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« Reply #45 on: February 11, 2012, 03:29:00 PM »
Chapter 7: The Prophecy

Carlos Cortez was sitting in first class in seat 3B. The plane was scheduled to take off in 5 minutes. The destination? Shang Simla, China. He had gone through a lot of trouble for this ticket; driving undercover to the airport to avoid the paparazzi, having to tell his boss he was taking the week off, and getting through his wife so he could actually get out of the house in one piece. He was going to enjoy this vacation. There would be no crying, lots of adventuring, and regular sleeping hours. I deserve this vacation, he thought as he asked for another glass of nectar and I’m going to enjoy it.
An increasingly large amount of hours later, he had arrived in the ancient city. He checked out base camp, and was surprised that he enjoyed the environment. He was so used to glamour and expensive things it was nice to just see some regular, but simple objects. However it was a good thing basically nobody in China recognized him, he just wanted to explore in peace.
   He started off with a beginner’s tomb for some experience, but he finished it in no time. The merchant who gave him the adventure quickly understood that this was no helpless tourist. Carlos was immediately set on 3 more tombs, until finally he was given the quest to find Pangu’s Axe.
   The problem was that Carlos was hungry, tired, and stressed out. He ended up buying a tent, some dried food, and a book to read. However, he still wanted to find the axe first thing in the morning so he decided to sleep as close to the entrance to the tomb as possible. Later, Carlos realized how stupid he had been.
   He awoke in the middle of the night because of someone moving around outside. He was half asleep, freezing, and in his underwear so it wasn’t the ideal time to go looking for trouble. Nevertheless he grabbed his hiking stick (as a weapon of course!) and opened the tent flap. For a moment he was blinded by the darkness and when he recovered, there she was.
   It was a ghost. Carlos had seen the ghost of his grandmother when she died and was sure that the poor soul in front of him had died of old age just like his Granny. The ghost was bright silver all over, with hair running all the way to its waist. When it turned, Carlos saw it was an old woman wearing an old fashioned night gown. When she spotted him, she grinned slightly and beckoned him to follow with a single, wrinkled finger. He grabbed his robe and followed.
   Now let’s just remember that this man had been sleeping in a tent in front of one of China’s most dangerous tombs, so we already know he wasn’t the sharpest tool in the shed. But he was a fearless father of 3 toddlers, and some say if you can get through that you can get through anything.
   The ghost didn’t walk, but glided along to lead Carlos wherever it was he apparently needed to go to. They crossed rivers, walked through the dead silent market, and passed the adventure board until they finally stopped. They were in one of the peaks of the mountains, not too far from the base camp. Carlos was thinking how glad he was that he brought his walking stick, when he noticed that the ghost was unveiling a tiny tunnel that he hadn’t noticed before. She smiled back at him, and then disappeared in a puff of smoke.
   Carlos was speechless. He’d just climbed past half of China in order to get to a hole that one of the triplets couldn’t have crawled through, and his guide disappeared!!! He wasn’t completely stupid though, he looked around and saw a crate of fireworks that were probably left over from the New Year’s celebration a couple of months ago. He lit a few, tossed them in the tunnel, covered his ears, and ran. He knew from experience that fireworks are much more powerful than they seem, so it was no surprise to him that when he turned back the tunnel was completely blown open and was ready for him to crawl inside.
   Carlos crawled in, and after a few minutes of crawling he hit a sort of slide/shoot thing. He didn’t hesitate for a moment and threw himself down it.
   He landed with a large- THUMP! -and quickly picked himself off the ground.  It was clear that he was deep inside the mountain. He was actually in a small, but pleasantly cozy cavern. But once he actually got a good look around the entire thing, he knew this cavern wasn’t a simple hideaway.
   The ghost was back, but this time she didn’t seem as interested in what Carlos was doing. She had her eyes closed and was sitting criss-crossed in the center of a mat. She was surrounded by 3 little jars full or bright light, as though there were a bunch of fireflies trapped in them. She began to meditate, humming low notes and raising a couple of inches of the ground. Suddenly the 3 jars burst open, sending glass everywhere. The balls of light went, one by one, literally inside the woman’s chest, practically consuming her. She opened her eyes, but they were no longer the silver of the dead. Instead they were a piercing   yellow. She stood up, as though possessed, and opened her mouth to utter what would change Carlos’s life forever.
   THERE WILL BE 3 GIRLS, BORN TO THE BRIGHTEST CELEBIRTIES OF BRIDGEPORT AND NAMED FOR 3 OF THE GREATEST BEINGS EVER. THEY WILL GROW AND LEARN IN THE EYES OF THEIR COMMUNITY AND WILL LIVE UP TO THEIR DESTINY. THE GREAT 3 WILL SOON TAKE ON THE ROLES OF THEIR NAMESAKES, AND WILL REPEAT THE MYTHS MANY TIMES OVER. THEY WILL PROVE TO DO GREAT THINGS, BUT ALSO TERRIBLE ONES. THEY WILL HAVE MORE POWER THAN THE STARS THEMSELVES.
   Carlos stood there, terrified for a moment. Then he ran as fast as he could. He used a climbing grapple to haul himself back up the slide. He ran back to the base camp, and immediately got on the computer.
   Carlos had no doubt that this was about Athena, Aphrodite, and Artemis. Someone more close-minded would tell him it was all a bunch of crap, but he knew that it had to be a real prophecy. China was full of ancient, powerful magic. He officially believed that, not a single soul could’ve ever believed that magic didn’t truly exist after that.
   Carlos checked a bunch of websites for information about the 3 gods his nooboos were named for. He read about good things and bad things the gods had done. Could my little girls actually grow up to be this powerful? He thought, Is this really happening?
   Either way, Carlos was catching an early flight home. China had been nice, but after witnessing something that shocking it was enough.
   A couple hours later, Carlos walked through the doors of his home. Tiffani ran to him, gave him a big hug and a welcome home kiss.
   “I’m so glad you’re back, I was so worried you’d get stuck in a tomb or something.”
   “I’m fine.” He said, kissing the top of her head as if she was a small child. “How are the girls?”
   “They’re finally asleep. It’s funny how much they resemble little devils when they are awake, but once they fall asleep they seem like little angles. Want to see them?”
   He nodded and walked up the stairs to the nursery. All three were safely sleeping in their cribs with a little blanket pulled over them and their strange dolls slumped over in the corner.
   “Sleep tight little ones.”  Carlos whispered as he pulled the door closed. “I don’t know how much longer until it begins.”
   
Authors Notes:
*Yay, the update is finally here! ;D
*That took a long time to write.
*I also used a lot of commas. :P
*Do you like the prophecy? It took some time to think of what exactly it should say.
* Sorry for the lack of pictures since sadly, none of this actually happened. Well Carlos did go to China, but it was really buggy and stuff so I had to send him home early.
* Also sorry about my lack of information on the tombs since I don’t really do them often. I’ve never gotten Pangu’s Axe so I don’t even know if Carlos could’ve camped out near the entrance. :(
*Please let me know about any spelling or grammar mistakes.
*Thank you for all the kind comments!
* Tell me what you think! Please?
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #46 on: February 11, 2012, 05:52:31 PM »
I can't wait to see what the prophecy means! I only noticed you had a typo and wrote angles instead of angels. Also when you said criss-crossed did you mean cross-legged? I saw no other mistakes. Good chapter! The triplets are going to be beautiful little girls!



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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #47 on: February 11, 2012, 05:53:00 PM »
Wow! This was really great! Well written too, I could picture everything. So much detail (I love me some detail!) and the whole thing is just so amazing! Keep writing, really love it!

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #48 on: February 12, 2012, 04:53:49 AM »
Don't worry about there being no screenshots because your writing is so accurate that I could picture it all, anyways! Brilliant update!! :D

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #49 on: February 12, 2012, 05:21:56 AM »
Wow can't wait for the next update now. I love your writing style.  :)
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #50 on: February 12, 2012, 08:25:51 AM »
I love this! Screenshots weren't necessary to enjoy the story, at all. The triplets are adorable though, I can't wait to see them grow up.

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #51 on: February 13, 2012, 07:45:02 AM »
You're writing is very good! Can't wait for more. ;D



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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #52 on: February 14, 2012, 09:37:54 PM »
Thank you everyone so, so much for all the comments! I'm very surprised and happy that everyone liked this update. Also thanks for the 1000 views! I fell so happy right now and so glad people like my story. I'm sorry I haven't updates, I haven't been able to play much since I have mid-terms on Thursday and a bunch of projects due this week. I'll try and get 1 (if not 2!) updates up sometime from Friday thru the rest of the weekend.  ;D
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 7: The Prophecy
« Reply #53 on: February 19, 2012, 01:14:29 AM »
Chapter 8: Childhood at Last

Tiffani’s journal


I’m not going to lie, for most of the girls’ toddler years we had no idea what we were doing. Neither of us had any experience with taking care of toddlers. Even with Carlos’s family oriented trait, we were still lost. However, once we the girl got a little older, we got the hang of what was going on. We even managed to teach them all their skills.







However, once their child birthdays rolled around I won’t pretend I wasn’t excited. No more midnight snuggles, highchair tantrums, or the annoying sound from the xylophone. True, getting older meant more independence, which I’m not sure I want yet, but at least it will be a little quieter around the house.

So one by one we took them to their cake, and watched the sparkles work their magic.







Of course, as a fashion diva and a sensible mother I couldn’t let them stay in the clothes they aged up with. That would just be cruel. I immediately called up my stylist and told him to meet us at the mall ASAP.

First we took on Athena, which was hard enough. She told us she didn’t care about clothes, she just wanted to go home and read a book. Plus, her favorite color is spice brown which is one of the hardest colors to accessorize with. When we finally actually got her to pick out some outfits, they were all dull without any other colors or patterns. I talked her into a pattern on her formal dress (which I practically had to force her into in the first place) and a nice blue color to go with all the spice brown which we had used when she was a toddler. Here is the final result, even though I would still make some big changes to it:



Next was Artemis. She wasn’t as difficult as Athena, quite honestly she didn’t seem to care at all about her clothes or hair or how I put them. I felt kinda bad, since I knew I had the power to buy her what I would have wanted, but she wouldn’t really like them. It also made me feel bad about how I had been forcing Athena into shopping for things she didn’t want. Anyway, Artemis’s favorite color is Irish green, so I tried to pick out some things that had that color but still allowed her to play with animals and such. Here is the end result:



Finally there was Aphrodite, and in this department she was my little angel. She wanted lots of pink, and lots of pretty, girly clothes. She had her hair in traditional braids with cute little pink bows. Actually now that I think about it, she was very demanding of what she wanted and didn’t take no for an answer. Whatever, I think she’s just taking after her momma. Here is the end result:



Anyway, I have to call up the interior designer now to get started on their room. I’m sure that will lead to a lot of differences in colors and toys. Wish me luck!


Author’s Notes:
*Sorry for the delay with this chapter, I had midterms last week which meant a whole lot of studying and not a whole lot of simming. But I have this week off so hopefully there will be a lot more updates now!
*Haha, all of the pictures in this update are collages. :P
*Tiffani means well, but she is just really into fashion and stuff. She is a good mom, I’m not trying to make it out like she’s some sort of only-cares-about-appearances person.
*I don’t really have anything else to say since its 1:00 am and I’m super tired.
*Please let me know if there is any spelling or grammar mistakes.
*Thanks for reading and please tell me what you think! ;D
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 8: Childhood at Last
« Reply #54 on: February 19, 2012, 01:51:11 AM »
Happy Birthday to the triplets! They look very cute.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 8: Childhood at Last
« Reply #55 on: February 19, 2012, 08:06:43 AM »
Good luck Tiffani! The triplets are adorable. It's so cute how their different personalities come out. Great update!

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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 8: Childhood at Last
« Reply #56 on: February 19, 2012, 12:11:49 PM »
You must be glad they are children lol. Now the fun with pranks can begin. The makeovers look great!

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« Reply #57 on: February 19, 2012, 11:49:09 PM »
Chapter 9: Athena’s Turn

Hi I’m Athena, first born of Carlos and Tiffani Cortez and fellow triplet to Artemis and Aphrodite.

….. This is weird.

 I mean, It feels like I’m talking to myself, but I’m not saying any of this out loud. Mom and Daddy said that by doing this it will help keep record of what our family was like in the present, so that future generations will know who they originated from. But just by thinking this how do they know? Is someone reading my mind and writing down my thoughts? Well of course that isn’t possible since I read in Logic Vol. 1: Knights vs. Bishops that it is impossible for any being to intrude on another’s thoughts unless turned into a vampire or using technology that won’t be developed for another 500 years. I guess I’m over thinking this, so I’ll just get on with it.

….Oh wait, Mom says I’m supposed to write it down in the “special” journal afterwards so never mind. 

Since my sisters and I took on the wrath of childhood yesterday, we got to help turn the nursery into an actual bedroom. It took a lot of time, and a lot of arguments.



Those are our beds, obviously. Also above each of them is a poster or picture since Mom and Daddy said we should each pick one to hang over our beds to replace the babyish paintings that were there beforehand.  Artemis’s is first, she chose a blanket with flowers and outdoor stuff so she can feel like she’s outside all the time or something. Her picture is of a bunch of puppies since she loves animals and it’s just a really cute picture. Mine is in the middle, the blanket is actually a map showing Columbus’s route to America.  The picture above my bed is to raise awareness of AIDS. Aphrodite said I was a nerd to choose things for our room that have to do with school and stuff. I told her to shut up. Anyway, Aphrodite’s blanket is of a bunch of stupid pink hearts. Her picture is of a stupid unicorn. (Who do exist by the way, but hers has a bunch of fluffy girly stuff and pink with it so that is why it is stupid.)



That is the dollhouse and costume chest that Aphrodite had to scream for so she could have it next to her bed. Ugh, like I’d really want to wake up next to a bunch or prissy dolls every day. Well I already wake up next to Aphrodite every day, so I can’t really talk.



Finally right near the door of the room is a little play area with a toy box, block table, and toy oven. I wonder why Aphrodite didn’t want the oven and toy box in her little area since they are both in a royal theme. Whatever, I really couldn’t care less. The block table is cool, mom says we me and Artemis would play on it all the time as toddlers. So Artemis and I got to customize it with our favorite colors since Aphrodite says that she’d, “…rather die than start building a bunch of stupid block towers.”

I don’t know if you can take an overly large hint, but I don’t really like Aphrodite. She’s a snob, and a huge one at that. Artemis is great, she is nice to everyone. Probably her good trait coming out, even Aphrodite doesn’t completely hate her. Well except for this morning when she said to me….


“Hey Athena, look at Artemis playing around in a dinosaur suit like a boy or something!”


“That’s really mean Aphrodite! Artemis is always nice to both of us, why would you say something so mean about her? What did she ever do to you?!”


“Well excuse me if I saw something funny and thought to tell you! I don’t think its mean; I think it’s funny that Artemis likes to pretend to be a dinosaur!”

I know I know, it was a really stupid argument. But it’s true, Artemis is always nice to everyone and saying something mean about her was completely unnecessary.

I didn’t want to be around anyone anymore, so I rode my bike to the butterfly park place. I could’ve taken the limo so I wouldn’t get as tired from pedaling, but I don’t want to attract a lot of attention from the paparazzi. Mom always gets upset when we go out alone since she knows how brutal the paparazzi can be. But a kid riding her bike to the park isn’t really that interesting so I was fine.
   
It really was beautiful there, even though it was a little scary going underground to get into the dome itself.



   It was worth it though; I caught some really pretty butterflies and spent a nice afternoon in the park.

   

   

   I wish I could live life like that all the time. Just surrounded by all the beautiful things I can find. Bridgeport is a really dull city. It can be beautiful at night, but most of what I see is just the dull grayness of it. Maybe when I’m older I can move to a better town, one that has a lot less paparazzi and a lot more heart.               

Author’s Notes:
*This is just a quick little update just cause.
*Athena sounds so mature since she is a genius and stuff.
*All of this really happened, well except Aphrodite’s gossip didn’t really say that obviously.
*Yay for an update not at 1:00 am!
*Please let me know if there is any spelling or grammar mistakes in this chapter.
*Thanks for reading and please let me know what you think.
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Re: A Triple Experience Chapter 9: Athena's Turn
« Reply #58 on: February 20, 2012, 07:17:27 AM »
Aww! The girls are so cute. It's so funny how they have their disagreements like all siblings. I hope they grow out of them and learn to like each other! Very well-written and funny chapter. ;D By the way I was wondering what all of their traits were?

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« Reply #59 on: February 20, 2012, 12:23:15 PM »
Athena is definitely my favourite of the triplets! I can relate to her more than the other's. I really dislike Aphrodite. :P Love how you're expanding their personalities so much, can't wait for the next update!