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The Smith Dynasty(completed)
« on: October 15, 2010, 11:21:37 AM »
Meet Hebe Smith she is family orientated, a natural cook, hopeless romantic, kleptomaniac and insane. I chose to play in riverview mainly because I have never played there before. I was getting a little bored of sunset valley.


OK, voice in the sky why am I called such a stupid name
You're named after the youngest daughter of Zeus. She was responsible for serving ambrosia to the gods. I thought it was appropriate.
So, why am i blue?
I like blue.
The orange hair?
I want to see how long I can keep the orange in the family.

Why am I in this field
Its your new house.
Its not a house its a field I don't think I like you voice in the sky
Shush your the founder of an immortal dynasty you have things to do.

You are a voice in my head you can't tell me what to do.
Oh yes I can.
First things first you need a job and a man.

Got the job

And the man.
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« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 12:29:17 PM »
Hebe looks a tad anorexic.  Ah well, that job will fill her out.  Meanwhile, kudos to her and the voice in the sky for a job well done!
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 02:04:06 PM »
Good start!  I think Hebe and her conversations with the voice in the sky are going to be very interesting.
 
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: October 15, 2010, 02:51:11 PM »
Sherman Bagley came with about 3000 and the really expensive car, that I cannot remember the name of, the one worth about 94000.
So kerching for my dynasty founder.

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« Reply #4 on: October 15, 2010, 03:06:44 PM »
No more slumbers in the field for her!  Good catch Hebe.
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2010, 11:18:43 AM »

So, voice in the sky why does my beloved husband spend all his time sculpting when he could be spending time with me.
He needs to for the dynasty.
Yeah, yeah the dynasty whatever.

Whats with the watermelons?
I want you to have a baby girl.
You think watermelons will make me have a girl. Sheesh and people say I am the insane one.
Its true I read it on a forum
Oh, so if the forum said set fire to your Sim and she will have a girl would you do it ?
Don't be silly, eat your watermelon.

What is going on now voice in the sky
Your in labour, deep breaths now.

Why did you do this to me!

What is his problem
He is worried about you
Whats he got to worry about I am the one in pain

Get me an epidural now !
You will be fine relax
That is it I am of to the hospital.
( Authors note. They did go to the hospital without me telling them to. I guess Hebe wasn't about to do the natural childbirth at home thing.)

Ladies and gentlemen I present to you Greta Smith
Hold on she is my baby, don't I get to choose her name.
What were you thinking
Something a little unusual like Peaches or Kumquat.
You cannot call your baby kumquat
Why not
That is insane
Your point is
Definitely not Kumquat I won't allow it
Ladies and gentlemen please welcome Blu-belle Smith to the world


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« Reply #6 on: October 16, 2010, 12:33:13 PM »
Rachel, great story! This sane-insane conversation is awesome! Not to forget, Welcome Blu-belle, wish you happy healthy life and lots of ambrosia to eat.



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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: October 16, 2010, 04:29:22 PM »
You have an awesome sense of humor, Ratchie. I love this story!
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: October 16, 2010, 07:35:38 PM »

Blu-belle listen you are going to be a great artist and..
Hello Mr block nice to meet you
No Blu-belle it isn't your block talking to you. You have a great destiny my child ...
Does Mr block want to come for tea

Oh I give up. I am going home
Hello, hello mum mum Mr block won't talk to me anymore.

Hebe what are you doing?
I am fishing obviously
In an evening gown?
You told me to fish oh wonderful voice whom I must obey. You never specified a clothing choice.
Hold one a minute are you being sarcastic
As if I would.

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« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2010, 08:49:10 PM »
Girl I love your sense of humor! Wow. I am expecting fun things from this dynasty.  ;D

P.S. And great minds think alike. I finally started another dynasty and guess who's the groom? ;D

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« Reply #10 on: October 17, 2010, 03:48:02 AM »
Thank you everyone for reading and for comenting. I wanted to approach the dynasty from a new angle and I hope I am doing a good job of it.
I had no idea about any of the riverview townies who was rich or single,probably should have done some research. So I was very happy when Sherman turned out to be rich, he is a coward so I don't let him fish. I didn't think he would have much luck fishing for death fish in the graveyard if he kept fainting every five minutes.

Rachel
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2010, 08:22:16 PM »
Go ahead.  Tell her.

Tell who?

Ratchie.  Tell her what you think.

What?  Now I'm hearing voice from the sky?  OH NOs.

Great way to do it Ratchie.  I never in a million years would have thought of the voice from the sky angle.  It's a hoot.
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Re: The smith Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: October 20, 2010, 09:00:46 AM »

Voice in the sky why am I back in this field
We had some problems with riverview and now your in sunset valley
Where is my big expensive house
All gone Hebe but I gave you a new hair style.
Oh great so now I am poor again
Sorry, I promise I will get you a rich husband

Yay will he be nice too.
I can't promise nice but I can promise rich.

As promised I married Hebe to a rich Sim. She is now married to Thornton Wolff and expecting their first child. i didn't take any pictures of the courtship because I honestly didn't think I would be able to seduce the commitment issued, children disliking Mr Wolff.
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« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2010, 01:57:27 PM »
Lol. Go get 'em Hebe!

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« Reply #14 on: October 20, 2010, 03:18:16 PM »
What an original writing style you have, sorry the Riverview version couldn't continue. Fun to see Thornton as spouse here though, I got his wife in my dynasty and she came with a lot of car-money.

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« Reply #15 on: October 20, 2010, 05:16:30 PM »
What an original writing style you have, sorry the Riverview version couldn't continue. Fun to see Thornton as spouse here though, I got his wife in my dynasty and she came with a lot of car-money.

Thank you so much for the comment. I intentionally chose Thornton for his money there are not that many rich potential spouses in sunset valley.
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« Reply #16 on: October 20, 2010, 05:27:52 PM »
So Hebe how is married life
Its alright
Just alright don't you like Thornton.
Oh yes but he is only interested in one thing
Really do tell
I will show you
Hebe your newly weds I think we can guess what it is your husband wants to do all the time

Oh.. painting not quite what I had in mind
Yes,painting what is it with you dynasty people and painting.
Don't blame me I didn't make the rules up.

Isn't she cute would you like to introduce us to your new arrival
She was worth all the pain you put me through
I think that was Thornton's fault
You clicked the try for baby button didn't you
umm anyway whats the baby called, please don't say its Kumquat
What's wrong with Kumquat?
What's right with it?
Ladies and gentlemen please welcome Bronte Smith to the world

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« Reply #17 on: October 20, 2010, 07:05:06 PM »
I have to agree with everyone. You have a way with the word! I enjoy this dynasty. And I cannot wait to see how long the blue skin lasts!

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« Reply #18 on: October 20, 2010, 08:24:48 PM »
Welcome, Bronte!
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« Reply #19 on: October 21, 2010, 04:51:37 PM »

Um Thornton, I thought you disliked children
I do check out my negative moodlet
Your not kind of freaked that a mysterious voice is talking to you
My wife is insane you get used to these sort of things
True, true
Happy birthday by the way
Thanks voice

Bronte smile for the camera,oh no you blinked. I know you can't answer me back yet mummy hasn't taught you how to talk yet. Happy birthday little princess and yay for the orange hair.

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« Reply #20 on: October 21, 2010, 05:05:49 PM »
Oh, it takes a precious little girl to bring men to their knees. Kumquat...I mean Bronte ;D is a little darling.

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« Reply #21 on: October 21, 2010, 05:15:28 PM »
Cute blue toddler. At least with Bronte there is a chance people will be able to pronounce her name. I sort of like the idea of commitment issued and children disliking Thornton spending his life working at home for his wife and child and liking it, it must a been his version of hell before he married Hebe.

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« Reply #22 on: October 22, 2010, 05:43:44 PM »

Hi there Hebe hows ..
Shush
Can you just tell the people at home what you have been up to
Hush now
Why?
We are in the library
Nobody can hear me I am in your head.
Go away voice I am learning how to garden.

Bronte whats wrong you don't look happy?
I don't want to go to school
Your a genius love school will be easy
I am scared the other kids will pick on me
Now why would they do that
I am blue
Nothing wrong with being blue sweetie. Just remember your blue and your proud.

So Thornton how does it feel to achieve your lifetime wish to be CEO of a mega corporation
Alright I suppose
Good that is enough time watching television back to the easel sideburns you have got work to do

You don't look happy Thornton
I don't like fishing
Well your mine to command sideburns so keep fishing
You can't tell me what to do I am a grown man
Watch it sideburns

Bronte Smith do not glare at your father like that
He started it did you know he cannot stand being around me
Right that is it Thornton your changing your ways


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« Reply #23 on: October 23, 2010, 02:29:44 AM »
OOOOOoooo, BUSTED!  That little girl is soooo busted.  Voice in the sky sees all.
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« Reply #24 on: October 23, 2010, 04:49:23 AM »
Ratchie you are pure genius. I loooove it!!!!