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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-one (23/11/2013)
« Reply #300 on: November 23, 2013, 01:57:30 PM »
oh, Elisabeth, that's not how a mature woman behaves. But you have an awesome car, so you're forgiven.
I just can't get over how insanely cute Margarethe is, and is it just me or is she really floating on that toilet?

I really want Elisabeth's car in real life, but it's actually quite the death trap.   :(

She was actually sitting on it, I can confirm that. Though I was convinced she was floating at first.

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #301 on: November 23, 2013, 01:57:52 PM »
Margrethe is so beautiful, I know I've said this before but she really is. Tatiana should just stay away from the cobra, lol.
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #302 on: November 23, 2013, 02:11:01 PM »
 ;D That really was hiliarious!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #303 on: November 23, 2013, 03:52:21 PM »
May I  just say that I just love that last line.

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #304 on: November 23, 2013, 04:06:04 PM »
It seems sense of humor is really your strong point in your story. I really ENJOY every bit of it and that's so HILARIOUS. Thanks for made me laughing; I think that I want to stay away from my family when I reading yours, to avoid accused for being crazy ;D

The screenshots also good, it's match the story as well and the screenshot in chapter 51, I don't know what to say but laughing :P
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A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-three (23/11/2013)
« Reply #305 on: November 23, 2013, 04:07:28 PM »
CHAPTER FIFTY-THREE

Triple post, woohoo!

Alright, people, we're deviating to my usual writing style for this one!

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The next morning was a normal, quiet Tuesday morning. Elisabeth, Jimmy, Gustav, and Margrethe had already left for the day. Victoria was in her garden, and Tatiana was up in her painting studio. She's trying to perfect some brush strokes because my great great granddaughter is turning eighteen tomorrow morning, and she wants to paint the perfect portrait for her. I did my usual routine of cleaning the house, and then I went to get the mail. I knew that Margrethe had sent away to get some gems cut yesterday, so I figured that they were here.



I was about to close the mailbox when I noticed a letter rammed into the back, as if whoever put it there was in a hurry. I pulled it out, and noticed that, strangely, it didn't have our address written on it or any stamps. Instead, there was just a mess scrawl of handwriting that spelled out my name.

I went inside and opened it up, almost already knowing exactly what it was. My eyes scanned the small piece of lined paper that was contained inside, with a note that was most likely typed on a typewriting slapped across it instead of handwritten. At least it would be easier to understand this one.

Beatrix -

You know who this is from. I'm sorry about the burglar last night, but it was the only way I could safely get this to you.
If you see her again, tell her that I'm sorry I got her arrested.

My sources say that you're about halfway done. Please call me as soon as possible. I know you still have my number,
but just in case, it's written on the back of this note.

Regards,

G.M.


I felt my heart try to drop and leap at the same time. Finally, finally, she had contacted me...

I flipped the paper over just to refresh my memory, then set it down and picked up the phone. I had waited so long for this.



The phone on the other end felt like it was ringing forever as my heart beat itself mercilessly against my ribcage. It had been so long since I had last spoken to this woman, even longer since I had seen her. I could barely even remember her voice after all these years.

"Hello?" A voice asked once the phone finally picked up.

"Yes, hello, this is Beatrix Royale. I'm looking to speak with GM?"

"You're talkin' to her." She said.



"I see you got my message, Beatrix." G.M. stated. I could hear something rustling and other voices in the background.

"Yes, I got it..."



"How are things holdin' up over there?"

"Fine, fine...Margrethe turns eighteen tomorrow, Elisabeth is ready to eat Ambrosia..."

"How 'bout you? How are you doin'?"

I paused, thinking. I mean, I was happy because I was surrounded by my family. I was lucky enough to be a great-great grandmother and have my own big, fancy house after starting with nothing, but my husband was dead, I had to watch my descendent's spouses die, and I had the whole weight of my task topping off my family history on my shoulders.



"I see." G.M. said quietly. There was even more rustling, probably a bunch of papers being moved around. "You're almost halfway there, kiddo."

"I'm probably decades older than you by now." I said with a half laugh.



"Nah, you'll always be a kid to me." G.M. told me, also laughing. Suddenly, her tone got very serious. "Look, I've got some bad news."

"What?" I cried, my heart nearly stopping as it made a desperate attempt at freedom. "What do you mean bad news?!"



"I told you that everythin' was subject to change, Beatrix, but it isn't goin' to be the end of the world. It's goin' to be hard, but you're strong. You can take it." She told me in an attempt to help calm me down.

"What do I have to do?" I asked after several long moments of silence.

"That's my girl!" G.M. cheered through the phone. "Alright, to start, you just need to carry on as normal. Follow the rules and get eight generations living under one roof. Got it?"

"Got it."



"Okay, after that, it gets hard. It took me a long time figure this one out, but it's absolutely crucial to makin' your goal. If you want to-"

"I've come too far to turn back now!" I snapped.

"Alright, alright, keep your ponytail on..." G.M. mumbled. "You know how the Science Centre has found a way to bind a ghost to the physical world at all times instead of just nighttime? Well, to save your family, you gotta combine that with the Ambrosia you've been eatin'. Bring your husband and everyone else's husbands back and feed them Ambrosia. Then, you can carry on...but that's not the hard part."

"What's the hard part?" I asked. There was silence on the other end of the line.

"Beatrix..." She began. "Beatrix, you're going to have to die."

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #306 on: November 23, 2013, 04:09:09 PM »
Margrethe is so beautiful, I know I've said this before but she really is. Tatiana should just stay away from the cobra, lol.

She is! Her genetics are great!

Ha, she has to now. I lost the basket to a bug and have to get another one now.  :(



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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #307 on: November 23, 2013, 04:09:49 PM »
May I  just say that I just love that last line.

It was the first thing that popped into my head when I first grabbed the screenshot. It was too perfect.

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #308 on: November 23, 2013, 04:10:05 PM »
;D That really was hiliarious!

Thank you!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-two (23/11/2013)
« Reply #309 on: November 23, 2013, 04:12:09 PM »
It seems sense of humor is really your strong point in your story. I really ENJOY every bit of it and that's so HILARIOUS. Thanks for made me laughing; I think that I want to stay away from my family when I reading yours, to avoid accused for being crazy ;D

The screenshots also good, it's match the story as well and the screenshot in chapter 51, I don't know what to say but laughing :P
And I hate when my Sims stuck and I have to use reset cheat :(

If you think that bit was funny, wait until you seen what happens in chapter fifty-four.  ;)

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-three (23/11/2013)
« Reply #310 on: November 23, 2013, 04:50:16 PM »
Whoa...you weren't kidding when you said you were deviating from your normal style. Things suddenly became very serious very quickly. Very interesting development, there.

And nice use of sepia tone. :D

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A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #311 on: November 23, 2013, 04:50:52 PM »
CHAPTER FIFTY-FOUR

Well, I really dropped a bomb that time...

Margrethe: This situation needs more light and potatoes.

Yes. Yes it does. Lets roll some bloopers and behind-the-scenes stuff to cheer everyone up, shall we?

Margrethe: I don't know what's going on! Mommy, I'm scared!

I'm really proud of how the screenshots last chapter turned out. It took me a long time to get all of it staged. I'm impressed, because Tatiana was actually in the living room the whole time! I specifically had Margrethe send away a bunch of gems to be cut the day before just so that I could get a picture of Beatrix by the mailbox. For the phone conversation shots, I had Beatrix call up one of her friends. The relevant images in the speech bubbles were all down to sheer luck. I must have taken about fifty screenshots of just the conversation so that I could nail the entire thing, and then I spent about a half hour editing the pictures online before uploading them. All in all, probably my best chapter work.

Of course, there were some funny incidents while "filming", such as a glitch with Beatrix's cane. Behold!



I had to leave the computer for about fifteen minutes because I was giggling so hard. Meanwhile, Victoria was hanging out in the garden. I would stop taking pictures of the phone scene so I could go check up on the others really quick, and I discovered this random woman just standing in the middle of the garden trying to get Victoria to talk to her.



And, as always, some funny Margrethe faces.





Before we get back to our regularly scheduled chapter, I decided to share a picture of my Generation Five heir from my first dynasty, Gwendolyn. See the similarities?



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The next morning came, and everyone gathered for Margrethe and Gustav's birthdays. Margrethe went first.





And we have a Born Saleswoman! She wants to be a Descendant of Da Vinci. Inventing isn't going to be a future SuperMax skill, so she'll do okay.



After that and just before the bus arrived, Gustav took his turn and got the Charismatic trait. He wants to be "Super Popular".





I decided to put Margrethe in a different everyday outfit than the young adult version of the dress she wore as a teen. I got the dress a while back at the store and I haven't had a chance to use it yet. And of course, Margrethe opposed to all of my attempts to put shoes on her.

Everyday:



Formal:



Sleepwear:



I didn't do anything truly remarkable with Gustav's clothes, but I thought that his everyday wear would match his Snob trait. I also changed his hair color to the brown on his hair tips. I think it looks quite nice.



Gustav got one of Elisabeth's cars that she keeps in the underground garage, a Vintage car from the 1920s (thank you custom content), but Margrethe needed something new. Something that would pop! Something that only she would drive!

Aw yeah.



With that, everybody set about their daily tasks. Tatiana went off to work, Victoria went to the garden, and Gustav settled in with the brand new MultiTabs that I was gifted. Margrethe went up to her sculpting studio to play with her chainsaws, Elisabeth worked in her lab, and Gustav went off to get a job. He joined the teacher career, then came home and began to work from home.



Beatrix has been much more on edge since she called the mysterious G.M. She knew that in order to save her family she would have to make some major sacrifices, but she never thought that it would be such an extreme one. As such, she has been harassing things with her cane much more than usual. The poor washing machine was screamed at for being so expensive.



Suddenly, there was an eerie lack of chainsaw sounds from the upper floors and instead loud cheering. Curious, I went to check up on Mar-

Oh no...



NO! NO! MARGRETHE, STOP! THERE ARE CHILDREN WATCHING!


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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-three (23/11/2013)
« Reply #312 on: November 23, 2013, 04:53:12 PM »
Whoa...you weren't kidding when you said you were deviating from your normal style. Things suddenly became very serious very quickly. Very interesting development, there.

And nice use of sepia tone. :D

No, actually, that was my normal writing style. I usually don't write the way I do for this one. If you want some more examples you can PM me.  ;D

Thanks! I was trying for black and white, but I couldn't find the option, so I just went with sepia. I like it quite a bit!

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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #313 on: November 23, 2013, 05:04:22 PM »
Margrethe and Gwendolyn could almost be twins. Streaking is always fun when there are no kids in the dynasty ^_^ Cane in the face, ouch.
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Re: A Royal Immortal Dynasty - Chapter Fifty-four (23/11/2013)
« Reply #314 on: November 23, 2013, 05:10:49 PM »
Margrethe and Gwendolyn could almost be twins. Streaking is always fun when there are no kids in the dynasty ^_^ Cane in the face, ouch.

They could! They both have relatively similar traits, but Gwendolyn was an inventor/scientist who was addicted to computers, while Margrethe is a crazy artist who sleeps a lot.

 

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