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Welcome to our Forum, Wiry. One thing I noticed in your story is that the spaces between your words are not consistent. Sometimes you put two spaces instead of just one. It will help tidy your paragraphs if you are consistent. That's really the only critique I can offer. It looks great, especially for a first attempt. Good luck!
What is his are his five traits I could only see were Evil, Genius, Snob, Perfectionist?
I believe his traits are Evil, Genius, Charismatic, Snob, and Vegetarian, but I'm not Wiry so this is just what I could gather from the text.