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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Seven
« Reply #75 on: September 24, 2012, 06:10:17 PM »
So life went on, and the Devlins continued in their accustomed manner. Whilst Connie privately regretted that she bore Peter no more children, they were a happier family than most. The grocery store was profitable enough to keep the family comfortably in their simple lifestyle. Peter continued to paint portraits of his family. Constance decided that her garden was fruitful enough to warrant using some of the produce to make fruitwine, which she had previously deemed a waste of profitable and edible plants.



Seal continued to bring the family presents, although these days, he took to lying in the sun more often, and Starfish was as like enough to bring back a bright feather or colourful leaf as anything of value. And Patty slowly but surely took over the running of the kitchen.



One spring evening, Patty, now nearly a young woman, was off gathering flowers with her friends, to plait in their hair. Peter came into the kitchen, whistling cheerfully. Middle age suited him, as his face gained gravitas without losing the charming spark that had first so attracted Constance. In turn, he thought Connie as beautiful as she had ever been, and the few lines on her face seemed to his artist’s eye like the sketches of their shared memories. This evening, in a particularly ebullient mood, he swept off his hat and flamboyantly presented her with a bouquet of flowers.



“What a charming surprise, Peter,” Connie exclaimed. “I think these are the same kind as you gave me on our wedding day.”
“When, as you’ll remember, I promised to always bring you wildflowers when I see any worthy of your beauty. Which is fortunately a rare occurrence, as our house would otherwise be covered with blooms, with no room for the pots and pans.”
“You silver-tongued charmer, you,” Connie laughed. “Quick now, and take me to bed while we have the house to ourselves. It’s not often that I’m glad I only gave you one child, but now is one of those times.”



A week or so later, Connie felt a very unusual pain. Not being accustomed to illness, she ignored it, until the nausea made itself felt very clearly. The nausea continued for days, much to Peter’s vocal alarm, and Connie’s private fear.



Eventually, she went to old Mother Picot, who was now so old and wizened, she resembled a wrinkled old apple.

“Don’t be daft, Constance, you’re with child,” she said briskly. “It’s not often that there’s such a distance between two children, but you’re not t’first, and you won’t be last. Here’s some tea, for nausea, and get your husband to fetch me this time, not the doctor, when your time comes.”

Connie was bewildered. She had thought that her time for child-bearing was over, and was concerned that at her age, she would not be able to look after the child as well as they had with Patty. Still, when she told Peter, his reaction was undiluted delight, and Patience was also overjoyed at the thought of having a new baby in the house, so Connie pushed aside her fears about being an older mother, and tried to carry on as normal.



But this pregnancy was in every respect more difficult than her first pregnancy. She ached more, she tired easily, and the nausea returned sporadically. By the time her belly was large, she was more than ready to give birth. She took to wandering at night again, remembering that she had seen pregnant mares walked around the yard when it was nearing their time. Seal would stick close as a shadow on these walks, occasionally pressing his nose into her hand.
It was on one of these walks that the pains came. She stumbled home, and woke Peter, sending him to fetch Mother Picot. Patience bustled in, ready to help, but took one look at her mother and turned pale as mist. She wisely kept her father out of the room, and they sat up, united in their worry.



The labour was long and hard, and Mother Picot looked grimmer as time passed. Connie was near fainting from exhaustion when she gave one last push, and moments later, Mother Picot laid a babe in her arms. But, unlike Patience, this baby was not screaming in indignity at the ungraceful manner of his birth. He was not in Connie’s arms a minute, before Mother Picot snatched him back and slapped him hard. Connie nearly struck her, in her sudden sweep of emotion, but had not the energy. And now the baby was wailing – a thin, high cry. Mother Picot turned away to swaddle the babe, but not before Connie saw the look of relief pass over her face.

“Tha’ll want to name this one quickly, or not at all, I think,” she said gently.

“He shall be called Justin Joseph, for I pray that this child will be treated justly,” Constance mumbled, before falling unconscious, exhausted.

After his earliest years, which caused more than a few grey hairs in his mother and father, Justin was a delightfully friendly child. His eyes sometimes seemed to focus far away, and he was far slower to walk or talk than Patty had been, but his evident delight when one of his family picked him up to cuddle him was infectious, and his face was generally wreathed in smiles.



It soon became apparent that Justin would never be the same as other children. Connie kept him close, and Patty was besotted with her younger brother. Her naturally maternal nature found an outlet in caring for her younger brother, and Connie would often watch them together with a mixture of love and concern.



One day, as Justin watched Peter paint his portrait, cooing in fascination at all the colours, she drew Patty aside.

“Patty, I can see that you love and care for him. I want to ask you something, but I cannot in all good faith pretend that it will be easy for you…”

“Mother,” Patty interrupted, with the supreme confidence of youth. “Of course I will always look after him. He is my brother, and even were he not, he would still be the most charming boy on the whole Island, and completely irresistible.”

Connie smiled at this, but her heart was still troubled. “I know that, but I must tell you – I don’t think he will ever be able to look after himself, to lead his own family… I think that this may be a life-long commitment.”

“All family is a life-long commitment,” said Patty blithely. “Please be assured, I will look after Justin for as long as he needs me.”

Connie sighed, relieved. “Thank you, Patience. I know that this will not be easy, despite what you may think, but I am reassured that he will be well looked-after, even as I am taken to the graveyard.”

Without knowing what she was saying, Patty suddenly blurted out “There’s treasure in the graveyard, for them as’d seek it.”

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #76 on: September 24, 2012, 07:29:25 PM »
Plot twists away! Another well done chapter DeLouche! ;D

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #77 on: September 24, 2012, 11:50:37 PM »
That was quite a twist! So Justin is insane...

Patty is becoming very pretty. Her headpiece looks sooo periodic. Poor Connie, I have a friend with a mentally challenged sister and I know what a responsibility it is.

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #78 on: September 25, 2012, 04:03:05 AM »
What a beautiful chapter! Welcome Justin and doesn't Patience look pretty!

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #79 on: September 25, 2012, 04:23:49 AM »
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. It's like you're writing a book here! :)

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #80 on: September 25, 2012, 07:15:21 AM »
Welcome, Justin! Peter looks quite distinguished with his grays.  :P I love how you integrate all of the Dynasty requirements into your story. As others have said, this feels much more like a novel than a mere story. Excellent work, as usual.  ;D

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #81 on: September 25, 2012, 12:05:09 PM »
Lovely updates. Poor Justin, but I'm sure he will be well taken care off.



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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #82 on: September 25, 2012, 04:48:46 PM »
It's amazing, how your longer piece of prose evoqued even more pictures, than your normal text and pics. Well done!
Edit: This comment applies to chapter seven.


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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #83 on: September 25, 2012, 05:02:55 PM »
Oh! A late child born... and maybe slightly feeble?
I very much like how Patience sticks up for him. I like it even more, when she breaks her silence, and reminds her mama of a treasure to seek. :)

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #84 on: September 26, 2012, 11:02:18 AM »
This just gets better and better, I really love how you're converting all the sim elements into your story rather than just shoving them in as traits or anything. It makes it feel really authentic and just like others have said, like a novel. :)

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #85 on: September 27, 2012, 12:45:54 PM »
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Plot twists away! Another well done chapter DeLouche! ;D

Thanks Phoenix! Glad you're enjoying it ;D

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Patty is becoming very pretty. Her headpiece looks sooo periodic. Poor Connie, I have a friend with a mentally challenged sister and I know what a responsibility it is.

I think she's very pretty too :) I think Connie is aware of how much work a child is, especially a child that has different needs to most children, and she knows that she's older than she used to be, and she's worried that Patty is taking on more work than she realises... It's not that Justin himself is a problem, more that Connie is an older mother with less energy, and she wants Patience to be able to go out and live her life without worrying... And, as it happens, Justin isn't actually insane (although I might add that trait later).

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What a beautiful chapter! Welcome Justin and doesn't Patience look pretty!

Thank you Toni! Justin is a total sweetheart, and Patience is gorgeous. I think the family, whilst maybe not a typical family, is awesome, they're great to play (although require plenty of micromanaging - it's taking longer to play than I thought).

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Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. It's like you're writing a book here!

Haha, it might turn out book-length by the final generation! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope you keep on liking the story!

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Welcome, Justin! Peter looks quite distinguished with his grays.  :P I love how you integrate all of the Dynasty requirements into your story. As others have said, this feels much more like a novel than a mere story.

I was really quite sad when he became an elder... it means his time is running out  :'( But yes, he is rather rocking the grey hair. And he's a devoted daddy to his little boy - they both keep very odd waking hours, and are often found reading together at 3am  ;D

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Lovely updates. Poor Justin, but I'm sure he will be well taken care off.

Thanks Joanne! Poor Justin, nothing! He's very loved, and is racking up the happiness points faster than any toddler has a right to ;D

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Oh! A late child born... and maybe slightly feeble?
I very much like how Patience sticks up for him. I like it even more, when she breaks her silence, and reminds her mama of a treasure to seek.

He's not terribly quick to learn, but he's got his own potential. Patience is an adoring older sister.

Connie hadn't told anyone about that, and there's no way that Patience could have known... so I think this will be interesting....

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I really love how you're converting all the sim elements into your story rather than just shoving them in as traits or anything. It makes it feel really authentic and just like others have said, like a novel. :)

I'll try to make traits clear in the way that the characters act, or drop them in if I can work it in naturally... but as far as I'm concerned, I need to show their personalities by their actions... I'm so chuffed so many people have likened this to a novel, I've always wanted to be a writer, but have never really thought I could do it (being a novellist = for other people)... it's very enjoyable to just... write!

This  week (as all my weeks seem to be) has been ridiculously busy, and I've barely had a chance to play, but I hope to have a decent-length chapter by Sunday...

I normally play extended life-spans, so on one hand, it seems to be going very quickly (I can't believe Connie and Peter are elders already!), but on the other hand, it's also going quite slowly, because the playing takes time (because of all the micromanaging) and the writing also takes time... but I'm finding it very worthwhile, and a completely new gameplay experience...

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Eight
« Reply #86 on: September 27, 2012, 04:55:29 PM »
I find your explanations, both of game-play and writing, fascinating! Thank you for sharing with us!  :D

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Nine
« Reply #87 on: October 03, 2012, 06:46:18 PM »
Apologies for the delay in updating... my game is being, ahem, rather slow, so it's taken me a while to get these screenshots, and I'm still not entirely happy with them... Anyway, on with the show :)

Chapter Nine

"What did you say," Connie repeated, her face lined with shock.

Patience looked unsure of herself. "I... I don't know why I said that... I think I heard it somewhere."

"Who told you that there was 'treasure in the graveyard for them as'd seek it', Patience?" Connie's voice sounded dry.

"I... I had a dream. A man came to me... he was dripping, and blue, but he was kind, I think..." Pattie was now really worried at the grey tone of her mother's face.

Connie suddenly sank to her knees. Pattie rushed to her, fearing that her mother was ill, but Connie looked up at her, and Pattie saw no anger in her eyes, just a pale determination.

"Then... I must go to the graveyard. Pattie, you look after Justin."

"Take Papa too," Pattie blurted.

"Dearheart, it's sweet of you to be concerned, but I am not afraid of the graveyard," Connie smiled weakly.

"No! No, I mean... I think Papa will find something too... He said... the man said something about vegetables, and about fishing, and that you were halfway there..." Pattie trailed off.

Connie put her hands on her daughter's shoulders. "Thank you for telling me. And you are right. He was a kind man."

Connie strode off purposefully, and Pattie sighed, and picked up Justin. She did not know what she had done. She hoped it was the right thing. She looked lovingly at her little brother, as he reached out to her face, smiling, his eyes focussed far away.




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Connie and Peter walked into the graveyard, hand in hand. It was as deserted as always. The Islanders, a superstitious folk, mostly left their dead alone once they had been buried, and there were few flowers. A statue of a weeping angel  in front of the pond, and the two grey mausoleums standing to the rear of the graveyard, looking down stonily over the tombstones, surrounded by scrub.

"I don't see anything," Peter whispered loudly.

Despite herself, Connie giggled. She whispered back, "Why are you whispering?"

Peter just looked at her, before breaking into his wide grin. "Aren't we looking for treasure?"

Connie steeled herself. "Yes. And treasure traditionally lives... underground. I think we had better enter one of those mausoleums."

In silence, they both walked up the path, towards the greystone building on the right. Peter pushed gently on the door, and it swung open. There were steps in front of them, and Connie unconsciously squeezed Peter's hand as they descended into the earth.

Five minutes later, they both ran out into the sunshine, gasping for air.

"There was no treasure down there," puffed Peter.

"Absolutely none," agreed Connie breathlessly.

They stood and looked at each other, unsure as to their next move.

"Well, I'm not digging, at any rate," said Connie decisively.

Peter smiled at her fondly. "I think that would be unwise, yes." He reached down, plucked a flower from the bush growing next to the mausoleum, and handed it to his wife. "Not as beautiful as you, sweetheart, but this will do for the moment."



As her fingers grasped the flower, a strange feeling went through Connie. It was as if the flower were made of cold metal, containing strength beyond any normal plant. She nearly dropped it in shock, but her hand closed tight around the stem without any conscious thought. She stared at it in fascinated horror.

"I'm glad you think I'm prettier than this... death's head," she said shakily. A thought struck her. "Peter! I think... I think this is my treasure. It feels... I cannot explain, but I think I must keep this flower, and try and plant it."

"If you plant it, it will grow," Peter shrugged. "That flower looks like a death's head fritillary. They say it protects the holder from mortal harm. An old wives' tale, of course."

Connie remembered her father's words from years ago. "Eight generations..." she said softly. "Don't forget Peter, it was an old wife that brought our children into the world."

Peter looked at her, his face unreadable. Then he smiled. "If plants are your treasure my sweet, perhaps this pond holds mine." He wandered over to the pond, and looked into its murky depths. "I think you should go home, darling. I have a mind to stay and fish for a while."

Connie agreed, her heart beating wildly. She felt that she should not hold onto this flower, that it was not hers yet. She felt that she had not yet earned the right to hold it. She left Peter whistling and baiting his hook.

When she got home, she was cheered to see the sight of a clean kitchen, a pot on the fire, and Patience sitting down with Justin, attempting to teach him a word or two, with little success.

"Can you say... Pattie? Pat-tee."

Justing gurgled, looking up at her adoringly.



Connie felt her heart contract with love for the two of them. "At that age, Pattie, you were babbling broken sentences to me. Such a bright child you were!"

Pattie scowled. "Justin is not foolish, Mama. Well, perhaps a little foolish. But I have seen him watch Papa paint. I have seen his eyes follow the colours. It is the only time his eyes seem to focus at all, truth be told."

Connie smiled gently at her protective daughter. "All children are not alike, dearheart, and I have no doubt that Justin will find his own strengths in time, whether he turns out as other children, or as his dearest self alone, as you yourself did."

Mollified, Pattie picked up Justin to put him to bed.

"Where's Papa," she asked as she carried Justin over to the crib.

"He... he is fishing, sweetheart," said Connie, feeling the half-truth.



The two of them changed into their night gowns, then Connie ladled out stew from the pot into two bowls, and set it on the table.



"Oh, by the way Mama..." Pattie said this so casually that Connie's maternal instincts were alerted. "I have... taken a job at the local tavern, as a kitchen scullion. I have learned all I will from school, and I am handier with a pot and spoon than the wench they have serving there now."

Connie smiled inwardly. "Isn't that where that handsome Romeril lad supplies fish? And takes his Friday night sup?"

Pattie's cheeks burned.

"If it is, I hadn't noticed," she fibbed firmly, trying to suppress the memory of their meeting, his twinkling eyes, and broad shoulders.

Connie grinned to herself, and ate her stew without another word.



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Two miles away, Peter felt a twitch on his line, and momentarily forgot the feeling of pervading dread that seemed to surround him. The inky water splashed, and he reeled in a heavy dark fish with swirling fins.

"My treasure," he said exultantly. He looked around him, and realised how long he had been standing and waiting. The cold night air hit his bones, and he decided that, while his bravery was undisputed, he should leave this place swiftly, and return home with his catch to warm himself.


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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Nine
« Reply #88 on: October 03, 2012, 07:35:37 PM »
I'm glad Constance and Peter found their treasures! It's awesome that Justin has Peter's hair. Connie's grey hairs are great, too! (Why am I obsessed with your Sims' hair?)  :P

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Re: The Green Dolphin Dynasty: Chapter Nine
« Reply #89 on: October 04, 2012, 03:36:19 AM »
Lovely update as always. When I see a update of this story I always save it for last. ;)