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Re: Nadia's Escape: More Welcome Wagonning!
« Reply #30 on: March 30, 2013, 01:34:04 PM »
Sorry about the hiatus
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More Welcome Wagonning!

I did not let my last job put me off of the APWW, I decided that my beautiful face would be the face of Appaloosa Plains.



I hopped on Nerrissa and went to my next job. I was informed that it was a wealthy family of four, but their home does not seem too lavish.



I found it odd that the toddler was just left on the lawn like that. I suppose that should have been a warning.
"Now, now, Nadia,"



And I stepped in, and found out why she was there. CIVILIZED BEINGS MY BUT! Werewolves have no manners, they cannot care for nooboos properly, or even bother to shave regularly!




And then I found her destroying that beautiful table! It's the first thing noticed when you walk in, and now the scratches are most notable things in the room! I would pay a fortune for that table, there's only about 11 in existence!



I think I taught her something about fine furniture.



The little girls uncle wasn't quite so bad as his older sister, and I managed to befriend him.


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What did you think, most of it was by Nadia, and we got to learn more about supernatural prejudice and stereotypes.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #31 on: March 30, 2013, 06:08:27 PM »
I think she's awfully presumptuous! Who goes into someone's house and beats them with a newspaper? Her boldness is interesting though.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #32 on: March 30, 2013, 06:49:12 PM »
Let's face it, we've all wanted to beat people with newspapers at some point in our lives.  Anyway, I'm not buying her all out prejudice.  Don't tell Nadia, but I think she's kind of sweet on Uncle Wolfy  ;=)
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #33 on: March 31, 2013, 07:40:07 AM »
Well, Nadia doesn't quite think of werewolves as human. She doesn't expect any respect, seeing as she does not think they have manners, So she does not give them any. She is a real stickler to the Golden Rule.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #34 on: April 01, 2013, 06:37:47 PM »
Is it bad that I kind of love Nadia? I kinda see myself in her.... although I can tell you I have never smacked a werewolf with a newspaper.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #35 on: April 02, 2013, 10:35:15 AM »
No! Not in the slightest, I kinda try and make her seem rather lovable. I see her as an extremely odd mix of floaty and serious, like a stubborn toddler.
I would consult her traits in the first post, and see if the majority fits you.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #36 on: April 04, 2013, 11:42:38 PM »
It's not fair, if I mention your story in Pippin's story without do make some appearance here. So, I will comment yours too :P
Nice to meet you, please call me Eld.

Be prepared, muahahaha...

Introduction
I do love the way you introduced Nadia in this story. I love to have a proper Sims, you know the old way (etiquette etc)  is something that I fond of.

Welcome To My Home
That was a nice looking home to live in. And what are these things beside the house? :o
What is so disgusting about Varg Tavern? I never been there, so I don't know...
Nerrissa is beautiful. Too bad when I had Pets back then I never get my chance to get a horse.

Ahhh! Full Moon
I love to see Nadia running away from Bonehilda, it's funny lol

The Next 2 Days

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The screenie that you take about zombie hand things it's was awesome.
Hmm, her look as a Tragic Clown is not bad either.

APWW

It was just me? It's seem Nadia fit well with the zombies :P
She always meet one in last chapter. Oh, my she should marrying one of them soon! :P

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I think I taught her something about fine furniture.

This is funny.

I think Nadia should learn more about them. Is there any background story why Nadia uncomfortable with Supernatural beings? You should tell the readers in the next installment if you have a chance.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #37 on: April 05, 2013, 10:52:43 AM »
Thank you Eld, I really like it when people reply. I'll work on the background in a couple of updates, I have the perfect place to put it. *devious smile*
Also, Nadia and Nerrissa are in the swap shop, as they are this very second in the story.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #38 on: April 05, 2013, 11:06:10 AM »
Quote from: Swirl-Girl on April 05, 2013, 10:52:43 AM
Thank you Eld, I really like it when people reply. I'll work on the background in a couple of updates, I have the perfect place to put it. *devious smile*
Also, Nadia and Nerrissa are in the swap shop, as they are this very second in the story.

Okay then, I'll be looking forward to see that ;D
Oooh... They are in the swap shop? I gotta check this out ;)
Don't forget for more zombies update, I really love that lol.
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Re: Nadia's Escape: The Man Behind The Door
« Reply #39 on: April 05, 2013, 12:54:00 PM »
The Man Behind The Door
Extremely flustered, Nadia abandoned Calvin and went home. She had yet another APWW mission in the morning.
"Why does it seem that I get all the missions?"
She walked tentatively up to the unfinished home, I don't blame her. All her other missions did not seem to be in her taste.
"Can I speak?"
Go ahead.



I started my script. So far, so good."Welcome to Appaloosa Plains, a splen-"
"Do you have a toilet?" The grown man behind the door asked.
"A-a toilet? Is this a prank?"
"And the toilet paper," The man continued self-assuredly



I was very flustered at this moment, "Ahem, a splendorous town for the relaxed and-"
"I like French toilet paper," The nerve! Why does he care for potty humor so much?
"Well, I'm not interested in trying it, thank you," Wasn't I supposed to be talking about Appaloosa Plains?



"I like France's Fries," Frances Frize? I am still confused as to who he is.
"Is Frances Frize a celebrity?" He didn't respond.
"Can you go there and get us some toilet paper? Thanks. Bye." What?



It was alarming. Appaloosa Civic must still be working on their diversity.

PS. The man behind the door is none other than Jamal, http://www.carls-sims-3-guide.com/forum/index.php/topic,15062.0.html A wonderful character built by Pippin!
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #40 on: April 05, 2013, 02:27:45 PM »
Ooooh, Jamal <3

I love to seeing him in your story, I do wonder if Nadia will appear too in Pippin's College Daze ;D
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #41 on: April 05, 2013, 03:00:28 PM »
Why don't you go check.  ;)
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #42 on: April 05, 2013, 03:07:15 PM »
Thankies :P

I just can't wait the next installment from both of you.
Good luck! I like that when I see the story is connected. But, it's too short Squirt. I want moreeee...
Give me moaaaaarrr.....

*run away*
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #43 on: April 05, 2013, 03:19:11 PM »
See Eld, you're so transparent.

It was really cool to see this exchange from both sides! So funny. Did you write it together? I noticed the word 'splendorous' appeared in both.
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Re: Nadia's Escape
« Reply #44 on: April 05, 2013, 03:23:06 PM »
What is transparent mean? I don't understand... It is bad, it is good? :P
I was just telling the truth ;D

Yes, they have been working out together to make this cross-over be true.
Aww, you're both are so sweet ;D *looking at Pippin and Squirt*

and thank you, Pippin & Squirt.
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