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Re: The Return of Brooks - Goodnight Sweet Red.. 11/28 Update #5
« Reply #60 on: November 29, 2014, 06:42:16 PM »
Nooooo!  Not Red!  *sniffles* Oh poor Colt... poor Skye!

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Goodnight Sweet Red.. 11/28 Update #5
« Reply #61 on: November 30, 2014, 04:32:07 AM »
First off, RiP Kennedi - you were a great helper! But Katrina.. oh it's just so sad.. I can't imagine how Colt is going to be able to deal with this!!  Absolutely perfect screenshots of Katrina's last moments.. well done!!



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Re: The Return of Brooks - Goodnight Sweet Red.. 11/28 Update #5
« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2014, 02:29:34 AM »
R.I.P. Katrina... Oh, sad day.
On a happy note... LOL @ Colt beating up Cassandra!  ;D Some great screenshots in the gym, really funny update!
Skye is so, so pretty but I guess she's her daddy's girl? ... time will tell.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - Goodnight Sweet Red.. PT 2 11/28 Update #6
« Reply #63 on: December 02, 2014, 12:32:38 PM »
Don: You are one brave dude. Colt will be here in a minute and your still here.

Grim: At least I don't hide under the women's skirts.



Don: At least this time, I won't be the blunt of his angry, it's gonna be you.



Grim: Ooooo I'm so scared of the Big Bad Blow hard!




Grim: What's up Colt? How was work?

Colt: *stopping* What are you doing here?



Grim: *Gliding by* Oh I just came by to pick up your wife.

Colt: *Paused* Your funny you know that..

Don: Smooth Grim, Really smooth.



Grim: Look Colt. It was her time, It was not my choice. I was just doing my duty. Ask your watcher, She saw it all.



Colt: *yelling* You leave my watcher out of this. Red was fine when I left for work. She was happy and healthy. You did this out of spite.

Grim: Wait a minute. Colt, you and I go back a long time here. I'm just doing my job..



Colt: *deep breathe* Doing your job? Your job is to make my life a living nightmare. Your boss still has my parents from the other failed dynasty plus my lost family in that one.




Colt: So excuse me if I think your job right now blows.

Grim: OH NO!! I've seen that look before, Colt, calm down now. We don't have to do this.. Col....













Colt: Now where is she??

Grim: Urn, in your bedroom.. *groans* That is gonna be sore in the morning..



Colt: Get out. I don't want to see you when I come back out here, Understand?



Colt: *depressed* Oh Red, my sweet, sweet red.. Why tonight? I should have been here!

Hey big guy. You okay?

Colt: *sighs* I will be. I just want to be alone.

Well, When your ready, you can use your computer to read the note she left for you. She told me what to tell you, but I thought I would put it in words and you can have it to keep.

Colt: Thanks.. Now go..

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Re: The Return of Brooks - A Zesty New Housemate. 12/2 Update
« Reply #64 on: December 02, 2014, 04:16:10 PM »
Colt: My Red, I will miss her, but I have Skye to remind of her. thank you for keeping this for me.

I'm glad I could help





Colt: Now to lock it away in the cloud for safe storage.



Colt: Honey, I have to tell you something. It's not easy for me to tell you this. But your mom passed last night.

Skye: Yes I know dad, Don came in and told me. It's okay dad. I'm fine.




Colt took that moment to go out and jog. Don going in and talking to his teenage daughter didn't sit well with him.

While out he ran into Zest Johnny, and some other guy I can't remember his name.



But after a few minutes Colt and Zest where bored of his chattered and walked away.



Colt: Boy, I had to get away from him, he was putting me to sleep.

Zest: Oh man, my brain was like ..Zzzzzzz



Colt: I'm digging the suit man. It's looks cool on you.

Zest: Hey, Thanks but I thought you said that Bob Simhope called wanting it back or something. *laughing*



Colt: Um yeah, about that Zest, I'm sorry about that and for clogging for drain. You see, I had aspirations to fulfill and I had to get them done.

Zest: Let me guess? Dynasty?



Colt: Yep, so you know my problem?



Zest: Man, You should have come to me when you first hit town. I would have loved to have helped you out.

Colt: Now,  he tells me.



Colt: I'm just glad we are cool now.

Zest: Me too. I'm glad we cleared the air.



Zest: Thanks for inviting me over.

Colt: Well, I wanted to ask you something but with that Landgraab brat hanging around, I don't want him knowing my business.

Zest: Don't you just hate that?



Colt: So, You wanna move in Zest? I mean, I know we are all getting up in years, but we could use all the help we can get.

Zest: Are you sure? I mean, I'd love too, if that's what you want.


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Re: The Return of Brooks - A Zesty New Housemate. 12/2 Update
« Reply #65 on: December 02, 2014, 10:07:45 PM »
Not sure what to think about Colt being nice to someone other than his family! hahaha.. His fight with Grim was great, I also loved how Don looked so excited about it in the background. How you wrote  the part about Colt finding out and him dealing with it was really great story telling - you truly did it justice.

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Re: The Return of Brooks - A Zesty New Housemate. 12/2 Update
« Reply #66 on: December 02, 2014, 11:32:17 PM »
Yeah! Colt IS getting some Zest in his life, nice!  :)
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Re: The Return of Brooks - A Zesty New Housemate. 12/2 Update
« Reply #67 on: December 04, 2014, 12:39:34 PM »
Not sure what to think about Colt being nice to someone other than his family! hahaha.. His fight with Grim was great, I also loved how Don looked so excited about it in the background. How you wrote  the part about Colt finding out and him dealing with it was really great story telling - you truly did it justice.

Well, He DOES have to have some friends so he might as well get some practice in now so he can get those friends.. LOL

Yeah! Colt IS getting some Zest in his life, nice!  :)

Everyone needs a little Zest in their life.  ;D

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Random Everyday Stuff 12/4 Update
« Reply #68 on: December 04, 2014, 01:27:20 PM »
Colt goes to the library to get his hand at making friends. Plus he has to level up his logic for his next promotion.



Skye goes along so she can admire some art work for her aspirations and do her homework. Plus Colt can keep her away from Don. Those two just can't stop flirting with each other.



Back at home later:

Don: Skye seems to be blossoming into a very beautiful young lady Colt. If your not careful you'll be having to beat the young men away from the house.

Colt: She is her mothers likeness. I hope I have to BEAT only young men away my friend.



Zest: Hopefully its only a schoolgirl crush. I mean, he's a tough looking guy like her daddy. He's been in her life from day one, Colt. Let's just hope that's all it is.

Colt: Your right Zest. Maybe I'm over reacting because of the situation between Katrina and Don when I met her. Hopefully he would not use her daughter to get back at me?



Zest:*calling from door* You coming in big guy?

Colt: Maybe later, I want to workout some more.




Colt: That rat would do that to me. He's a rat and dirty one too..



Hey you need to throw a costume party tomorrow. That would fun. Your almost done and it would be a great stress breaker.

Colt: Sure I'll order one up, and hope for the best.



Umm yeah, you work out that stress on the hill challenge..



OH LOOK!!! Colt has completed his Post cards!! YAY Museum pieces are done.




Yeah, okay ... Not a good choice guys..

Colt: (Black suit) Hey they stole my idea. Don get to dancing dude. I need three..

Don:(beige suit) This is so not cool.

Zest: (Blue suit) They told me this was one of a kind.



Zest: Dina your cake Hamburger cake is really awesome.

Dina: Well I must say that your costume is out of this world Zest.

Don: Yeah Zest, Costume is just great..


Zest: *yelling to Colt* Nice costume man.. Don't forget to open the hatch before using the bathroom. *thinking* I have got to go!!!!



Considering we have some near misses and alot of costume talking. Colt got gold..



Colt: I'm glad that's over with, now to clean up.. (as he pickpockets the bartender)



Skye: So sis, Dad has a birthday tomorrow and I know you and Don also have one. I am thinking of throwing a party for you guys so I can get my first on under my belt for my requirements.

Dina: That sounds great honey.



Well Colt has to get his Promotion done at work plus he needs 3 more friends.. He is working hard at this.. ( in game I am at Gen 3 already but bare with me. LOL )

This is Colt Postcard Collection in Museum plus I added some of the things he got from his job. Just for looks.


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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #69 on: December 04, 2014, 01:56:55 PM »
Skye: Good morning Zest, how are you this morning?

Zest: Morning Skye, I'm just fine. What are your plans this fine Saturday?



Skye: I am going to give me dad, sister and Don a surprise party for their birthday today. That way I can started on those party things. I am almost thru my first aspiration.

Zest: Sounds wonderful honey. I'm sure your daddy will like that.



Skye: But first I have to finish my homework from yesterday. I didn't get it done.

Zest: Need my help honey?



Don: Nope son, I'm gonna help her with her homework.



Don: Now, Today I will turning to a elder, but a young hot stud of an elder, still in my prime. You will be turning into a young adult soon after. IF you put One and one together. What does that equal?

The sound of your body getting crushed if Colt hears you talking like that to his daughter!



Don: Really? Out of all the sims in this house, you have to be here, all up in my stuff?

Yep, because your just a gigolo, and every bodies knows.. 

Skye: Stop it, both of you.. please.


Skye: Yes, I would like to plan a Birthday party.



Skye: Where? Anywhere but here is fine. Yes that's fine thank you.



Well when you say "anywhere but here, that's what you get."



The party service sent them to someones home.




It was cramped, no radio, no one could dance. The caterer made the cake for Colt ..



Out went the candles and up went the sparkles..



Colt: I still look fine!! That's all matters..



When he was congratulated by the home owner he pick pocketed the man!!




Then is it was Dina's turn. She ages nicely..




Then it was Don's turn..







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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #70 on: December 04, 2014, 07:28:34 PM »
Don has a death wish...

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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #71 on: December 04, 2014, 08:51:07 PM »
Yep... but I think Don has another wish on his bucket list before that one!  ;)
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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #72 on: December 04, 2014, 08:58:23 PM »
You two have me rolling over here! Lol I'm trying to decorate my tree.

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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #73 on: December 04, 2014, 09:25:24 PM »
You two have me rolling over here! Lol I'm trying to decorate my tree.

Hehehehehe, I'd apologize, but I wouldn't mean it lol!  What about you Play?  (Which, that was a brilliant comment, btw lol)

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Re: The Return of Brooks - 3 Elder Birthdays 12/4 Update
« Reply #74 on: December 04, 2014, 10:10:55 PM »
I'm cracking up.... boy I can't WAIT to read the 'Don' chapter! LOL  ;D
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