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Offline seashall

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #125 on: February 27, 2012, 11:54:22 PM »
If they don't kill each other first.  ;D  He's as hot tempered as she is.
Uh oh, the future is NOT bright for them right now! ;)
Although if it's a fight Lucy wants, it'll be a fight Lucy GETS! :D ;)

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #126 on: February 28, 2012, 02:48:37 AM »
Awesome updates! You're such a good storyteller. :D



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Re: More Angels
« Reply #127 on: February 28, 2012, 03:16:25 AM »
Thank you both.  I love getting your comments.   ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #128 on: February 28, 2012, 08:26:15 PM »
Thank you again everyone. 


Lucy was thoughtful as she bid Clothilda farewell that evening.  She would be back to visit.  She promised that.  She and Clothilda had built the beginnings of a strange and unique friendship and Lucy did not want to lose that. 

She could picture herself  boasting to her friends back home that her best friend in Dry Gulch was a very old witch.  Lucy smiled as she was already planning on spinning a story of just how dangerous such a friendship could be.

Friendship with Justin was a challenge that she would face in the morning.  Perhaps she could invite him over to see the foal.  He would hardly pick a fight if Roamer was nuzzling wetly at his hand. 



He might like to have a ride on Tinkerbell too. 


She was a friendly horse and loved meeting new people.



She looked up at the clear, dark blue evening sky sprinkled with stars, and breathed in the smell of the sun baked earth, cooling now that the sun had gone.  Dry Gulch had grown on her.






So endeth my tale.  Whether Lucy and Justin can keep from tearing each other to pieces long enough to become friends might be another story I will tackle in the future.

Thank you to all my readers.  It has been thrilling for me to watch the view count climb so I hope you all enjoyed my tale as much as I did in writing it.  A big thank you to the ones who commented.  Your kind words meant a lot to me and gave me encouragement when I needed it.  Thank you again.

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #129 on: February 29, 2012, 12:52:43 AM »
I sad that this tale has ended.   :'( But, it seems that another is in the making.  ??? Will be waiting for future tales of Lucy and Justin.  ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #130 on: February 29, 2012, 01:11:22 AM »
Thanks Raven.  I will have to mull it over and see what I can come up with.

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #131 on: February 29, 2012, 02:33:06 AM »
It was a great story, Kept me hanging from the start right to the end.  :)
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Re: More Angels
« Reply #132 on: February 29, 2012, 06:22:10 AM »
A wonderful ending! I'm sad it end though :'( Can't wait for another story! I love your writing. :D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #133 on: February 29, 2012, 07:01:35 AM »
Great story, Hate to see it come to an end. You are a very good writer and I am looking forward to your next one.
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Re: More Angels
« Reply #134 on: February 29, 2012, 11:54:07 AM »
Awesome story, so sad to see it end too. I would love a story of Justin and Lucy trying to be friends! I love Clothilda. I would love to be her friend, too! ;D

Offline Figwit

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #135 on: February 29, 2012, 03:59:24 PM »
Thank you all.  Big hugs for your kind words.  ;D

I'd like a friend like Clothilda too.  :D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #136 on: February 29, 2012, 05:06:26 PM »
What. What in the world. I leave for a few days and I come back to see that my most favourite story on this forum has ended. That is an outrage!

It was truly an excellent tale. I loved every bit of it from the very beginning. Your writing is impressive, I've said that multiple times. It was a real pleasure and honour to read a story as engaging and interesting as More Angels. I'm hoping for Even More Angels in near future, and that brings me to the final part of my post.

"Lucy - she's a trouble but that ain't a bother,
You see, she's the key and the possible cure,
Therefore there's no time for the big brothers.
It's magic, it's assignment and a foal too
That keeps her diving deep into trouble.
And it's one brill author that reveals the story,
With hints, mystery and much glory,
It's Figwit - the best and one and only."

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #137 on: February 29, 2012, 08:07:49 PM »
Wednesday!  ;D  That is wonderful.  Thank you so much you sweet thing.  I love the little verse. ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #138 on: August 14, 2012, 07:52:48 PM »
WOW

I just read your whole story in one long evening, just because I needed to know the rest of the story after every single chapter!
Your writing is amazing! Thank you very much for this wonderful and creative story!
The first thing I'll do is go and check if you have written more stories, but then I'll have to get some sleep first before reading it and being unable to turn of my computer  ;)
After this I feel like writing a story of my own maybe, you're very motivating!
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Re: More Angels
« Reply #139 on: September 06, 2012, 05:07:16 AM »
Thank  you Odie.  I am glad you enjoyed it.  I apologize for taking so long to get back to you.  I have not played Sims 3 for many months now so don't call around so often.  Thank you for your kind words.  ;D

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Re: More Angels
« Reply #140 on: October 10, 2012, 12:21:28 PM »
Awesome stories about Lucy and her brothers. I like Lucy alot! ;D