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In The Dark- Newest Log- Running
« Reply #75 on: June 27, 2012, 10:55:34 AM »
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« Reply #76 on: June 27, 2012, 12:27:26 PM »
This is really good, I'm looking forward to more. :)



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« Reply #77 on: June 27, 2012, 12:58:10 PM »
This is really good, I'm looking forward to more. :)
Thanks! I am glad that it's interesting! It's fun for me to think of what to throw at our characters next!

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« Reply #78 on: June 27, 2012, 04:48:07 PM »
"Hailey!" A voice screamed after me, it was trying to catch me, but it can not. "Hailey!" It cried again, I kept running. Drowning out the voice. You can not run for ever, the voice in my head told me. Not forever, but close to it. I replied back to it. The voice was right, I don't think I even got five miles before my foot hooked on the uneven pavement and I fell on my knee. Get up! The voice in my head yelled. No, I replied to it. I just want to sit, whoever it is that the real voice belongs to can find me. "Hailey..." They said out of breath, I look up and meet his gray eyes. "Leave me alone." I mumble. But he helps me to my feet anyway, and I see Sunset Valley. Different, modern. Lost of it's old charm. Beaten down and remolded. "Look what I've got," Warren said, holding out a folder to me. I take it gently take it into my hands, and slide open the cover. A gasp catches in my throat, "What?" Sheets, full of names and dates and information. The first one makes my jaw drop.
Name: Kayla Salt   New Name: Ayala Salt
Housing: The Old Alto House  Spouse: Tommy Wendell
Age: 23 3/5

"So Ayala is Kayla?" Warren nods, " Read the next one."
Name: Benjamin Pole New Name: Benji Pole
Housing: Old Jolina House  Spouse: Julie Thompson
Age: 23 7/12

They are five other sheets in the folder."So, are they alive?" I ask, fingers crossed. "It appears so." He says, grinning, slightly. "Then lets go see them." I remember Jamie, she was nice I guess. Her house was down the street from mine, my second home. I lead Warren, and we stare wide eyed at all the changes. We get glances as well, I guess we look out of place. Or should be in school. I hesitate at the front door of the house. I am used to running up and the door being open, Jamie making cookies or reading a book. But Jamie isn't alive and no longer lives here, Benjamin does. I press the button before I can chicken out. The door swings open, Julie stands smiling. She looks older, she isn't a teen. She's at least twenty by the looks. "Hailey?" She ask, I nod. She throws her arms around me, I was never never one for hugs. But I let Julie hug me. "Who's at the door?" Benjamen's voice asks. "Why don't you come and see!" She says. Benjamen comes and stares wide eyed at us. "Warren? Hailey?" He asks, looking confused. I nod and he comes and man hugs Warren. Julie invites us inside. "What happened to you guys? How did you get out?" I ask, I want answers, I need them. She bounces on the balls of her feet, something Julie has always done. "Why don't I call them and we can tell you all together?" I nod and she flips her phone out of her pocket. She makes a few calls, saying "Just come over, quick!". Soon many people stand in their living room, hugging us. We all sit on the furniture that Benjamen and Warren arranged.

"So, " Sophie says nervously. How are you?" I almost say fine, but I don't. Because I am not fine, I am a emotional wreak. Warren just shrugs his shoulders and his eyes  meet mine, I hope he saw my eyes thanking him. Kayla stares at us, her face is cold, with a hidden emotion. Guilt. Suddenly, I'm on my feet. I don't remember deciding to do that. "You," I say pointing at Kayla. "You lied to us." My voice sounds hurt, because I am hurt. "I didn't want to lie." Kayla says softly. "Yeah sure," Then Kayla is on her feet. "I had to!" She yells. " I couldn't say that I was Kayla in front of Dale and Becky.
   "Well, Shirley's sitting over there. You told her, right?" I glance at Shirley, she looks hurt and confused, two feeling I have been having a lot and come to know. She glares at her mother. "Mommy!" She yells standing up. "You told me you weren't Kayla! You lied to me! I....I.....I hate you!" She screamed. She ran out the back door, Kayla made no move to follow her. "See what you have done?" I ask her, turning on my heal and following Shirley. She's standing near the back of the fence, her face turned away from the house. She looks over her shoulder to see me, her face softens and she wipes away the tears from her eyes. "I can't believe my mom lied to me,". "I can't believe it either." I stand next to her and put my arm around her shoulders awkwardly. I don't know how to comfort her. But I guess it helps because she sniffles back tears. "Thank you." she tells me. "For what?" "For making my mom tell the truth. Sure it made me cry, but now I know." She's one tough little girl, I would still be crying. Either that or a sixteenth of the way to Bridgeport. "You are a brave little girl and smart too." I tell her, I don't know why I said it. I don't even know if it's true, but it feels like the right thing to say.  Eventually, I bring her back inside. Warren looks and me and mouths, "Are you guys okay?" I nod and sit next to him, Shirley"s eyes seem to spit fire at Kayla. She comes to sit down on my lap. Everyone stares at Shirley, and she shrinks back to me. "Shirley," Kayla starts to say. "I don't care." Shirley says. "Leave me alone." She puts her head against my shoulder, I put my arms around her and rock back and forth a little. "Now, I, we, have told you our journey. Tell us yours." Warren says. They all look at each other, as if deciding whether to tell him. "I don't have all day" Warren says impatiently.
  Sophie starts. "Well, we found your letter, the one Hailey wrote. We decided to come after you guys. So we prepared to leave. We packed what ever we wanted to bring and what we needed. Then we opened up the doors and we were greeted with fog. The fog was cold and it twisted it's way around and around. It was cold, freezing. Scary and uninviting. But we continued anyway. We decided to leave, so we were leaving. I don't know how far we walked, it seemed like forever, Is till feel the fog." She whispers. Julie picks up where she left off. " We walked fro a very long time, when we came to a spot where the air seemed freer and the fog moved a bit more. When we heard a voice. A chilling, sends chills up your body, voice. Then we saw her, at the far end of the room. Smiling at us.
She was clothed in white, from head to two, it seemed she emerged from the fog itself. The only color was her blood red lips. 'Hello children.' She said grinning, a grin of hate and loathing. 'It seems you found a way to escape. How clever you are! Just. How. Clever.' She spit out the words. Then she grinned again. "In a moment, I will be gone. You will be left, a door will apear. And you will continue one. Ruining my plANS.' She turned away from us, walked and disappeared into the fog.

We stood there, gasping. But true to her word, a door appeared and we went through it. We were all immediate thrown to the ground. Sitting up, dazed, we all realized we were in front of the school. Then another lady appeared. But her voice was sweet, she smiled at us. But it seemed to pain her.

She was clothed in black. Her eys were black. 'You made it out,' she said with her pained smile. 'Good, that's good.' Then she handed us a folder, 'Take this, read it, learn, live by it. Then hide it. It will help you fit in. Best of luck.' And she was gone. Disappeared into the night. So we followed the instructions in the folder. Then hid it."   
 "Not good enough!" Kayla said annoyed, "Because they found it." I ignored her. "How long have you been here?" I ask.
"Six years....."

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Re: In The Dark- Newest Log- How We Got Here
« Reply #79 on: June 27, 2012, 05:06:53 PM »
Oh dear! At least Hailey and Warren reunited with the rest of the kids, even if it's been six years for the others. But now I wonder who those women are! Great update. I love the pictures with the lady in white.

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« Reply #80 on: June 27, 2012, 05:09:14 PM »
Oh dear! At least Hailey and Warren reunited with the rest of the kids, even if it's been six years for the others. But now I wonder who those women are! Great update. I love the pictures with the lady in white.
Thanks! I love that picture too!

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« Reply #81 on: June 27, 2012, 05:55:07 PM »
I'm glad everyone is together once again. But those women are awfully spooky.



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« Reply #82 on: June 27, 2012, 05:59:33 PM »
I'm glad everyone is together once again. But those women are awfully spooky.
They were really fun to make! I might have an update tonight, the story is nearing it's end.

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« Reply #83 on: June 28, 2012, 04:23:35 AM »
I wonder who the two woman is and what the plan is the woman in white talked about. But I'm glad they are safe, I hope they are save!

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« Reply #84 on: June 28, 2012, 10:06:33 AM »
I wonder who the two woman is and what the plan is the woman in white talked about. But I'm glad they are safe, I hope they are save!
Time will only tell! I should be able to have an update soon, at the latest this afternoon/evening. Since I want to include pictures!

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« Reply #85 on: June 28, 2012, 10:28:58 PM »
  Six years is a long time, I realized. Long enough to forget small things, and remember others. They all stayed to eat dinner with us, and Julie and Banjiman were nice enough to let Warren and I stay in their guest room for the night, till we could get our own house. Shirley stayed by side the whole time. Kayla and Tomy seemed uncomfortable, of course they should, they daughter just threw a very well deserved tantrum. They were the first to leeave, "Come on Shirley," Kayla siad, speaking for the fist time in a few hours. It's time to go." Shirley shook her head, "I want to stay with Hailey, she loves me." Kayla looked at her daughter, appalled. "I love you too, sweetheart." She said, trying to smile. But her lip quivered into a frown. Shirley shook her head, her blond hair twirling around her face. "No you don't, if you loved me you would have told me you were Kayla." Kayla looked at her daughter, pain clear in her eyes. She held her head high and looked away. Tommy tapped his feet nervously. "Well, I guess she could have a sleepover of some sort with Hailey for tonight." Kayla didn't respond. Shirley's face lit up like a light bulb and she smiled. "Thank you Daddy!" She squealed. She got off my lap and hugged him before skipping back to me. They left and soon Sophie left as well, to go home alone. Then we all fell asleep, Shirley with the biggest smile I had ever seen on her face. The next morning, we bought a house. A lovely modern home, still with it's old charm for 2012.
Two years later.
  I thought six years was a long time, two has proven to be enough. We have all gone our separate ways, in a way. Julie and Benjamen have been happily married for two years, they have twin boys, both toddlers and they are expecting a little girl nooboo in the Fall.
  Sophie meet a man, his name is Charlie Alto. He proposed to her about a month ago. So Sophie is now planing a wedding.
Tommy and Kayla have gone quite a bit away. They moved to Bridgeport shortly after we returned. They just so happened to get job opportunities there, an offer then couldn't refuse. But they both agreed it would be unfair to take Shirley away from her friends and I am now her official guardian, well, me and Warren are.
As for Warren and I, we couldn't be happier. We've been married for roughly a year. We have a beautiful little girl nooboo. Her name is Marley, she has my blond hair and Warren's gray eyes. I seemed to have misplaced her picture, I will make sure I add one later. Technically I a, the mother of two, Shirley and Marley. They get along so very well, and they bring happiness to my life every day.
  But, what happened yesterday still sticks in my head. I had just put Marley to bed and Shirley, now eight, was getting ready to go to bed. Her first day of third grade was the very next day. The doorbell rang, so I ran off to answer it so it wouldn't wake Marley, she's not very easy to put to bed! I opened the door to a very strange sight, a lady, clothed in black. Her eyes should have been empty, black pits, but they seemed so full of life. Smiling even. I walked out to the patio to speak with her, shutting the door behind me. "Who are you?" I asked as kindly as I could, I was tired myself. Taking care of a toddler was no easy task. "I'm Oma. It means life." She says. She glances nervously side to side. "May I come in? I need to speak with you." For some reason I felt like I needed to let her in, but on the other hand, she was a complete stranger. And my family was inside. "I just put my daughters to sleep, I wouldn't want to wake them." She nods. "I understand. Then meet me tomorrow, at noon at the pier. I will wait for you." And she is gone, melted into the night. Her image doesn't leave my mind.


I am sorry to say, but this evening till the beginning of August, basically the month of July, I will not have access to my computer with this saved file. Which means no updates for either of my stories. But in August you will know what the mysterious lady, Oma needs and much, much more! Thank you to all my faithful readers and I hope when I continue that you will be happy to read more! Thanks again,
Sadie

I might be able to have a short update, but with no pictures since I won't have the game.
 

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« Reply #86 on: June 29, 2012, 12:31:44 PM »
I'm so sorry that we won't be hearing from these characters for a while. :( I will wait patiently, though! I'm very curious about Oma.

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« Reply #87 on: June 29, 2012, 12:53:35 PM »
I'm so sorry that we won't be hearing from these characters for a while. :( I will wait patiently, though! I'm very curious about Oma.
Aw, thank you. Like I said I might do short post with no pictures on whats going on with the other families if I get the chance to.

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« Reply #88 on: June 29, 2012, 01:41:44 PM »
Everything seems good for the group right now. Its a good part to take a break from posting.

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« Reply #89 on: June 30, 2012, 03:52:15 PM »
Everything seems good for the group right now. Its a good part to take a break from posting.
Thanks. I wanted to leave it suspensefull but not too suspensful!

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« Reply #90 on: June 30, 2012, 06:45:17 PM »
Thanks. I wanted to leave it suspensefull but not too suspensful!
That's exactly what I thought! It had suspense but not SO suspenseful we are impatient.

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« Reply #91 on: July 04, 2012, 01:11:01 PM »
Julie
   "Julie!" Benjiman calls. "What?" I ask sharply. Dealing with twin, boy toddlers seems like an impossible task. Righ now, sleep is a dream. "Russel is crying his head off and Alan needs to be changed!" he screams from the other room. I pull myself out of bed and to the twins room. Benjiman is holding Russel in his arms, gently rocking him back and forth. I pick Alan up and change him. Alan stops crying and falls asleep. I gently lay him down in his crib and take Russel into arms. "Hush little baby," I sing rocking him back and forth. His little eye shut and his breathes become even. I then lay him down and lean against the wall. "Thank you." Benjiman says smiling. "Yeah, welcome." I say lightly. Benjiman leaves the room and I hear him go to the bedroom. I look at my two 'angels'. I love them, but I love sleep too. In the long run, I'm still very happy with my little nooboos. While Benjiman's at work, they keep me company. Nap time is, in my opionion, the best thing ever
invented. I leave the room, and quietly shut the door. I make sure the front and back doors are locked before going to bed.
This time the sun is up, I slip out of bed. Since Benjiman is still out cold. I go to check on Alan and Russel. When I walk in, Alan is still asleep. But Russel is sitting in his crib. "Mama!" he cries. I smile and swoop him up from the crib. I hug him and Rick him gently. "I hungra." he says, in his small baby voice. "Then let's feed you." I spin him gently as I leave the room and he laughs and smiles. I put him in the crib and place his bottle in front of him. He takes it in his little hands and starts to drink. I pour myself a cup of coffee and a piece of toast. He eats as I eat and the house is quiet. Russel finishes eating and throws the bottle on the ground. I grab it fit before it hits and Russel laughs and claps his little hands, since he thought it was a show. I ruffle his hair and pick him up. And bring him back to his room. I set him down and he toddles to the block table and p,as with the blocks. And for the short hour, the house was quiet.

Hope you liked the mini update! Wifi has been spotty so I figured I would post an update while I'm on. Feel free to tell me what you think! ;D

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« Reply #92 on: July 04, 2012, 02:33:55 PM »
I love them, but I love sleep too.

;D That made me laugh! It describes the experience of having young children quite well... Great update!

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« Reply #93 on: July 04, 2012, 05:38:24 PM »
Very cute update. It was so distributive and sounds like what beginning parent would say. 

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« Reply #94 on: July 05, 2012, 04:32:35 PM »
;D That made me laugh! It describes the experience of having young children quite well... Great update!
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Very cute update. It was so distributive and sounds like what beginning parent would say. 
Thanks! I'm glad it was realistic! I just thought about my  younger cousins, but ya love them anyways! ;D

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« Reply #95 on: July 14, 2012, 03:29:23 PM »
Tommy
   The cars zip pass on the street, twenty floors down. The stars twinkle down at them, dimmer then the clubs that blare music at all hours of the night. I know I told Kayla that I liked Bridgeport, but I miss Sunset Valley, then my mind drifts to Shirley. I miss her so much! She was so precious and loving. But she's with Hailey, I hate to admitt , but she's better off where she is then here. I sigh, Iwish Kayla would come home, she's out every night, at "work" . By the time she comes back I'm at work, and then she sleeps the day away. Beyond being sane, and now I feel like I'm just venting. I have a good job, a wife and a daughter who's in better hands. So why do I feel so sad? Maybe the cars hold the answers. Or maybe they are hiding in the stars. . . Or maybe, I just need a nice, long break with Shirley.

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« Reply #96 on: August 06, 2012, 10:47:57 AM »
Newest log is here!!!! Now, here it is,

Log 15-What Oma Needs
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   The alarm clock lets out a dull bing, bing. "Wake up, Warren!" I whisper half asleep. "Why?" He ask, still half asleep. "Is Marley toddling around the house?" "No," "Is someone at the door?" "No," "Then I'm going back to sleep." "Warren!" I hit with a pillow, and he groans. "It's Monday, Shirley has to go to school." "Okay, I'm up." He says. I get up and get dressed before waking Shirley up.
   "Shirley, time to wake up." I say kneeling by her bed. "Mph." "Time to wake up for school." She jumps out of bed, and smiles. 'Yay!" She puts on her new dress we bought on Saturday, and patiently waits for me to tie the bow in the back. Once tied, she bounces up and down while I grab Marley out of her crib. "Warren is making breakfast, I'll be out there in a minute." She nods and skips out of the room.
   "Mama!" Marley squeals. "Marley!" I put her little yellow dress on and tie her hair into pigtails. "There was a farmer who had a dog, and Bingo was his name-o. B-I-N-G-O, B-I-N-G-O, B-I-N-G-O and Bingo was his name-o!" She sings as I get her dressed. i swoop her up and into her high chair, still singing that Bingo dog song. I place her oatmeal on the tray, and she shoves her hands into it. Square, our dog, sits patiently by the high chair. Waiting for some crumbs on the floor/ Shirley and Warren sit at the table. Shirley eating pancakes and Warren drinking coffee while reading the paper. I grab the cup of coffee pf the table and sip it. "I'm so excited, Halie!" She exclaims in between bites. "Will you do my hair/" "Of course." I grab the hair brush and a hair tie from the drawer. I pull back her hair into a high ponytail and brush it flat. "Thank you!" She places her plate in the sink and skips to grab her shoes. "Warren, lets go walk her to the bus." He nods and puts the paper down and follows me to the door. I put Marley on my hip. And we wave as Shirley gets on the bus. "Bye!" Shirley cries as she climbs on the bus and sits next to her friend.
   At Eleven Thirty, I take a breath and pull my shoes on. "Warren, I'm taking Square for a walk. Be back by two!" Okay," he yells back. "I might take Marley to the park." "Bye." I yell and walk out the door with Square at my heels.
   At the beach, I let Square free. And of course, Square being a genius, runs and drinks water from the ocean. [I didn't know dogs could do that!]

I laugh, then I see her. She stands out because she's dressed in all black.

She stands alone, staring at the ocean. She turns around, and I wonder how she heard me.
"Hello, Halie. You came alone?" "Yes, I did, Oma." "I need you to do something for me. But first I must show you something."

"Take my hand." Slowly, I reach my hand out. She sticks hers out, as if were shaking hands.
  There's a blinding flash of white light, before the world comes onto focus. A dark purple house looms up. Three little girls sit on a bench on the patio.

   "That's me and my sisters." Oma's voice startles me half to death. "Can they see us?" I ask in a hushed voice. "No, this is only a memory. They can not see or hear us." I  nod, the whole idea perplexing me. But I spent what i thought was only a few months but was actually seven hundred years in a school.
"The one on the far right is me. I always wore darker clothing." I nod, the little girl who becomes Oma is pretty. "In the middle is my sister Jill. Jill was the type of person who always wanted to help. And who had a look that made you always want to help her. And that," She pointed to the far left. "Is my evil sister Kali. Kali tricked everyone, by looking angelic and then pulling crimes. Then blaming me. I hated her, still do. She was just evil, mean to everyone. We argued most of the time"

A still of Oma and Kali arguing filled my vision, followed by Oma hugging Jill.

"Jill and me were friends, we always played together and she made me feel better. Because as we grew older, we discovered we had . . . powers. I realized I could send visions and memories, almost movies, to people. And they could watch time, like you are right now. And Kali," She shivered. "Kali could take things out of time. Like she did to the school, and you." A shiver ran through me, Kali made this all happen. "And Jill, she could fix everything that Kali did." "Why didn't you just have her fix it?!" I scream. "Because, something happened between us and we are no longer friends. That's why i need you, Halie." I felt frozen. The words stuck in my mouth.
   "I need you to go to Twin brook and find my sister. Tell her I am sorry, and explain what happened to you. If she doesn't believe you, show her this." She unclasp a golden locket from around her neck. She places in my hand and i slide it into my pocket. "So, will you do it?" "i, I don't know." I say uncertainty. "I understand, it's a hard decision. You have in till midnight tomorrow to tell me. If you will, meet me at the beach at midnight, if not don't bother to show up." I nod and, everything goes white again.
   And I'm left sitting on the sand, Square licks my face. And  I realize I'm soaked in salt water and covered in sand. More perplexed then ever.

Hope you liked the update and feel free to tell me what you think!
So, should Halie go to Twin Brook and meet Jill and maybe fix everything?
What do you guys think about separating it into paragraphs? I thought it would be easier to read that way.

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« Reply #97 on: August 08, 2012, 09:08:11 PM »
This story keeps getting better! I hope she goes back to Twin Brook to meet Jill. I never have a problem reading your stories. They are always nicely laid out and not confusing.

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« Reply #98 on: August 08, 2012, 09:10:48 PM »
This story keeps getting better! I hope she goes back to Twin Brook to meet Jill. I never have a problem reading your stories. They are always nicely laid out and not confusing.
Thank you! Ah, only time can tell. But Halie is very confused, and unsure what to do.

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« Reply #99 on: August 21, 2012, 11:30:12 AM »
I'm loading the game now, so update to come soon!!!