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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #150 on: October 11, 2013, 10:43:52 AM »
I just read this entire story from start to finish, and I'd just like to say that I'm very impressed with your writing. You make the story flow so nicely, and I really enjoyed reading this. I'm going to keep checking back on this one, and you've inspired me to start a Sims story that I might actually finish! ;)
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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #151 on: October 11, 2013, 02:45:30 PM »
Eek! I haven't commented in a while! I just caught on the story; I've been so busy with school. Anyways, that's not the point.  ;)

I'm loving generation 3. The boys look so much like Kleio!



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #152 on: October 15, 2013, 09:05:13 PM »

I just started reading this, and it's fantastic! I'm gonna join in here with the Orestes love: such a moody little cutie! And he threw the potion at Minerva, so perfect. Glad to see his dark sensibilities didn't completely ruin his good judgment. Can't wait to see what's next; I'll certainly be following along.

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #153 on: October 16, 2013, 09:31:45 AM »
I just read this entire story from start to finish, and I'd just like to say that I'm very impressed with your writing. You make the story flow so nicely, and I really enjoyed reading this. I'm going to keep checking back on this one, and you've inspired me to start a Sims story that I might actually finish! ;)

You read all of that?! Holy mahogany! Need a trophy for people who manage that.
Thank you so much! And I apologise to all that the updates haven't been so frequent for a while. I've been on my holiday.
I'm so proud to have inspired you, too! I was inspired by another legacy myself to start writing and I'm happy to be able to pass that along. When you do write something, say the word and I'll check it out!

Eek! I haven't commented in a while! I just caught on the story; I've been so busy with school. Anyways, that's not the point.  ;)

I'm loving generation 3. The boys look so much like Kleio!

I'm busy myself, I'm not that active with updates lately, so don't you worry!
They do, don't they? :D loving how they've turned out myself.

I just started reading this, and it's fantastic! I'm gonna join in here with the Orestes love: such a moody little cutie! And he threw the potion at Minerva, so perfect. Glad to see his dark sensibilities didn't completely ruin his good judgment. Can't wait to see what's next; I'll certainly be following along.

Thank you so much! Another person who deserves a Can't Believe You Read All That Wow You're Awesome Award (it needs a name that's a bit more snappy, I admit). Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you guys love my little anti-hero!



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #154 on: October 16, 2013, 02:54:53 PM »
I'm so proud to have inspired you, too! I was inspired by another legacy myself to start writing and I'm happy to be able to pass that along. When you do write something, say the word and I'll check it out!

I just wanted to add that you also inspired me to start a legacy. I'm waiting to get some mod issues fixed before I continue but I probably won't be posting it anywhere. But this is one of the best legacy stories I've read and I wanted to join in on the fun.  ;)

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #155 on: October 19, 2013, 05:03:51 AM »
I just wanted to add that you also inspired me to start a legacy. I'm waiting to get some mod issues fixed before I continue but I probably won't be posting it anywhere. But this is one of the best legacy stories I've read and I wanted to join in on the fun.  ;)

Thanks for telling! :) And I'm pleased to have inspired you as well. If you ever do decide to post something, please tell!

Also: Just a heads up. I've been real busy and away from my computer and I've had to just play the game for a while to get to where the fourth generation storytelling starts. But I'm getting there real soon. Sorry for the wait!



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #156 on: October 19, 2013, 12:38:24 PM »
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You read all of that?! Holy mahogany! Need a trophy for people who manage that.
Thank you so much! And I apologise to all that the updates haven't been so frequent for a while. I've been on my holiday.
I'm so proud to have inspired you, too! I was inspired by another legacy myself to start writing and I'm happy to be able to pass that along. When you do write something, say the word and I'll check it out!
You're very welcome! The link to my new story is in my signature, and I would actually update if Sims was done patching. ::)
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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 3.10. Goodbye to Magic [10/06]
« Reply #157 on: October 20, 2013, 05:20:19 AM »
4.0. The Atoner
(Orestes)



I’d been at this since I was a teen. So long, my mum swore it’d actually be harmful. “They’re old, musty places, those tombs,” she’d say.
It’s not like I didn’t agree. I couldn’t rule out that it had caused some of my allergies and of course all the scrapes and bruises I’d gotten over time.

 

But I was used to it by now. I thought to myself how hard it had been, the first time I pulled one of these statues. I did it with relative ease, these days, and with this particular one I even tried to be as quiet as possible.
I could hear the voice above ground. My brother, chatting with the guy who owned this basement and whom I’d rather not have to explain why I’d started pulling hidden switches and dragging around stuff down here.

 

“So, you’d rather… not wear proper clothes then?” I could hear my brother say, a note of nervousness in his voice.
I chuckled, and could hear the owner of the house ranting about the oppression of modern society and especially clothes and dress-codes and the tyranny of propriety. Orpheus played him completely, from what I could hear. Agreeing, sounding as pleasant as possible…



But the further I got into the basement, the less I could hear, until there was only me and the silence of the tomb. I could feel my body shaking slightly as I neared. I disarmed the traps, amazed that they still worked after what was likely a long time, and finally I found the right switch.

 

This had to be it. The chest I’d been looking for. My contact had said that this was most likely it… I opened it with bated breath, biting my lip, and… nothing.
It was full of fine nectar, some old coins, an ugly relic that was, in my estimation, worth exactly nothing at all.
I slammed it shut with a frustrated yell and left.

 

Orpheus was surrounded by locals when I came up again, and he was busy talking to someone less opposed to clothing. My brother still looked at me with huge relief when he saw me.
“Hey bro, great to see you. Did you make it?” he asked, deliberately vague.
I shook my head. He looked exasperated. “Right, we’d better go then. Nice to meet you, Amin. Sorry about your… sister’s boyfriend’s great-aunt’s… foot. Gotta go.”
As we left, he shuddered. “You do know I hate you, right? Those people… they’re insane.”
“And that’s why they like you,” I teased.
“Oh yes, you’re so very funny. My brother, the joker. You are known for your legendary humour – I mean, you’d have to have a sense of humour to spend your days among dead people and broken pottery. Which reminds me… Are we done now? Can we go home?”
“Of course not. I still haven’t found what Minerva was looking for. I have another place in mind…”
Orpheus groaned.

 

“Pyramid of the Sky,” I said. “This is the last place it possibly could be.”
“Yeah, your contact said that about the basement of the People’s Front Against Clothing. What am I going to do this time? Walk someone’s dog? Sing to their new-born?”

 

“You can just come along,” I said. “If you dare.”
“Oh yes, because it’s so super scary in there, I’m sure.”
I didn’t say that yeah, it probably was pretty scary in there. I was just so used to being scared out of my mind that it didn’t register properly anymore.
Inside, it was damp and two giant pools blocked our way, so we had to change and swim over.

 

On the other side, it was the usual stuff. Some relics, a pile of ancient coins, switches and statues. I found the first switch in the wall, and when we heard the click, we entered the next room.

 

Orpheus ran ahead of me.
“Oh, dude, let me find the hidden door here…”
He started inspecting the wall and I laughed. “Yeah, you find that one. It’s not really obvious or anything.”
“Oh, shut it. I haven’t tried it yet… I haven't been playing Indiana Jones since my teens like you have.”
And he did figure it out and pushed open the door.

 

On the other side, we were greeted by… well, not much, except for a huge dive well in an alcove. I tried to see if I could discern the bottom. I couldn’t.
“Orestes, I know what you’re thinking, man. Don’t.”
I smiled at my brother. “What do you mean?”
“You know what you need, dude, you need a girl. Gally can find you one when we get back home. A nice girl.”
“I already have a nice girl back home,” I smiled fondly, but my brother groaned.
“You’re talking about your daughter, aren’t you?”
“Of course I am. Who else?”
“Orestes, you really ought to think…”
I didn’t hear what else he had to say because just then I dove into the well and the water muffled all sound from the surface.

 

I searched around and when my lungs felt like they were screaming for air, I returned to the surface, greedily breathing in the fresh air.
“I’m not feeling sorry for you,” Orpheus said.
“There’s a tunnel,” I said, as he helped me out of the well. “Down at the bottom there’s a tunnel, but I can’t get through it.”
“You can’t be sure it’s a tunnel.”
“It is. I’m too large to get through it but it’s definitely a tunnel…”
“So? Shouldn’t we just search this place thoroughly and see if it’s somewhere.”
“No, you don’t get it.” I was drying off, already getting into my everyday clothes. “If Minerva hasn’t found whatever it is she’s looking for, it’s well hidden. Very well hidden. She’ll have combed this place thoroughly. It has to be through that tunnel.”
“So…?”
“I have to go home and find a way to dig through. I need to get in there. Wherever there is.”
He looked at me with something like sadness in his eyes. “You know, no one expects you to find it. No one blames you for what happened back then. We all forgave you.”
I shook my head. “I didn’t.”

He hardly spoke a word on the way home, and nor did I. Two things were on my mind.
Minerva, her search through the tombs of Egypt. She’d worn herself out, wormed her way into the town I’d visited. Everyone knew her and knew her well – some thought her charming, others sneaky and others again ruthless. She’d done whatever was necessary to get as far as possible.

The other thing on my mind was a certain little lady, who, when I entered our music room, beamed at me and shouted: “Daddy!”

 

My Iphigenia.

[Author’s note: Because I want to stop incorporating them into the story, have pictures of the boys, Galatea and baby Iphigenia:

 

 

Orestes and Orpheus in the outfits that they wear when they’re not in Egypt. Gotta say, Orestes was always going to be the heir but look at how gorgeous Orpheus turned out. Ugh, way too handsome!

 

Galatea, imaginary friend turned real sim turned royal pain! She rolled the Irrisistable trait and flirted with everyone so I got frustrated and just got her and Orpheus out of there as quickly as possible.

 

And the “mysterious” Iphigenia. I mean, she did kind of appear out of nowhere because time skip! But here she is. Quite a cutie – it’s pretty easy to see who her mother is, if you remember the past couple of chapters.

Also, about her name:
Iphigenia: In Greek mythology, the oldest daughter of Agamemnon and Klytaimnestra. When on their way to Troy, the army was stranded at Aulis because Agamemnon acted like an idiot and made Artemis mad. To appease her, he had to sacrifice his oldest daughter, Iphigenia. He was about to do it but in the nick of time, Artemis pulled the girl away and replaced her with a female deer. Euripides’ tragedy, Iphigenia at Aulis, tells the story and it’s really, really good. Fun fact: it’s the central text I’m using for my bachelor project which I’m currently writing.]



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #158 on: October 20, 2013, 01:31:44 PM »
This was really great! I love the time skip, and Iphie (I shorten names when they're too hard for my brain, haha) is just so freakin cute. No wonder Orestes is crazy about her.

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #159 on: October 20, 2013, 03:21:37 PM »
This was really great! I love the time skip, and Iphie (I shorten names when they're too hard for my brain, haha) is just so freakin cute. No wonder Orestes is crazy about her.

I'm so glad you like it ^_^ I usually get bored waiting for the kids/teens to age up so why not just skip that boring old part!
She's a total cutie, isn't she? :D I was afraid what her mother's genetics would turn out but they work on Iphigenia (at least as a toddler).



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #160 on: October 20, 2013, 06:00:47 PM »

I can only assume things worked out for Orestes and that Esther girl he was dating . . . unless you've got a real big surprise in store for us! I'm enjoying the mystery of the time-skip; interesting way to tell the story.

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #161 on: October 20, 2013, 08:11:04 PM »
Oooo, love the time skip!  It definitely builds up some mystery and suspense!

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #162 on: October 21, 2013, 08:43:05 AM »
I can only assume things worked out for Orestes and that Esther girl he was dating . . . unless you've got a real big surprise in store for us! I'm enjoying the mystery of the time-skip; interesting way to tell the story.

Guess you'll just have to wait and see :) It's times like these I'm glad this is textbased - I have a horrible pokerface when I get excited about stuff!

Oooo, love the time skip!  It definitely builds up some mystery and suspense!

Thanks :D I'm glad y'all seem to like it!



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #163 on: October 24, 2013, 11:07:11 AM »
I thought I should apologise that the updates for a while will be less frequent than they have been - one-two chapters a week will be all I can manage until my bachelor project is done, I think.
It's a bother that I'm so stupidly busy, but my mind is on the story every free minute I have. Thank you everyone for being patient with me! :)



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy - 4.0. The Atoner [10/20]
« Reply #164 on: October 28, 2013, 05:31:30 PM »
4.1. The Babysitter
(Cadence)



I knew what my dad would say now: “What have you gotten yourself into this time, Cadence?” And I’d reply: “It’s no big deal, daddy, I just got a job with the crazy people on the hill.”
It sounded worse in my head. Definitely. Besides, they were just rumours, weren’t they?



The crazy Ithacas up on the hill. But come on – every town had a rumour like that. People who did weird things, people who did their shopping in their nighties or who liked to dance exotic dances at the art museum, that kind of thing.
All I knew about this Ithaca family was what they said in town: One day, some years ago, when I was still a kid, there was a kerfuffle of epic proportions in the Ithaca house. The paper boy swore he heard glass shattering, angry voices and then a woman came stomping out there, screaming and yelling that ‘THEY HADN’T SEEN THE LAST OF HER’. I didn’t even want to think about the stuff they’d said about Esther Luck…
Yeah, okay, now I definitely didn’t want to go in there.
And yet, I rang the doorbell and a man opened the door and I asked if I could come in.

 

“Sure,” he said, and he led me in. “Now, why did you want to come in?”
“What, oh, well, you know, because of my job. I mean the job. I applied. And I got it.”
“The job?”
Oh great, I’d gone to the wrong house – and he was looking a bit crazy actually – who seriously wore purple suits?
“Ah, I see, oops, I must have- this is the wrong house, right? Because I was hired as a babysitter but this isn’t- this is the wrong house. Embarrassing, I’d better leave!”

 

“Um, I think that’s probably a good idea. I don’t think we hired a-“
“Yes, we did.”
I spun to see who’d spoken. Another man was in the room, this one obviously younger, but still weird-looking. What was with the way these guys dressed?
“You’re Candice?”
“Cadence, actually.”
“Cadence, I see. How nice to meet you – care to come this way?”

 

I followed him, and he led me in a door.
“This is the nursery, and that over there.” He pointed. “Is my pretty princess. Iphigenia.”

 

“Oh…”
So these people had weird names, too? I pondered that only for a second because the room struck me. “This… this is a gorgeous room!”
“Ah, you appreciate musical instruments, I understand. Are you musical?”
“Sort of…”
“Well, if you promise not to shatter any glass, you can use the instruments as much as you like.”
“Wow, thanks that’s…” He was already leaving. “Wait!”
“Yes?”
“Um, who are you people?”
“Name’s Orestes,” he said. “You met my father, Donte, and my mother is sleeping right now. Her name’s Kleio. I’m sure she’ll like you, actually.”

 

“Iphigenia,” he said, and he walked over to her. “Hey sweetie, this is Cadence, she’ll take care of you when I’m away.”
The girl giggled and didn’t look at him. She was preoccupied with a toy.
“The two of you should probably get to know each other. Have fun.”
Then he left and I was stood there like a fool, looking at the girl playing. She was totally focused, but when I kept looking down at her, she looked up at me with big, curious eyes.
“Pway?” she said.
“Oh, um, yes, of course.” I sat down in front of her and she giggled again.
“Mui.”
“Mui? Wait, you mean music? Right, of course. Music. Let me hear you play music then…”
Well, at least she was just a normal girl.

 

(Orestes)

Cadence fit right in, even if she mostly tried to blend in with the wallpaper. She stuck mostly with Iphigenia. My parents were completely baffled. Why had I hired this mousy little girl when they were perfectly capable of taking care of Iphigenia when I was abroad?
I had my reasons. I only said that they weren’t that young anymore and that there was no harm in having someone around the house to tend to Iphigenia. Both my mum and dad were still working, too.
“Still not a reason,” Mum said. “There’s something going on, isn’t there?”
“Maybe.”
“Something about Egypt?”
“Just let me worry about this. Make Cadence feel welcome, like a part of the family.”

 

And so, a week after Cadence had joined the household, I left again. I talked to another of my contacts, looked through some other tombs.

 

But no matter what I did, I couldn’t let the thought of that tunnel go. The one I hadn’t been able to swim through. It had to be there. It was the only place I hadn’t been able to go in all these musty old tombs and it was one of the only places where Minerva wouldn’t have gone either. I just knew it.

 

None of the locals helped matters.
“No, no,” the local merchant said. “That place is dangerous. No one goes there – there’s a curse, my friend.”
“Maybe there are someone with machines-“
“No, no, no one will do that, friend. You see-“
I turned and left. There had to be a way.
As I left the market, an idea began forming in my mind…



Author's note: I'm alive. No, really, I live. I'm still working on this, just not that frequently because of silly things like 'university work' and 'being social'. Rest assured, though, that this story's on my mind pretty much all the time. I miss playing the Sims all the time.



 

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