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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 4: Dancing during a Delivery
« Reply #25 on: February 18, 2013, 02:43:22 AM »
Very funny update lol! Matias is a awesome dancer. :P

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 4: Dancing during a Delivery
« Reply #26 on: February 22, 2013, 05:30:04 PM »
Your sense of humor adds so much life to this story! I'll be reading. :)
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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 4: Dancing during a Delivery
« Reply #27 on: February 23, 2013, 11:04:35 PM »
Chapter 5: Larry



Marcy ditches the stereo and makes some music of her own.



...Until now.

Marcy: Larry, do you want to go to the park with me?...........Oh.......Really?......*blushes* I'll meet you there.

"Who the heck is Larry?"

Marcy: You would know if you looked at my relationship bar.



Marcy: Isn't he so cute?

"If he got a different hairstyle, ditched the lame WA outfit, and got some less-creepy eyebrows, then maybe."

Larry Best: What is that voice coming from?

Marcy: Your head.

Larry: Oh.



Larry: Can we hurry? My mom doesn't know I'm here, and she'll kill me if she finds out I'm spending time with a girl.

Marcy: Huh? Why? It's not romantic or anything.......yet.

Larry: I....

"You two are so cute being awkward together."

Marcy: Shut up. You wanna make a snowman?



Marcy: Why so unrealistic? The texture looks so dull.

"That's what low graphics settings are like."



Marcy: See, this is fun!

Larry: If we fall, can you land on your back so I'll have a human shield to protect me from the ice?

"He's nice."



Marcy: I got you these.

Larry: WHAT THE HECK WOMAN?! HOW ARE THEY STILL ALIVE?

Marcy: Because they're SUPER FLOWERS!

*BA DUM TSSS*

"Guess she got her lame humor from her mom."



Marcy: You know Larry, I really like you.

Larry: Wow, I'm sur-



Larry: -prised?!



Marcy: Wanna go to the prom with me?

Larry: Sure, KISS ME MORE!



"Umm...EW! You guys are reminding me of that disgusting GoDaddy commercial from the SuperBowl!"



How they did the second one, I don't know.



Allen: I'm a teen already. I expect that you have screenshots of my childhood, watcher.



"No, I don't."



Allen: WHAT?!





He's pretty handsome.



Allen: *GASP* *WHEEZE*

"I could do better than that if I was in 5th grade."

Allen: Well go ahead and try it, since you sound like a 5th grader.

"Aren't you clever?"  >:(



Marcy: Dad, can I invite my boyfriend Larry to come over and make out?

Matias: Of course!



Priscilla: Our little baby is growing up.

Matias: She's already in love.

*facepalm*

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Short chapter, I know.  :(

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The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 5: Larry
« Reply #28 on: February 23, 2013, 11:53:08 PM »
Too funny! I love your humor!

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 5: Larry
« Reply #29 on: February 24, 2013, 11:11:37 AM »
Allen is very cute! A update don't have to be long to be good. ;) Love it.

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 5: Larry
« Reply #30 on: March 12, 2013, 03:15:22 PM »
Even though I haven't updated this in ages, I want everyone to know I'm still working on this. Expect an update in about 2 weeks.

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 5: Larry
« Reply #31 on: March 20, 2013, 07:24:03 PM »
Chapter 6: Mercedes follows Mercedes Footsteps!



Lydia has her toddler birthday,

Lydia: HAHAHA! WEEEE!



Lydia: It....doesn't......hurt.....



She gains the Eco-Friendly trait. We have a hippie on our hands.



Lydia: Mr. Snuggles, did you know that you can save 6 gallons of water by turning the water off when you reach for the soap?

Mr. Snuggles: I DON'T CARE!



Lydia: Dad, spicy food is bad for the environment! It causes you to have gas, which causes pollution! And it is known to cause fires...

Matias: Eh, whatever. No fires will happen.



Matias: OMG I'M GONNA DIE!

Marcy: AHHH! MY FACE IS BURNING!

Lydia: Told you.

Priscilla: Did you just burn our daughter?

Marcy: UGH! You ruined my face! Right before prom!

"Whoa! That was awesome! Let's see that again!"

INSTANT REPLAY



Matias: Eh, whatever. No fires will happen.



Matias: OMG I'M GONNA DIE!

Marcy: AHHH! MY FACE IS BURNING!

"Let's see that from a different angle!"




"Awesome."



Anyways, Marcy and Allen go to the prom, IN THEIR WINTER CLOTHES.

Allen: How is your face doing?

Marcy: I'm a Sim. I can't get hurt. It's fine.

Allen: Do you think Larry will-

Marcy: SHUT UP!



Allen knows two girls. This one Hilary Chen-Khan, daughter of Ariella Chen and Mithun Khan. I don't think I'll choose her, because she looks so much like Allen. And her eyebrows creep me out.



This is Jessica Robins. Daughter of Holly Robins and Seth Monroe. She has a boyfriend already, but it never hurts to try.  ;)



Allen: Hey Jessica, I think your really cute, will you go out with me please?



Jessica: EW! No! I'm already dating Franklin! I'm out of here!



Sorry, just had to put that.  ;D



Even though Jessica rejected him, Allen still sends her love letters....or maybe he's just writing on wood.



Marcy meanwhile, is successful in romance. She invites her boyfriend Larry over almost everyday to make out or something.  ;D



Allen: Why can't Jessica brake up with this "Franklin"?

Lydia: You mean Franklin Avilla-Boundreax? I heard his dad watched a lady burn to death and didn't do anything.

Allen: You mean-



That's right folks, the guy with his back turned to Mercedes May's remains is Franklin's DAD. This isn't a good sign.



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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 5: Larry
« Reply #32 on: March 20, 2013, 07:24:45 PM »
UGH! I accidentally hit the post button too early! I'll complete the chapter and change the title when I finish.

EDIT: Alright, it's done now!  :)

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I need to play with Starlight Shores' genes more (and not just their ghosts for a life states dynasty). Looks like Allen has some fine (if rather unique) choices.

That's right folks, the guy with his back turned to Mercedes May's remains is Franklin's DAD. This isn't a good sign.

It makes breaking the two of them up that much easier. :P
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It sure does Trip!  ;D

Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen




University Life wrecked my game, So I had to uninstall Pets and Seasons for my game to work. So Allen and Marcy got different hairstyles.



We also have our first gnomes! Meet Eugene and Gil.

Eugene: Gil, lookout for that car!

Gil: Shut up, I'm tired.

CRASH!

Eugene: ........Gil?

I guess I should only say meet Eugene now.  :-[



Anyways, Trip's comment made me think I should show some more Starlight Shores offspring. This dude is Demond Martin, son of Aurora and Wayne Martin. He's about Marcy's age, I would've chosen him, but his features would look odd on a female heir. *foreshadowing*



This beauty is Meaghan Lack-Savage. Daughter of Bryce Savage and Becky Lack. She's one of Lydia's friends.



This is Clifford Lee. Son of Sonoko and Mitch Lee. I like Clifford, shame the household won't have enough space for him when they move to the next town. He's another one of Lydia's friends.



And...this is Franklin Avilla-Boundreax. He's the son of Wilfred Boundreax, the selfish food stand guy (Wilfred has generic features) and Lindy Avilla. He even looks evil.... >:(



Lydia ages up into a teen, gaining the Savvy Sculptor trait.

Lydia: I hate homework! It wastes trees!



Allen invites Jessica over again. Let's see if he's successful this time.



Jessica: What is it now? I told you, I'm dating Franklin!  >:(

Allen: Franklin is a jerk. His dad watched a girl burn to death and didn't do anything.

Jessica: That doesn't mean Franklin is bad. In fact, my mom's a performer, and I hate performing.

Allen: Well....

Jessica: Well what?  >:(

Allen: I just....



Jessica: MMPH?!



*heavy sighs*

Jessica: ......




SUCCESS!




The celebration continues with Marcy's birthday.



Marcy: Uh, Mom?

Priscilla: Yes dear?

Marcy: What's that guy with the afro doing here? He wasn't even invited!

Priscilla: Don't know, don't care.



Marcy: Um, I think I just saw someone spit into the cake.  :o

Lydia: Please be lying, Please be lying.  :-[



Marcy takes a trip to the mirror and dresser, and then converses with her mom.

Priscilla: My elder birthday is tomorrow...

Marcy: Oh please, this whole town is full of elders now. You'll blend in.

Priscilla: Was that an insult or a compliment?



Allen: Hey FRANKLIN! Jessica wanted me to tell you that it's over and she thinks your mother looks like a llama!

Franklin: *GASP*  How could she?!



Marcy: Larry, will you marry me?

Larry: YES!



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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #35 on: March 23, 2013, 11:00:20 PM »
Yay! Marcy and Larry for the win!

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #36 on: March 24, 2013, 06:53:30 AM »
I feel like a bad, bad, man, but I like Franklin! That mustache.  :P

Is his hair from University or Store?

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #37 on: March 29, 2013, 12:00:11 PM »
Yay! Marcy and Larry for the win!

Haha!  ;D That made me smile! Thanks Raia!  :)

I feel like a bad, bad, man, but I like Franklin! That mustache.  :P

Is his hair from University or Store?

*GASP* You should be ashamed!  >:( Just kidding!  ;D His mustache is actually pretty cool. His hair is actually from 70's, 80's, and 90's. Thanks Audren!

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #38 on: March 30, 2013, 08:34:37 PM »
I have added a family tree, but it contains spoilers. Beware.

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #39 on: March 30, 2013, 08:41:13 PM »
Just so you know, the family tree link is the wrong link (it takes me to the main Family Echo page, which prompts me to log in, which then takes me to one of my own family trees). And yes, I want spoilers!
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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #40 on: March 30, 2013, 09:05:35 PM »
Just so you know, the family tree link is the wrong link (it takes me to the main Family Echo page, which prompts me to log in, which then takes me to one of my own family trees). And yes, I want spoilers!

*facepalm* I feel like a total idiot right now.  :P My bad. Thank you for pointing that out Trip! I really appreciate it.  :)

Edit: It's fixed now.

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 7: Franklin VS Allen
« Reply #41 on: March 31, 2013, 12:06:28 PM »
Chapter 8: Larry's Dangerous Pillow Fighting



Larry and Marcy have a private wedding, and then have their honeymoon in Marcy's room.

Larry and Marcy: Get out.



Alrighty then...Priscilla became an elder.

Priscilla: I wish I didn't become an elder!

Allen: What kind of wish is that?

Marcy: A failed one, if you say it out loud it won't come true.

Priscilla: Are you two done?



Priscilla: Uh, Larry, where did you come from?

Larry: I had Red Bull this morning. That stuff makes you hyper.



Priscilla: Do I look good?

Allen: HAHAHAHAHAHA no.

"Let's get you to the mirror and dresser. We gotta get rid of that grey hair."



Larry: I love you Mar Mar.

Marcy: I love you too Larry beary.

Priscilla: I still love you Mat Cat.

Matias: I love you too Pris.....kiss.



*disgusting kissing noises*



Larry: You thinking what I'm thinking?



Marcy: Yeah.



".....Wow."



Larry: Pillow fight! *SMACK* Wait......Marcy....? Are you okay...?



Allen: Yay! It's my birthday!

Lydia: Mom, get rid of the dishwasher. It uses up too much water! That can damage our water supply!

Priscilla: Or do you just not want to do dishes?

Lydia: .....



Lydia: Hey! Allen's aging up!



Allen gets a job in the Athletic Career, notice how he's more bulky now. Sorry, ladies, but he's already taken.



Graduation is the next day. Larry, Marcy, Allen, Jessica, Hilary, and Demond graduate.

Hilary: Uhh...Demond? What are you looking at?

Demond: There's a mosquito on your face. *SLAP*

Hilary: OW!



Marcy gets a job in the Music industry.



Matias ages up to elder the next day.

Lydia: Uh, Dad? You look like your about to punch me....

Matias: So? Just duck.




Allen goes to visit Jessica. This is her house. WHOA.

Allen: She's rich.



Allen: Nice place you got here. Is this all yours?

Jessica: No, I live her with my mum. Oops, got to go to work! Bye!

Allen: WAIT! *sigh*Maybe I should meet her mother.



Allen: Hello, you must be Mrs. Robins.

Holly: Yeah that's me. Just call me Holly. Nice to meet you.



Allen: Anyways, Holly...

Holly: Yes?

Allen: I wanted to know if you are ok with me marrying your daughter.



Holly: Of course! Under one condition.

Allen: What's that?

Holly: I move with you to the next town.

Allen: What?

"But that makes a full household!"



Holly: I'll never see my daughter again if you move. Jessica is the only person I love in this town. I hate everyone else. Except you and your family of course. But you'll be moving too. If I don't come, I'll be stuck here till I die. I don't want that. I want to be with my new family, and see my future grandchildren. I want to die a happy woman Allen.

Allen: That's good but....If you come with us, that'll make eight of us. That's a full household. So neither Jessica and I nor Marcy or Larry can have children. You won't get grandkids.

Holly: Tell you what, when we move there, I'll move to a different house. I'll still be able to visit. One of you could try for baby and move out, leaving the other to have children. Sound good?

Allen: Yeah, it actually does. What do you think, watcher?

"I don't see anything wrong with it. Let her come along."

Allen: Ok, lets go.




Holly and Jessica get makeovers. There's only one more update left for Starlight Shores, and then we will be moving to the next town.

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 9: The Texting Dead
« Reply #43 on: April 06, 2013, 03:36:23 PM »
Chapter 9: The Texting Dead



Allen takes Jessica on a date to the beach. At sunset. How sweet.  ::)



These are definitely some of the best pictures I've ever taken in my game.

Allen: Baby, I got something for you.



Jessica: You don't mean-?



Allen: Jessica Birdy Robins, will you marry me?



Jessica: Oh my god! YES! Yes I will!



Jessica: It's beautiful.



Allen: I love you.

Jessica: I love you too.

*sniff* "I think I'm gonna cry."  :'(



Once they arrive home however, they encounter one of Starlight Shore's bath salt users.

Zombie: ROAR!

Jessica: OMG! A ghost!

Zombie: No, I'm a walker.

Allen: IT'S THE WALKERS! SHOOT EM' IN THE HEAD!



"Oh boy. We've got more walkers! Quick! Get the texting one!"

Texting Zombie: OMG, check out what Gary posted on BiteBook!



Blonde Zombie: Come on guys! Food!

Right Zombie: I don't feel like it right now. I didn't have my coffee this mornin'.

Left Zombie: I'm too tired.

Blonde Zombie: NO. You guys- Wait, where did they go?



"....Well at least they made it to safety."



The next day is the wedding. A lot of people attend, including Seth Monroe, Jessica's dad, Hilary Khan-Chen
and The Bests.



Holly: Hi Seth....It's been a while.

Seth: I know. Who's this young man?

Larry: I'm Larry. Allen's brother-in-law.

Seth: Why don't we go have a chat Larry? *walks off with Larry*

Holly: *sighs* That was always him. Avoiding me every possible second.



The Bride and Groom are ready.



*wedding music*




They are now married.



Lindy: Stay still Franklin!

Larry: *sneezes* ACHOO! I'm allergic to rice!



Jessica: Is it just me, or does this cake look like a mattress?

"It actually kinda does..."



"HEY! Why are you wearing a wedding dress?"



Soon, the guests leave. So Eugene and Baxter (Eugene's new buddy) feast on the leftover food.

Baxter: I'm so full.....*explodes*

Eugene: NOOOOOO!! Not again!



Well, this wraps up Starlight Shores. We'll hope you'll join the Singhs in the next town! And also, feel free to download the Starlight Shores Household on the exchange: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7153557 There's no CC!

See you next time!  :)

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 9: The Texting Dead
« Reply #44 on: April 06, 2013, 07:35:22 PM »
Congratulations on a town completed!

I can only imagine what a zombie's texts look like. "Graaah...urrghh...grarg!" or something like that. :P

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 9: The Texting Dead
« Reply #45 on: April 06, 2013, 08:45:45 PM »
Congratulations on a town completed!

I can only imagine what a zombie's texts look like. "Graaah...urrghh...grarg!" or something like that. :P

Thanks!  :)

LOL! Raia you made me laugh so hard! Good one!  ;D


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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 10: Welcome To Sunlit Tides!
« Reply #46 on: April 06, 2013, 11:46:10 PM »
Since I'm bored, DOUBLE UPDATE!  ;D

Chapter 10: Welcome To Sunlit Tides!



Welcome to Sunlit Tides! The Sims 3 version of the Cayman Islands!



This is the house the Singhs will be staying in. It's a pre-made, since I am completely awful at building houses. I always end up with cubes.  :P Expect to see a lot of pre-made houses in this story.

Eugene: Why am I so unlucky? First Gil, now Baxter? *sobs*



Upon arrival, Holly keeps her promise and moves out to a quaint bungalow to spend the rest of her days in.



Marcy and Larry move out too. *awesomely dodges flying tomato* They move to a 2 bedroom house to start a family. Don't worry, We'll be seeing more of them.  ;)



"So Lydia, how do you like Sunlit Tides?"

Lydia: It's gorgeous! The water is crystal clear, the air is clean, and everyone uses ethanol for their automobiles- WHOA! *falls into water*

"HA! I got you!"

Lydia: Oh you-

"Better not break forum rules dear. Anyways, there is not enough room for you in the house so...."

Lydia: So will I share a room or something?



"No, your gonna sleep outside, in this bed."

Lydia: *jaw drops*

"Hey, I thought you liked nature!"

Lydia: I like preserving nature. Not living in it!

"Well, tough tacos girl."

Lydia: .....I hate you.



Onto a more positive note, Jessica and Allen have their honeymoon in their new room upstairs.



I'm pretty sure you know the result.



Jessica: BLEH!

"EW! Sim vomit!"



Jessica: I'm pregnant. No wonder I've been throwing u- BLEH!

Matias and I: EW! Sim vomit!



Lydia starts her first day of school.

Lydia: HELP ME!

"What is it?"



Lydia: My hair is stuck!

"It's just a graphic glitch."

Lydia: But it feels funny!

"Tough tacos girl."

Lydia: SHUT UP!



Priscilla: You play like garbage, prepare to die.

Matias: NO! You blew up my soldier!

Priscilla: Quick! Turn it off! Jessica's coming. You know what she thinks of adults playing video games!

Matias: I'm on it.

2 Minutes Later...



Jessica: Hi there guys. What are doing?

Priscilla: Oh, we're watching the History channel. It's very nostalgic.

Jessica: Oh, well that's....



Jessica: OW!

Matias: "That's OW!" What kind of adjective is that? Crazy lady.

Priscilla: Ugh, you idiot! She's in labor!

Matias: You know how we handle this....



Matias: We dance.

Jessica: WHAT THE LLAMA??



Matias: PARTY ROCK IS IN THE HOUSE TONIGHT!

Jessica: OW!

Priscilla: EVERYBODY JUST HAVE A GOOD TIME.



Lydia: AND WE GONNA MAKE YA LOSE YOUR MIND...

Priscilla: WE JUST WANNA SEE YA..

Lydia, Matias, and Priscilla: *all together* GIVE BIRTH.



Jessica: *in the tune of the musical break in Party Rock Anthem* OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW!

Lydia, Matias, and Priscilla: Give birth...Give birth.

Lydia: Now we panic.

All 4: AHHHH!! HERE IT COMES...



Jessica: Awww...Sweet relief.

Meet Kenneth Singh.



More excitement comes, Lydia has her young adult birthday.





Lydia: I still can't believe I have to sleep out here..



Jessica: Ugh....Not again....

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 10: Welcome to Sunlit Tides!
« Reply #47 on: April 06, 2013, 11:54:00 PM »
Jessica giving birth was hilarious! More Sims need to give birth in your story. I think that Lydia deserves to atleast get her own ensuite is she is living outside. A tree should do.
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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 10: Welcome to Sunlit Tides!
« Reply #48 on: April 08, 2013, 05:19:25 PM »
That birth scene made me laugh! Welcome to the world and the insanity that is your family, Kenneth. :)

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Re: The Singh Random Town Jump -- Chapter 10: Welcome to Sunlit Tides!
« Reply #49 on: April 11, 2013, 06:53:17 PM »
Jessica giving birth was hilarious! More Sims need to give birth in your story. I think that Lydia deserves to atleast get her own ensuite is she is living outside. A tree should do.

Don't worry, more births will come! Lydia would like to thank you for the tree suggestion. She really appreciates it.  :)

That birth scene made me laugh! Welcome to the world and the insanity that is your family, Kenneth. :)

Thanks! The birth scene idea came to me the when I was writing the chapter, and I'm glad you and Gogowars like it!  :D