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The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty - Failed
« on: April 03, 2011, 01:58:39 PM »
Prologue
I guess I’d better start from the beginning. My name is Tucker Steel, eldest son of Christopher and Morgana Steel, Big brother to Gabriella, Clinton, Kody, Vanessa, Jordan, Alexis and Rebecca Steel, Superstar Athlete, Martial Arts Grandmaster, 5 Star Chef. This is my story. It’s was the 91st day, the 13th week, Mum and Dad’s elder birthday just a couple days away. Gabby, Nessie, Lex and Becca were living in Bridgeport. The Kodster and JT where living in Riverview. They couldn’t make it. I was working as an Athlete, just like dad, Clint was a doctor. Neither of us had left Sunset Valley. Clint had a husband and 3 adopted boys, whose parents had died in hospital. I had a girlfriend and a baby girl, and was living with two of my best friends since primary school. Mum was pregnant and due anytime. We all decided to have a little party, just the 4 of us. Me, Dad and Clint all messed around in the hot tub while mum slept. The next morning we went out for breakfast.

Then we went to the swimming pool, had a couple hold your breath contests and slashed around like a bunch of toddlers in a bath.

After that I climbed out. I hadn’t been feeling well for days. I’d picked up some bug from Shang Simla. Clint walked up to me. Said he had a treatment that might make me feel better, but it was still in the experimental stages, and it might not work. I looked deep into his eyes. The eyes of the little boy I’d know since I was a toddler, the eyes of the little boy who had always struggled to fit in, the eyes of the little boy who’d taken in 3 orphans because he’d felt responsible for their parents deaths, and I knew I could trust him. He was still that same little boy. He dressed that same, wore the same glasses. He even still wore that stupid ducky, that mum had given him when he’d been too afraid to get into our swimming pool back home. The treatment might be experimental, but I had the best doctor in the whole Simworld standing in front of me. So I took the treatment.

I started to feel dizzy straight away. Everything took on a blue-green tint.  

I feel to the ground. Knocked out.

When I woke up, I was in a field, in dad’s clothes. There was a note in my pocket. I took it out and read it, I couldn’t believe it. I was back at the start. Mum and Dad didn’t know each other. I hadn’t even been born. Apparently, Clint’s treatment had transported me to an alternate universe, completely different from my own. It wasn’t his fault and I know I shouldn’t blame him, but sometimes you can’t help it. I just wish I hadn’t taken the treatment. The only way back home is to revive all my brothers and sisters through and immortal dynasty. So that’s what I’m going to do.
I am Tucker Steel,
And I am Alone

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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2011, 02:42:20 PM »
Awesome start! I love Chris!



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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2011, 02:45:51 PM »
Awesome start! I love Chris!
Thanks, and I don't know anyone who doesn't like Chris. :)

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« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2011, 03:28:21 PM »
 :) Nor big sis nor  ;)

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« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2011, 05:43:14 PM »
Ooohhh thriller start!!
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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2011, 10:22:30 PM »
I love the way you've started this :)

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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 06:06:20 AM »
Thanks for all the comments and views everyone, the first chapter will be up soon.  :)



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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #7 on: April 10, 2011, 07:19:31 AM »
Chapter 1
On the paper was a set of rules that I set about completing. I found that I had a new found love for gardening instead of athletics but my natural cooking ability was the same as ever. I also found that I no longer longed to play the guitar, Instead I was practically tone deaf. Just joking, I checked and the ability is still there but I no longer am a musician, at least not until I complete these requirements. I spent the first couple days in this familiar but strange town in the fire station. On the 3rd day, i went to the pool, and I saw her. I rushed over to introduce myself and told her my star sign.

She said her name was Agnes Crumplebottom, I asked her about herself. Apparently, her husband Erik had drowned only days after their marriage, leaving her alone. In return I told her my story, about my family and the dynasty. I probably shouldn’t have, but like me she was alone, a kindred spirit. Then she told hold of my hands and looked into my eyes.

And, I feel in love. She then made some remark about her back hurting, so I spun her round and gave her a massage. Then she turned and I pulled her close. Staring into those eyes, I realised that I wasn’t alone anymore, and neither was she. We had each other, and that’s what mattered.

When I told her that, she said it was the most romantic thing she had ever heard. I pulled her into an enormous hug. I felt so right, standing there with her in my arms. It felt like i could do anything.

I don’t know how I got the courage to ask. It’s not like I’d never asked a girl out or anything, but Agnes was different. She’s special. Somehow I asked. I held my breath, sure she would say no. Then she said YES! I couldn’t believe it. Using that courage I leaned over and kissed her. Fireworks went off.

And I knew. I knew this was the person I wanted to spend the rest of her life with. So I reached into my pocket, and pulled out a box, inside was a ring, it was the ring my father had given to my mother, and his father before him.  Time slowed, I held my breath, waiting for an answer. Again, she said yes. She knew about the dynasty but she still said yes. I couldn’t believe it.

I invited her back to my field, the one that had cost me all my money, and we had a small private wedding, as we said our vows, I knew I loved this person more the ever.

After the wedding I called up a contractor called Sims3lover, and Aggie sold her car, to give us a bit of money. I told Sims3lover that I wanted a cheap white box accept for one thing, a surprise wedding gift for my Aggie-bear. It’s on the top right of the picture.

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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #8 on: April 10, 2011, 07:35:35 PM »
Awesome update! Congrats Tucker and Agnes! Will she get to have noobos?

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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #9 on: April 11, 2011, 10:18:24 AM »
Awesome update! Congrats Tucker and Agnes! Will she get to have noobos?
Thanks, and course she'll get to have nooboos, I'm writing the next update now. :)

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Re: The Brothers and Sisters of the Steel Dynasty
« Reply #10 on: April 11, 2011, 11:59:08 AM »
Chapter 2
P.O.V – Tucker
My little Aggie-Bear had her adult birthday today. So she went and got a makeover paid by yours truly.  While we were eating some apple pancakes, she brought up the subject of children. I’d been focusing so hard on my career that I forgot that I have to have an heir to continue the dynasty. So I obliged and a couple days later Aggie found out she was expecting. I hugged her and massaged her back; I have the best massages in the world ya know.

P.O.V - Agnes
Tucker is going to be such a good father. He spends all day waiting on me, gets up earlier so he can cook me breakfast then goes to tend his garden, he spends every free minute of the day listening to the baby, talking to the baby and feeling my tummy. He read every pregnancy book he could find at the library. It took me ages to convince him just to let me paint.

It’s almost time now, the baby is due any day. I went to sleep last night, then bam! An immense pain in my belly started. I yelled for Tucker and he drove me to the hospital.

Several hours later we returned home with two little bundles of joy. We named them Gabriella and Lucas Steel.

P.O.V – Tucker
I can’t believe it, twins. This can’t be happening. The note said that only my brothers and sisters would be reincarnated. Luke never existed last time. This shouldn’t be happening. Then I found another note in my pocket, saying that Luke was a spare and spares and spouses had to die. It’s breaks my heart, I didn’t know what I was getting myself into. My beautiful wife and my handsome boy would have to die. I am so selfish. Aggie says I’m not but I know I am. We had to rush to get teach the twins their skills before they became children. I taught Luke everything, I told him everything. I wouldn’t lie to my only son. While Aggie taught Gabby, I don’t know what she told her. To soon my two little angels aged up into kids. It was their first day of school today. Their identical in every way.  They have my hair and their mum’s eyes. They came, straight home and did their homework. Like good kids.

Then they both went to paint on their new easels. My little artists.

To soon they graduated primary school and had their teen birthday. Aggie decided to throw a party. It was really fun, for all of us. They blew out the candles on their cakes and went from little kids to teenagers almost as tall as me. Gabby was in the middle of changing her clothes when, a party crasher had his time run out. He went peacefully obviously having already completed everything he wanted in life.

Then they had their first day of secondary school. As I watch Luke grow into a handsome young man, I still hate myself for putting him through this. My adult birthday was the day after the kid’s child birthday. Aggies a week or two from elder and I am about 3 weeks from my elder birthday.  It looks like Luke and Gabby are little perfectionists and they seem to have a photographers eye . Anyway I’d better go; Luke wants some help with his home work.

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« Reply #11 on: April 11, 2011, 02:44:29 PM »
I'm amazed at how much alike Gabby and Luke look! Happy Birthday to the twins! Good luck in high school.
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« Reply #12 on: April 11, 2011, 02:56:30 PM »
I'm Glad that I've been able to read this from the start, I Can't wait till the next generations :)

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« Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 08:24:17 PM »
Welcome Gabriella and Lucas and happy birthdays! They are identical, awesome!!  ;D

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« Reply #14 on: April 14, 2011, 12:17:18 PM »
Chapter 3
P.O.V – Tucker
The twins still do stuff together, like homework but their interests have started to differ. Luke wants to learn sculpting and photography, he’s already sculpting in ice. While Gabby just likes to paint. But even this doesn’t damage their friendship. Their best friends forever now, which Aggie thinks is so cute.

Me and Aggie were talking last night and we decided to tell Luke and Gabby about the dynasty. So after breakfast that morning we sat them down and I started talking with Aggie interjecting every so often. I think gabby was pretty angry but she didn’t say anything. Afterwards Gabby and Luke were talking about the dynasty over a game of The Humans 3. She tried to vent her anger but Luke was calm as ever and managed to put in a good argument saying that if the dynasty didn’t exist neither would he. Luke said he’d lived a great life so far and there was nothing stopping him getting married and having kids his family just couldn’t move in with us and he couldn’t move in with them. Gabby seemed to accept that and even smiled. I felt so proud of my children right then, being so mature and all.

Then my little Aggie bear had her elder birthday, she rushed straight off to dye her hair and change her clothes. I told her she was as beautiful as the day I met her but I don’t think she believed me. Later I went to a party at Morty’s place while Aggie took up a new hobby. I think she lost it a bit with old age, I mean who fishes with Jolly Holly Alto at night. Anyway it looks like Malcolm Landgrabb and me and my dad all shop in the same store as he was wearing the same swim shorts as me. When I got home we all sat down and took part in some needed family bonding. Yep, we were playing The Humans 3. Best game ever.

Meet Jamaal Slater, Gabby meet him at school and he turned up at the house one day. Apparently, Luke and Gabby were his only friends apart from his two little sisters, guess he’s a bit of a loner and I think he’s just a tad insane. At least he’s artistic just like the twins. I think Gabby likes him. I mean like likes him. Luke told me that Gabby had told asked him to be her boyfriend. I foresee a marriage in his future.

A couple days later it was the twin’s birthdays, I threw them a party to celebrate them becoming adults and luckily no one died this time. Luke aged up into a handsome young man and Gabby grew up into a beautiful young lady. They’re both really family orientated now.

P.O.V – Gabby
I think I’m in love. Jamaal is everything I ever wanted in a boy, he’s artistic, extremely good looking and Mum, Dad and Luke all like him. He turned up to the party today and after my birthday, I don’t know how but I managed to work up the courage to ask him to marry me and guess what... He said YESS! Booyah, we got married right then and there.

Then my little love paid for all of us to take a trip to China. He is so awesome. It is so beautiful here. I love my man.

For Mum and Dad this is a skill trip, you know harvesting food and fishing. Luke just tagged along for the fun of it. And for my super handsome hubby and me it’s a honeymoon. See y’all next time.


Right everyone I need some help with thinking up a nickname for Jamaal, any ideas.