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The Sundae Immortal Dynasty (New Entry 3/11)
« on: March 30, 2013, 03:01:08 AM »
*Author's Note - Hey guys I just thought I should let you know before you dive in that the story will shift from past tense to present tense from time to time.*

*Downstairs in their Museum's Library *

Immortal #5 asks Immortal #2 with complete seriousness, "So... do you think I could have been something different in another world and time? "

Immortal #2 - "Define something different"

Immortal #5 - "You know like a bird or a kite. Well maybe not a bird because I'm afraid of birds and maybe not a kite because there's a strong possibility that I'd get struck by lightning and become crispy like bacon."

Immortal #2 - ... (she looks over to #5's mother)

Immortal #5 - "mmm I could be bacon. I could be bacon. Bacon Sundae

Vanilla - Eh right... so dear it's your turn to start the story.

Immortal #8 (to be) -  Wait, why isn't mom or grandma #6 starting the story?
 
Vanilla - Their own storybooks haven't ended quite yet.

Immortal #3 *Double clap* - On with the show!


Entry 1/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - Okay our story begins at the very beginning when grandma first moved to SunsetValley.


Vanilla - I'm sorry to interrupt, but skip ahead a little.

#5 - How far?

Vanilla - To the true start of our story. Agnes.


#5 - Grandma met Agnes the first day she moved into town. She was a dowdy women with a gaze that held many secrets and stories. It was no surprise that she and Grandma became  quick friends. After all grandma concealed her own secrets.
 

#5 - After spending the day getting to know a perfect stranger and then spending a night on a new friend's couch they visited the summer festival the next day to unwind.



Vanilla - I remember that day Agnes wasn't all too enthused but she loosened up.


#5 - Pretty soon the two were roomates starting anew. First came the founding house and then came Anges' new ... Agnes.


Vanilla - I still remember how her face lit up once she got her new wardrobe. I also remember her face when she saw how happy I was for her and her change.






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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2013, 09:48:19 AM »
I can't wait to see more of this story! Your writing style is brilliant.

Vanilla and Agnes both look great. I wonder what the next generations will be like?
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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2013, 12:21:27 PM »
Entry 2/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - Things were going swimmingly. Agnes was preoccupied with her art and grandma with her writing. She aspired to be a professional writer one day. They had a schedule that they followed vigorously everyday. Wake up, eat, work till sundown with limited potty breaks, eat again, and sleep, simple. However, one night something a little off beat happened. A mysterious man knocked on the door.


Immortal #8(to be) - Please don't tell me you let him inside?

Vanilla (slight chuckle) - Well, it went a little something like this.

*Vanilla's present*

There's a strange man standing outside of our house right now and I'm a little apprehensive. I know I shouldn't but I am. I'm going to go see what he wants.


Vanilla - Excuse me sir, what are you doing at our house so late at night... or early in the morning?

Gage - I'm sorry. Hi my name is Gage Briody, I wanted to know if I could borrow a phone. You see it's raining outside and my car caught a flat. I need to have one of my friends pick me up so I can get home tonight.

Vanilla - Oh um okay just wait here.

I turned the corner to find Agnes standing there waiting for some sort of signal to do whatever it was I needed her to do. I knew she said she'd always protect me but this was a little extreme. I choose not to engage.


I explained what was going on and she continued on with her work. I returned to Gage with my cellphone and he proceeded to call his roommate.



Gage - Thanks, you really helped me out.

Vanilla - No problem.

Gage - Is there any way I can repay you?

Vanilla - No. My mom always says, "don't do a good deed expecting something out of it".

Gage - Your mom sounds like a good person.

Vanilla (warm smile) - Yeah she was.

Gage - Was? I'm sorry for your loss, what happened?

Vanilla - It's a little too personal. I'll tell you when I know you better.

Gage - I would like that lovely lady. (winks)

Vanilla - Wait what?!

Gage - Gotta go now see you soon.


I won't tell Agnes but after our encounter I kinda want to see him again. I know if I told her that she'd probably be against it but it's just something about him.




A few days later I was out shopping for Aggie's birthday when I saw an oh-so familiar face across the way at the park.


I wanted to go say hi but there were so many other things preoccupying my mind. Afterall, Aggie was getting older.


It didn't really dawn on me how bittersweet her birthday was going to be until I saw her cake. "Happy Birthday Agnes" in chocolate letters with red roses all around. I am going to lose my best friend in the whole world someday. I'm going to lose my future loved one someday. I am going to lose almost everyone that I care about someday.

Deep breath Nilles deep breath.

Although the thought of losing Agnes one day petrified me. Her day was not about me. Let Jamie tell it.


This day was purely about the birthday girl.




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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2013, 02:52:31 PM »
Entry 3/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - The next few days after Agnes' party were filled with cheer and gloom. Gloom on grandma Nilles end none for Aggie she was still thinking about her party and how much she'd had. That's a funny word "gloom"  ;D

#4 - Stay on topic dear.

#5 - Right, so grandma Nilles' and Agnes went to the Bistro a couple of days later for a special birthday evening out. When they got home grandma went straight to her laptop to write about her day and vent about her feelings on the impending loss of her best friend.


*Vanilla's Present*

I can't stop myself from thinking about losing Agnes one day I know I should have come to terms with it but something about losing the only real comfort I have in this world just makes me crazy. Enough dwelling and negativity for now.

Vanilla - This was my last journal entry before things changed completely.

I must've been sleeping deeply last night because I don't remember much of what happened. I do remember Aggie coming into my room, as she usually does, wanting to read. She asked to read over one of my stories but she needed the password to access it. I gave it to her and quickly fell back into my deep slumber.




I woke up with a strange feeling in my gut. Something is not right. My suspicions were confirmed when I walked into the living room and Aggie was waiting for me to wake up.


Agnes- Morning.

Vanilla - Morning.

I took a seat adjacent to her and waited for her to say something. She was silent for awhile and couldn't look me in my eyes.



So many questions swirling through my mind right now and they all lead back to the same answer each time. She knows.

Vanilla - You know don't you?

She just stared at me for moment in silence.
 

Then she spoke.

Agnes - Don't forget about me okay?


Vanilla - You won't ever be forgotten.


I just made Agnes a promise that I will keep forever. She won't be forgotten, no one who is important to our struggle will ever be forgotten.

She took me outside to paint my portrait and promised to have a sculpture of me done by the end of Fall.


I turned to go back inside and saw Gage waiting at the top of the stairs.

Vanilla - Aggie that guy from a little while ago is at our front door what do I do?

Agnes - Go ask him out.

Vanilla - What?! No.

Agnes - I know you like him I read it in your journal.

Vanilla - I can't just walk up to him and do that. Besides I'm scared what if he says no.

Agnes -  You won't know if you're over here talking to me. Just go, just jump.

Oh how I fear rejection. As I draw nearer to him the same thoughts that plagued my mind about Aggie begin to find their way back this time about Gage.


Gage - Good day lovely lady!

Vanilla - Look Gage I don't know why you continue to come around here but what you need to understand is that I can not commit to any sort of romantic relationship with you, and my name is Vanilla. Do you understand?





Vanilla - Stop that!

Gage  - You try it!

Vanilla - ...

Gage - Try it!



I won't lie this does make me feel a little bit better but why he chooses to do this at this moment is a mystery. Maybe he thinks I should take the time to just smile and act silly or maybe...


Gage - Just give me a chance. I could make you smile, and show you my secret spot where I like to go just to get away from it all. What do you say?

Vanilla - I say pick me up tomorrow.

Gage (excited) - You won't regret this!


He let me go and left. I really hope I don't regret this decision.

*Future*
Immortal #8(to be) - So you basically decided to go out with the creepy man who remembered where you lived?

Vanilla - Sure did.

Immortal #8 - Right ,because that's not strange at all.

Vanilla - ;)

Immortal #8 (to be) - *sigh* I need a snack.

Immortal #7 (to be) - I too could eat.

Immortal #6 - Break time!

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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2013, 12:52:31 AM »
Entry 4/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - The next day Gage came at the crack of dawn. Grandma Nilles was a little taken off guard and cranky. Okay a lot cranky but the point is she was still happy to see him.


He took her somewhere far outside of town. It was his favorite and most secret spot. I think he intended to show grandma the beauty of slowing down and just enjoying life.

* Immortal #5 looks to Vanilla for confirmation.*

Vanilla nods.


Vanilla -  Gage showed me things I'd never seen before. He taught me how to calm down and cherish the things I had in my life that wouldn't always be their. I knew something about him was unique. I could feel it.


#8 (to be) - Deep down in yah bones?

*All adults chuckle*

Vanilla - Yeah.

#5 -  So Grandma decided then and there to give Gage something that he so desperately wanted. Her heart.




The first hurdle was over now they just had to get over the last two. Which were 1. Officially introducing Gage to Anges and 2. Asking if Gage could move in.

#8 (to be) - You sure did go from 2 to 10 in .5 seconds grandma.

#3 -The heart wants what the heart wants sweetie.

#5 - Gage...haha...Gage was so...ha... so scared to meet Agnes after grandma told him about what Agnes was going to do to get rid of him. So just imagine his surprise when Grandma told him that Agnes said he could live there. She did warn him of course that if he did step out line that his demise would expeditiously come when he least suspected it.

#4 -*sigh* Wish I could of met her in her heyday. What an experience that would have been.


#5 - After a while of proving that he was good and didn't have secret motives Agnes stopped openly showing any signs of bad tidings towards Gage. In fact they were even able to start having conversations together. He did prefer that Grandma be in the room at all times though.

Time passed and everything had fallen into a nice routine. Everyone did their own thing and all was peaceful within the Sundae home.




Remember the whole openly showing signs of distrust in Gage thing Agnes had? Well her intuition never allowed for her to let that feeling die. One night while Grandma Nilles was asleep Agnes went into her room to go read when she saw Gage on the laptop. She couldn't exactly see what he was doing but she didn't like it.

 

#4 - Well that's enough for today ladies time to go up stair and eat dinner.

#8 (to be) - Aaaw what!? No fair! What was he doing on the laptop?

#7 (to be) - You'll learn more tomorrow or, if you eat all of your food tonight then we'll come back downstairs and read you another entry.

#8 - What are we having tonight?

#6 - It's my night to choose and I choose--

#8 (to be ) *Gets up from her chair and heads up stairs.* 

#6 - Where are you going?

#8 (to be) - Upstairs. *sigh* I'll be finding out what happens in the story tomorrow.

#6 and #7 pound fists.

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« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2013, 08:43:19 AM »
Entry 5/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#8 (to be) okay so what happened? What was he doing?

#5 He was sneaking around but not in the way Agnes had thought it to be.


The first snow of winter came and Gage had asked Grandma Nilles out on a date. He told her it was very important that they'd gone that day when the snow was pure and fresh. She was a bit puzzled but she went along with it. He wouldn't tell her where they were going.



When they got there she knew exactly where she was.

*Vanilla's Present*

I'm not going to lie this was very romantic although I'm still a little bit fuzzy on why it had to be today. As long as I am spending time Gage everything is perfect.

Vanilla - Sweetheart why did you bring me all the way out here? We could have easily went somewhere more warm.

Gage - Yeah but that wouldn't have been romantic. Besides, I didn't want to give you this in front of everyone.


Vanilla - You didn't have to get me anything. Having you in my life is the best gift ever.

Gage - I appreciate that I make you so happy. Now can you make me happy and go try this on. I had it made specially for you. One a of a kind for my one and only.

Vanilla - Okay, I'll go change.


~moments later~

Gage *yelling* - Are you done?

Vanilla *yelling* - Yes.

Gage *yelling* - I'm coming back now.



Vanilla - How do I look?

Gage - Perfect.


I have never felt more nervous and cold than I do right now. The important thing is that I'm with the man I love and he wants to be with me too.


Vanilla - Gage, I love you and I always will. Will you be my mine forever?



Gage - Yes, of course my love but what's a bride without a bouquet.


Vanilla - I' ll love you forever.

Gage - In sickness and in health, for rich or for poor?

Vanilla - Yes.

Gage - Me too.

Vanilla - Kiss the bride.


*Future*
#5 - They went home as happy as could be. When they explained the situation to Agnes, she did something she had never done. She praised Gage. The two newlyweds went and spent quality time alone.

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« Reply #6 on: April 03, 2013, 02:35:46 AM »
Entry 6/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - Agnes had been feeling under the weather following the days after the wedding. Grandma had been checking on Agnes and caring for her. When Agnes was done loading the porcelain bus she stood up and decided to discuss some things with Grandma.


Agnes told Grandma that she had to tell Gage about his fate.


Grandma took it with a grain of salt at first,


but when she saw that Agnes was adamant about it things went totally south.




Vanilla - I knew that she was right but I just didn't want to tell him. I didn't want to see how he was going to react. We did say some things to one another ,me and Aggie, that probably shouldn't have been said even if they were just hollow insults. They still hurt none the less.

#5 - Things between Grandma and Agnes were bitter for a little while. They avoided one another when it was just the two of them. When Gage was around grandma stayed in the room with them because although she still loved Agnes, she felt she couldn't trust her.


#8 (to be) *frustrated/sad*- You shouldn't have done that granny.You shouldn't have been mean to your bestfriend. She was only trying to be helpful.

Vanilla - I know that now and if I was as smart as you I probably wouldn't have pushed Agnes away when she really needed me and I needed her.

#5 - You see sweetheart, Agnes and Grandma were both pregnant, unbeknownst to the other.



They progressed in their pregnancies as secretly as they could. When it couldn't be hidden anymore and the fighting became tiresome. Agnes decided to be the bigger person and tried to salvage any good that was left in their relationship. She went and told grandma that she was expecting and shocked herself to find out grandma was also expecting.


Of course they were excited for one another. They even began doing maternity things together. Their favorite was designing a nursery that fit around a theme for both of them. Things were great, perhaps better than ever for the two. When Snowflake Day rolled around so did the children.



Agnes went into labor first. Grandma was right by her side the whole time. Pretty soon Snow Crumplebottom was born.




Later that evening Crimson Sundae was born.


All parents were elated.

 



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« Reply #7 on: April 21, 2013, 04:53:55 PM »
Entry 7/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

Immortal#5 -  Things in the Sundae house were well. Everyone was kept on there toes raising two babies, but it was a  challenge trying to get their work done. Grandma Nilles, achieved her lifetime wish of becoming a Professional Author. Agnes suggested that since Grandma was now a credible author it would be pretty easy for to get a job as a journalist.

Vanilla - Didn't take long for me to promote there at all.


Immortal#5 - There were lots of birthdays too. First came Grandma Vanilla's.


Then came Snow and Crimson's birthdays.



Immortal#5 - After they aged up there personalities became more defined. Snow was so friendly. He loved to be around people and could melt anybodies heart, except Crimson.





#5 - Crimson was a little different.

Immortal#8 (to be) - Really!? You don't say? *looks at Crimson*

Crimson - ...

#5 - She didn't require a lot of contact. She preferred to be by herself with her dollhouse or somewhere thinking. She was a loner much like Agnes. Also, fun fact, never smiled, as such her nickname became little ice princess.





The parents opted to teaching the toddlers their skills.




The days following winter brought more birthdays. Gage aged into a handsome adult.

Vanilla - He took aging up better than I did actually.


Vanilla - I also thought it since he was older now he'd be able to handle my secret a little better.

*Vanilla's Present*
I called Gage into the room last night to talk to him about something I should've told along time ago. I should have told him before I entangled him in this mess.

Gage - What's this important secret that you needed to talk to me about?

Vanilla - *sigh* I don't know how you're going to take it so I'm just going to say it. One day, you are going to die, but Crimson and I and all the rest of the first born Sundae's will live on as immortals. If you want to be mad at me that's fine. I understand.

He just looked at me so lovingly with gorgeous Cerulean blues.


Gage - I know.

Vanilla *shocked* - What do you mean you know? Did..did Agnes...

Gage - No. Your laptop did. You know you really should pick a better password than "password".

Vanilla -  You know.

Gage - Yes, and I'm not mad.I still love you all the same.

Vanilla - *teary-eyed* I love you soo much. I promise you too won't be forgotten okay?

Gage - Okay.


*Vanilla's Present - end*

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« Reply #8 on: June 10, 2013, 12:55:37 AM »
Entry 8/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

#5 - With Agnes and Gage's knowledge on their future's in the house, the load of the burden was lightened for grandma Vanilla if only for a little while. Grandpa Gage's birthday rolled around and the same feeling that grandma felt for Agnes began to linger inside of her again.



#5 - The family took a trip to the spring festival to unwind. However, that plan was short lived as it started raining. Agnes decided to take the kids back home so Grandma and Grandpa could enjoy quality time.



In that moment the pressure of our dynasty wasn't a worry. All they cared about was enjoying each other's company and cherishing the moment while assuring themselves that the memory wouldn't be forgotten. They were normal lovers.






Spring went by so swiftly. The children learned there skills and got fresh air in the garden.






Snow and Crimson grew into nice children. Agnes grew into a wise elder. It was happy times all around.







Summer came and the family enjoyed every ounce of it.





When fall came the kids started elementary school. Crimson and Snow had two totally different experiences but that was no surprise to anyone.





Vanilla - Remember when your teacher sent that note home saying he found you to be 'intriguing'?

Crimson -...

Immortal #8 (to be) - Really? Why what did she say or do?

*Vanilla points to Crimson*

Crimson *slightly glaring* -...

Immortal #8 (to be) *holding back a chuckle* - Oh.

#5 - They both did well in school and even joined in extracurricular activities.

Vanilla - Oh how I remember Crimson always showing her daddy her ballet and Snow with his badges.






#5 - Grandma had been progressing in her career in journalism she stayed on track and was very motivated. In the midst of her work she took time off to see the the kids in their ceremonies. It was also the first time any of the parents actually witnessed the kids really communicate with one another. They shared a room but whenever any parent would check on them they were always quietly doing something individually.





Elementary school was good to the children and now it was time for high school.

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« Reply #9 on: July 13, 2013, 12:46:43 PM »
Entry 9/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

Immortal #5 - The kids birthdays rolled around and their parents were so happy.

Crimson - We were happy too.

#5 *Inner Thought* Wow this is the 19th time I've ever heard her speak....*nodding* Nope it's still weird.

They were all happy.





The good times were short lived however. Snow was publicly shamed for something he didn't do and he'd lost most of his friends. Him being in a bad mood really affected the family.

Snow secluded himself from the family as much he could. He spent his time painting.



During school he sat alone. On the bus he would sit right up front by the teacher.


When they would go out together as a family he was miserable and paps were always there to catch it.


Grandma Crimson went to her mom and asked for some advice on how to help Snow.

*Vanilla's Present Time*


Crimson - Mom?
Vanilla -  Hey Crimson, couldn't sleep?
Crimson - No. I'm...troubled.
Vanilla - What are you okay? Do you want me to go wake up your dad? *stands up* I'm going to go get your dad.
Crimson - No. I want to talk you.
Vanilla - Me?
Crimson - *nods*
Vanilla - Okay.
Crimson - Well it's about Snow and...
Vanilla *Inner thought* - Oh my gosh. This is it. This. Is. It. The moment I've been waiting for for soo long she's finally opening up to me. I'm not going to cry in front of her, but when I tell Gage about this in the morning I might. Squeeeee!
Crimson - So what do you think I should do?
Vanilla - Huh! What!?
Crimson - What do you think I should do mom?
Vanilla - I think you should do whatever feels right.
Crimson - Okay. *Crimson walks back to her room*
Vanilla *mumbling to herself* - What just happened?


#5 - The next day after school Crimson went down stairs to her room and saw Snow waiting for her.



They talked for a bit.


Somehow she talked him into going to prom with her. While at the prom Crimson ran into Snow's friends and she let it slip to them that he'd not done any of the things that tabloids printed. In fact they had all retracted what they'd written about Snow. Upon hearing this his friends walked over to him and begged for his forgiveness. He accepted and thanked Crimson.


When they got home that night Grandma vanilla and Agnes were waiting up for them.

Snow went straight to bed. Crimson called for Agnes and her mom to come down stairs to tell them about the night.



Vanilla - Agnes through her a curve ball when she brought up marriage and babies coming next since prom was such a hit.


After all the excitement of prom. That weekend they all decided to have a private birthday for Vanilla and Gage.



To celebrate, everyone went to the winter festival.





#5 - It was a great winter.

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« Reply #10 on: July 13, 2013, 12:52:41 PM »
I really like the way your story is written like it is long in the past. :)

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« Reply #11 on: August 01, 2013, 07:41:24 PM »
@ Anna33 - Thank you I'm glad that you enjoy it. I did want it to feel like it was very far back in the past due to how many sim days will pass once the dynasty is over.

Entry 10/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

Immortal #5 - With winter winding down and Grandma Vanilla freshly becoming an elder she knew she was pressed for time more now than ever.


Agnes had been spending time with the family alot more instead standing in front of her sculpting station.



At the beginning of spring Gage taught Crimson the ins and outs of his garden.



On the last day of spring Snow and Crimson aged up.



Vanilla - *sigh*

#5 - All seemed well in the Sundae household the night of the birthdays.
Agnes was celebrating her family's accomplishments.

Snow was working out and Crimson was fixing her face.


Suddenly
~Vanilla's Present~

Agnes *quietly* - I'm happy. I'm at peace.
Vanilla - Huh? Agnes what'd you say?
The spirit world came to claim Agnes just as soon as I turned my head to find out what she was saying.
Vanilla - Agnes? AGNES!!!
I screamed so loud that everyone in the house came rushing into the living room.

Snow - Mom!!!
Crimson - Aunt Agn....
Gage - Agnes.

Agnes *jokingly* - You see what you do Vanilla? You alert the whole family of my passing and cause them to cry on their birthday no less, naughty.
Vanilla *crying* - Agnes, you're dying.
Agnes -  Don't think of me as dying just going on an extremely long vacation.
Snow *crying* - Mom.
Agnes - Stop crying now and listen to me all of you because I don't have much time before Grim gets here.

Agnes - Vanilla, you made me a promise and even though I'm leaving you still need to finish the story, our story.

Gage, in the beginning I didn't like you but you knew that. I'm glad to say I was wrong about you. You've been a great man to Vanilla, a great father to Crimson and a great role model for Snow, and most importantly to me a great friend. I need you to be there to keep them on track while I'm away. If you don't I will be back.

Snow, my baby, know that I love you. Be strong and promise me that you'll always be the best you that you can be, and you know a grand-kid or two wouldn't hurt.

Crimson, I see so much of myself in you and maybe you see it too but sweetheart let people in.
They'll love you and smile more ice princess.

Just as Agnes finished her last sentence Grim came to claim her.

Agnes - I'm ready for my vacation Mr. Reaper.
Grim - Right this way Mrs. Crumplebottom.
~Vanilla's present - end~

Immortal #5 - No one had cake that night.


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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: August 05, 2013, 06:28:38 PM »
Entry 11/ Immortal 1 - Vanilla

Immortal #5 - After a few days of mourning everyone seemed to bounce back. Well mostly everyone, Crimson to everyone's surprise took it the hardest. She got so bad that she developed slight chest pains and a case of mimetry.


Immortal #7 (to be) - Mimetry? That's not a word.

Immortal #5 *shaking her head* - yeeeah I'm pretty sure it I just made that up, but it could very easily be a word.

Immortal #7 (to be) - What does it mean.

Immortal #5 - It means --

Immortal #4 - It means she wouldn't talk now can we finish the story we're almost to my favorite part.

Immortal #7 - Sorry continue.

Immortal #5 - Crimson would hole herself up in her room and release her pain. One day grandpa Gage walked in on her and saw how much pain she was in and instantly went to go voice his concerns to granny Nilles.

Who voiced her concerns to Snow. Who promised he'd talk to her or at least try.


Snow and Crimson graduated from high school neither was valedictorian.



Vanilla - The young man named Ethan Bunch was the valedictorian.*smh* He came to the graduation in a towel. A. Towel. To this day I still don't understand how or why, but we have a story to tell and no time for a grandma rant.


After the graduation ceremony Crimson went straight home while the rest of the family went to the diner.


Once home Snow went to talk to Crimson.


Vanilla - Crims I've always wondered what you two talked about that night?

Crimson *sigh* Snow came in to see me and...
*Crimson's Present*
Snow - Crimson hey can we talk?

Crimson - Go away please.



Snow - You haven't been looking too well and your parents and I have been worrying.

Crimson - Snow, I asked you to leave me alone. Tell my parents I'm fine.

Snow - But you're not.

Cimson - Just tell them.

Snow - I'm not going to lie. You're not okay.

Crimson - If you love me you'll do it. If not then don't talk to me ever again.

Snow - I'm not.

Crimson - Get out.

Snow - You need to talk. Crimson let's--


Crimson - LEAVE ME ALONE!!!

Snow - I love you and I'm here for you. So just this once can you please just let me in.

Crimson - ...

Snow - Please.

Crimson - Is this how it's going to feel when I lose my dad or when I lose you? Is this how it's going to be every time some I grow attached to dies?

Snow - It doesn't have to be. Death is natural and I think your fear of it comes from not knowing what happens after you pass. But i'll make you a promise.

Crimson - What promise?

Snow - When I go i'll come back and tell you all about the other-side only if you start letting more people in. Do you promise?

Crimson - Promise.


~~~Outside Crimson's room~~~


Gage - You know honey we really shouldn't be spying like this.

Vanilla - We're not spying we're just playing in the sprinklers. Good harmless non-spying fun.

Gage - Now if one of them happens to look over at us outside do you really think they're going to believe we aren't spying because I don't.

Vanilla - You know honey I think that.... Oh my.

Gage -  What!?

Vanilla - Shhh, get down and be quiet.

Gage - *whispering* Get out of my watermelons. Vanilla. Vanilla don't ignore me.

Vanilla - *whispering* Look.


Gage - *whispering* How sweet.

Vanilla - *whispering* More like about time. Excuse me.

Gage - *whispering* No. Vanilla get back here.

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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: August 05, 2013, 08:22:45 PM »
Entry 12/Immortal 1 - Vanilla

~~~Crimson's Room~~~


Vanilla - Congratulations!

Snow - What?

Vanilla - Oh I'm so  happy for you guys. Now let's start planning a wedding. I was think maybe a summer wedding and roses lots and lots of roses.


Gage - I'm so sorry she barged in on you guys.

Vanilla - Whose side are you on? That doesn't really matter. I need to go and start calling guests and picking a location and --

Crimson - No.

Vanilla - No?

Crimson - Correct. I want decide how my wedding will be.


Vanilla - But, I wanted...

Gage - It's not about you honey.

Vanilla - You're all right. What can I do to help then?



Crimson - You can start by allowing me to wear your gown, next would you mind taking us where you and dad got married?

Vanilla *eyes watering* - Are you sure this is what you want?

Crimson - Yes.

Vanilla - Okay then. I'll be back.

~~~End Past~~~

#5 - Grandma Vanilla went upstairs and got her wedding dress.

Then brought it to Crimson.


Once everyone was dressed and ready to go Gage made sure that the weather would not mess up his baby girl's day then it was off to the location. The car was grandma Agnes' last gift to the family.



Crimson and Snow got married on the same hill that Vanilla and Gage had. Just like Gage, Snow bought a bouquet for his wife-to-be specifically for the wedding.




Snow was now a Sundae.


Life did what life does best and went on. Come summer time Crimson was pregnant.


Immortal #3 - The most grand appearance of our story.

Immortal #4 - Thanks mom.

Immortal #3 - You look radiant this evening darling did you do something differently?

Immortal #4 -  Nice save.

Immortal #8 (to be) - Dinner time ladies. #5 it's your turn to pick.

Immortal #5 - Great, let's go.

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Re: The Sundae Immortal Dynasty
« Reply #14 on: August 06, 2013, 06:32:03 PM »
Yay nooboo! I like Immortal 3's little remark a the end of the last chapter, " The most grand appearance" hehehe