM »
I am seriously in love with this story! The topic is fascinating and the whole thing is intriguing. Way to go!

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 2
« Reply #16 on: April 29, 2012, 08:13:26 AM »
Jamie's Diary: Entry 3

Me and Skip decided it was time to lose weight, finally! We both worked out for hours in front of the TV and I lost so much weight, it's unbelievable!

The next day Skip & Sasha became teens, they both look beautiful!

Skip heads to the gym straight away, he says he needs to become more fit in order to join the Military.

And Sasha's art has improved drastically! She is now level 8!

I also got promoted to World Renowned Surgeon and completed my Lifetime Wish 1 day before my elder birthday!

Getting old is tough, but with some hair dye, new clothes, and a lot of make-up I look 10 years younger!

As soon as I was finished complaining about my faulty hip I headed over to the phone and retired to $468 a day.

I then attended Claire Ursine's party, we're all so old now!

And Sasha invited Sandi French over, they're really Good Friends!

Did I forget to mention that Skip asked Sasha to be his Girlfriend? Ahhh... young love~
We also bought a parrot called Puzzle to keep me company since I have nothing to do these days,

I wish he'd stop nipping my finger though!

Then I invited Hank over,

Our love is eternal, should I propose? Or is it too late?
I found out the next morning...
To be continued...



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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 3
« Reply #17 on: April 29, 2012, 08:14:58 AM »
Note: Stay tuned, the action starts when Sasha & Skip become Young Adults!-Which is about... 2 chapters away!  :)

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 3
« Reply #18 on: April 29, 2012, 09:18:01 AM »
Ooo! I can't wait! Great update! I love skip's suit!

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 3
« Reply #19 on: April 29, 2012, 09:51:28 AM »
Ooo! I can't wait! Great update! I love skip's suit!
I know right? It's quite... unique  :P

Update coming later today, in my game someone is about 3 days away from dieing  :'( and so is someone else   :( You will meet them in the next chapter  ;) Also Skip & Sasha are 1 day away from YA  ;D

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 3
« Reply #20 on: April 29, 2012, 04:34:17 PM »
Jamie's Diary: Final Entry

The next day I received a phone call, Hank...had died...
I was heart broken!

I felt like part of me had died too, luckily I had Sasha and Skip to support me, they suggested I throw a party to cheer myself up.
They were right! It did cheer me up! I've still got the best dance moves in the town!

What's that cat over there you say? well we adopted a cat the night before called Floppsie (it's a boy cat by the way).

He felt like eating our bird for supper though! R.I.P!

I spend my days like they're my last, I know my time will come soon enough.
I make lots of food.

Chat on the Computer.

Tell ghost stories.

And help entertain toddlers at the local library.

Every day is a gift for me, that's why when Sasha super maxed Painting I was so proud!

I added her certificate to the wall, (None of my achievements are there, there's too many of them  :P)

I was so exited when Skip asked Sasha out to the prom!

The limo... YES LIMO, pulled up at our driveway and drove them away, I watched and waved goodbye.

They were the first there;

They came back and apparently had a great time!

They aged up to beautiful Young Adults hours later!

To be continued...

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 3
« Reply #21 on: April 29, 2012, 04:41:58 PM »
Sasha's Diary: Entry 1

Before Mum left she told me to carry on with the diary so future generations could read about our lives, so let me get the worst bit over before I start crying again.
Shortly after our YA birthdays Grim came for Mum.

She had a nice life and gently shook hands with him and dissapeared into her tombstone.

R.I.P. Jamie Jolina

A few moments later Grim came for Floppsie as well! Poor cat had a nice life and flew into the vortex never to be seen again.

I don't know why, but we missed Floppsie more than mum!

It's been a traumatic experience, so with the simoleans mum's been saving for us we packed our bags and moved into a new house, far away from this terrible nightmare.

And that's when She appeared.
To be continued...



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Re: The Old & The New - Sasha's Diary: Entry 1
« Reply #22 on: April 29, 2012, 08:41:20 PM »
Wow, just caught up. I'm very worried for Sasha. Skip is very handsome.
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Re: The Old & The New - Sasha's Diary: Entry 1
« Reply #23 on: April 30, 2012, 09:04:32 AM »
R.I.P Jamie. Oh my is it the green witch? Sasha better look out!

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Re: The Old & The New - Sasha's Diary: Entry 1
« Reply #24 on: April 30, 2012, 01:03:44 PM »
FINALE: Questions & Answers

The Witch sniggered.
"Well well well, look who we have here."

"Who are you?!" I stuttered.
"Me? You haven't heard of me!?"
"No, so tell me who you are!"
The witch stopped, as if deep in thought.
"Oh but of course! You were only a baby, weren't you?"
"A...a baby? Does that mean.... you...?"
"No of course I'm not your mother! But I can tell you something dear." The witch gestured for me to step forward, I did and she whispered in my ear;
"But I did kill your mother!" She giggled.
Starstruck, I stepped back, about to fall over. My mind was like a hurricane of thoughts; My mother? Who was she? Where did I come from? Who is this woman in front of me? How did Jamie, my foster mother, not tell me any of this?! Perhaps she didn't know? Questions, too many questions...
The witch ended the silence.

"You come from somewhere far away, 1930BC to be precise, your mother was called Cleopatra, and your father Lancelot. A crafty professor sent you to the future while your mother and him fought to distract me while you got away, you then ended upon a spaceship, whose crew-members I later killed, they sent you here in hopes you would find refuge. And now, enough chit-chat. It's time for me to finish what I started and destroy you.
                                                         Valkyrie."
Skip butted in.
"Valkyrie? 1930BC? Cleopatra? Lancelot? Spaceship!? Enough nonsense. WHO ARE YOU?"
"Skip..." I said. "Run..."
"Sasha...?"
"I said run!"
Skip refused, the witch however, took no notice, had her eyes were fixed on me.
"You might want to close you eye's Valkyrie darling, this will be painful."
She smiled while her eyes turned red and a arrow shaped object formed out of thin air.
"Let's start with him shall we?"
The arrow was sent flying towards Skip, I thought fast and jumped in the way. It pierced my heart.
"Sasha!"
"G...get out of here!"
With a hint of a tear in his eye Skip ran out the door.
"My work here is not done until I have your heart."
Her voice faded away and it all turned dark.
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A voice of a mysterious man broke the tranquillity in Sunset Valley.
"I'm coming to save you my love."

70 years earlier.
"Let's start with him sha..."
A purple cloud formed next to the three of us. A faint voice could be heard emitting from it.


"Sasha! Sasha!"

"What on earth...? Is this another of your tricks, Witch!?"
The witch gazed at the cloud, bewildered.
Out of the cloud a familiar face appeared, I've seen that before... but where? Where?

"Is... that... is that you Skip?!"
Skip stood there in shock. He gulped.
"I think so...yes."
The man (Skip) heaved himself out of the cloud and landed in the middle of us, he gave me a bottle and said:
"Sasha, my life is useless without you, drink this, drink this and live."
He fell to the ground, for the last time...

I watched Grim take him away. Skip away. My Skip away.
Before anyone could move, the witch made her move.
"Well he was a funny fellow! Anyway! Time for the executions." She laughed.
Without thinking I grabbed the bottle lid, pulled it off, and drank the contents.
I felt power rise in me, my eyes turned the colour purple and I felt like, like I could do anything! Including defeating this witch!
"What is this magic!?" She screeched.

"You have taken so much from me, my parents, my home, and my husband. But no more! No more! This time, Good is triumphant!"
A ball of fire appeared in my hand, I stood there for a moment, embracing this power, and without  so much as speaking, threw it at the witch.
"Arghhh!!!!!" She screamed.

She held her hand high as she turned to dust.
"I'll get you one day Valkyrie, one day!"

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Sasha's Diary: Entry 2

It's been two years since "the" incident occurred, I have learnt to control my powers, and I also found out I'm pregnant a few weeks ago! Life is so good now, although I am still intrigued about my past I wish I could go back and see my mother but I know its not possible, the "BC" years are a "fixed point" therefore cannot be altered in anyway~ as I learned from an old book I found at the library. Me and Skip are engaged and will be getting married next week! Sunset Valley is still our home but we are thinking about moving, hmmm should we? Skip is progressing in his military career, he is now a "Fighter Pilot" while I maxed my Painting career as a teenager. Just to say, luckily Skip wont die!  :) It was a paradox, I died then he came back in time as an elder to save me so I never died in the firstplace. Thank you Skip and may you rest in peace. So that is all I have to say, and I now say goodbye to this Diary, it is too full of painful memories. I hope Jamie wouldn't mind.

                                                   
The End


   

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Re: The Old & The New - FINALE
« Reply #25 on: April 30, 2012, 01:05:53 PM »
Phew, it's over! That was one roller-coaster! It was meant to be a short story, and it ended up ending on Week 3 Day 4. Should I continue this story but go into a different storyline but also include their powers etc? Or should I make a story of their lives after this with no powers? Or none at all?!

Tell me what you think!  ;)

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Re: The Old & The New - FINALE
« Reply #26 on: April 30, 2012, 01:42:50 PM »
Wow. I couldn't of guessed that ending if I tried! Nice story!  :D

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Re: The Old & The New - FINALE
« Reply #27 on: April 30, 2012, 01:43:38 PM »
Yey, brilliant ending! *Claps hands wildly*

I say you do what you feel like doing, but another story would be cool. ;)

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The Old & The New - FINALE
« Reply #28 on: April 30, 2012, 01:43:47 PM »
Very well done, Warr2098! I loved this story so much that I don't think anything else could add to it :)

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Re: The Old & The New - FINALE
« Reply #29 on: April 30, 2012, 02:21:33 PM »
Wow. I couldn't of guessed that ending if I tried! Nice story! 

Thank you! I was at a difficult position of thinking of which ending to use, (I had 4 different ones planned!) 

Yey, brilliant ending! *Claps hands wildly*

I say you do what you feel like doing, but another story would be cool.

Thank you! I think I might add something.   

Very well done, Warr2098! I loved this story so much that I don't think anything else could add to it :)

Thank you, perhaps I might add something involving their children and the secrets they uncover?  ;) But for now I have to finish this party!



I also fell in love with this picture, I may have to post it on the pictures thread.  :)