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Offline ratchie

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The Jones Dynasty
« on: October 03, 2010, 10:08:12 AM »
Reading all the amazing dynasty stories has made me come out of my Sims comfort zone and attempt a dynasty of my own.  My Sims never fish and I have never attempted to cook ambrosia, so it should be interesting to say the least.
As a player I can get bored with the same family so this way I can change between my legacy and dynasty.


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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 10:21:04 AM »
She sits alone, reading the book that the mysterious old man gave to her. Her eyes widening in disbelief as she learns the secret contained in the dusty tome. The secret to eternal life, immortality !


She ponders awhile, could she do this, could she watch her loved ones die while she and a select few lived forever. Undecided she left the library.
While she decided the fate of her family She went and got a job at the local diner.


She met someone and as she looked into his eyes she knew this was the man she wanted to be the father of her children. The man who would be the father to a long line of immortals.


And so it came to pass that Adya and Christopher were married and in time they became the proud parents to a bouncing baby boy who they named Archie.


editors note no apples were used in the production of Archie. I was very happy to get a boy though.

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 04:04:55 PM »
Time passes, Christopher paints and fishes.

Archie grows up into a friendly little boy who loves the outdoors. He inherits his fathers love of fishing too. He looks a lot like his father but has his mothers eyes.


Adya works hard and rises in the ranks of the cooking profession. But her happiest times are sitting with her little family. Doing normal everyday things like sharing a meal as she looks at the face of the man she loves. The man who will one day die.

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2010, 04:59:26 PM »
Excellent!  Great writing in this one.  Can hardly wait for more.
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2010, 06:21:28 PM »
Time moves on much too fast for Adya as she watches her son grow. Watches the bond between father and son grow stronger with each passing day. How fleeting life is for those destined to be mortal. How can she deny him the chance to spend eternity by her side. What cruel fate that in order to provide immortality for her descendents she must suffer such agonising loss.

Adya stares at the space on the wall where her sons teenage portrait will hang it is another reminder of how quickly time is passing.


The family gather to celebrate the birthday of Archie. Christopher wishes for his son to be happy. Adya wishes for time to stand still so she can enjoy these few precious moments awhile longer.


Archie grows up to be slightly eccentric but rather dashing and handsome.
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 01:54:01 AM »
Good start on your story.  Yes, he is a very handsome boy and will break some hearts.
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: October 04, 2010, 03:05:13 PM »
Archie Jones Journal

For some reason my mum has been going on at me to start a journal. It all started when she was helping me with my homework

She went on and on at me about making sure I wrote any opportunities that I get down. She was saying something about black ops like shes in the military or something. My mum isn't in the army or anything like that she is a chef. She seems to spend all her time cooking.

We don't spend that much time together she seems to spend a lot of time on a forum, something called Carl and Pam's Sims 3 Forum.

I tried accessing her history but the site is password protected.

Then there is my dad we are really close, mum encourages us to spend our spare time together. She tells me that we will have plenty of time with each other in the future and that I should enjoy my time with dad now while I have the chance.

Another weird thing with my family is the freaky portrait collection. Every time mum or I have a birthday dad paints a portrait.

Yet we have none of him. I asked mum if she wanted me to paint dads portrait and she went off on one saying that wasn't my role in the dynasty. She keeps buying me fishing books. I mean I love to fish but its almost as if she is pushing me to fish all the time.

I am sure there is a secret in the family somewhere I just don't know what it is
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 04:01:59 AM »
I just remembered I have Indiana and Samantha Jones, explorer who got himself some wild and beautiful woman:)

Can't wait to see how Archie will react to immortality story. I took a picture of founder's wife, just to have some physical memory of her in the house. Great start and lovely writting. Will he lead through the entire story or next heir will continue his Journal? And good thing he isn't a computer whiz so he can't crack his mother's pasword ;D

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 12:09:56 PM »
Archie Jones Journal

Big news I met someone, we were having a birthday party for mum and I saw Her the most beautiful woman in entire simiverse. She has the most amazing smile and her hair is like the sunset. Her name is Gail and she is older then me, well not old like my mum old but older.

I haven't told the 'rents yet but I hope that who ever I marry I will be as happy as my parents are together.
I found myself watching them at the party and they are so in love its a bit gross but nice, if you get what I mean.


In other news I completed my lifetime wish, well technically dad completed his and claimed the credit too. Come on we don't need two private aquariums in the house.
Dad still goes fishing though. I am all for getting out and catching a few but a midnight in the graveyard I don't think so.


Its my birthday in two days time so watch out Gail Ursine I am coming to get you.
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 01:15:42 PM »
I really like Archie's look.

I'll be reading.

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 07:05:24 PM »
Archie Jones Journal

What can I say its official I am in love

I know most people won't approve Gail is almost an adult and I just had my young adult birthday, but the heart wants what it wants and my heart wants Gail.

It took me ages to persuade her that I was the one but eventually she came round and began to think of me as more then just a friend

So one night I took her to our special place and

I think you can tell from the look on her face what the answer was


We had a simple wedding on the beach with a few close friends and family


Well I had better get back to my beautiful wife. We have decided to try for a baby right away after all its not like mum and dad will be around forever I really want them to know their grandchildren.

As Adya watches her son marry the woman he loves, she knows it is time to tell him the truth...
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« Reply #11 on: October 05, 2010, 07:24:18 PM »
Oooooh. I am so very intrigued. He's going to be a bit angry with mom and dad for keeping the secret so long. His wife's about to enter into haghood soon and then...well, there'll be no deathflower for her!

I'll keep watching.

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 10:32:14 AM »
Archie stared at the computer screen in shock! There it was, his mum's secret the quest to be immortal. He read all the posts about the immortal dynasty and learned about his place in it. He was going to be immortal but his wife wasn't. How could he do this to her she should be by his side for eternity. Right at this minute in time he could not imagine a moment without her let alone forever.

He had to get away from her.

Gail knew that something was wrong with her husband he had barely left her side since they were married. It wasn't like him to go out without telling her. She tried his phone but there was no answer

Gail confronted her mother in law who eventually told her all about the immortal dynasty and what it entailed.



Gail hugged her mother in law and told her she understood why she was doing this for her child. After all she was about to become a mother too.


Gail found her husband at there special place. The place he had proposed which held such wonderful memories

They needed no words to express what they both felt. Gail looked into his eyes and he knew that she wanted him to become immortal

For the sake of their unborn child


So it came to pass that late one night a baby girl was born who was destined to become immortal


Mr and Mrs Archie Jones  would like to present their  daughter Seraphina she is artistic like her mummy and friendly like her dad. She has a great future ahead of her.

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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 11:27:46 AM »
Really nice.  Keep up the good work and will be keeping up with your story. :D
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Re: The Jones Dynasty
« Reply #14 on: October 06, 2010, 12:21:52 PM »
Loving it!  Very well written.
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