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The Old & The New - Completed
« on: April 27, 2012, 04:30:39 PM »
The Old & The New - Introduction

Once upon a time in a land lost in time, there lived an Evil Witch. This Witch vowed to destroy the lives of everyone who disobeyed her and has been said to have a sort of... "Magic Power". 50 years ago she invaded the land also known as Terrania, It's king and Queen fought valiantly to defend the kingdom, but in the end, where defeated. They surrendered their kingdom to the hands of the Evil Witch and eventually passed away; leaving their daughter Cleopatra in their place. Cleopatra lived through a life of poverty, destruction, and daily executions. She survived the toughest challenges without a scratch and vowed one day, to reclaim the throne. At the age of 28 she met her "Soon-to-be" Husband, Lancelot. They where attending a ceremony to honour their 2 years of marriage when the Queen ( The Witch ) called them and their daughter to the throne room.

"Sir Lancelot, Duke of Vramentia, I have received information that you and your wife have been plotting against me this whole time..."
"Your Majesty, we would never-...."
"Silence!"

"You have defied my rule all along! I hereby sentence you to death!
The Queen waved her hand and out shot a streak of monstrous thunder, It pierced Lancelot's heart and he turned to dust.
"Lancelot!"
Pivoting, the Queen turned and stomped towards Cleopatra...
"Stop right there!"
"WHO ARE YOU?"
"You're not getting the Princess!"
Cleopatra vanished before the Queens very eyes...

"Why you...!"
The Queen swung at the mysterious man but he disappeared in a cloud of light.
She turned and growled at the soldier...
"You let them get away!"

Cleopatra was dazzled, she got to her feet and Screamed at the mysterious man.
"What did you do!?"

"I'm sorry Cleopatra, my name is Mr Poggle, I was sent here by your Uncle to ensure the safety of you and your daughter. We must get you out of here now!"

"Bu...But..."
"No time to explain follow me down the shaft."
"What shaft?"

"This one."

Cleopatra emerged, covered in mud and in a large room full of strange objects...
"Wh...what's this?"

"It's a time machine, it'll take you and your daughter to safety."
"What about Lancelot?!"
"I'm sorry, I couldn't save him.."
".... Behind you!!"
Before anyone could speak the Queen grabbed Mr Poggle and wrestled him to the ground.
"Cleopatra go! I've done my duty!"

"I'm not leaving you"
Cleopatra placed her daughter on the ground.
"Good-Luck my love."

And watched her crawl through the time-machine, gone.

Forever.

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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 05:33:10 PM »
I can't wait for the next chapter!  :D



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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2012, 06:07:35 PM »
This looks great so far! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2012, 06:20:50 PM »
Awesome!! I want more! :D

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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2012, 09:10:48 PM »
Very very cool!

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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2012, 09:36:10 PM »
Wow!! This looks amazing!
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Re: The Old & The New - Introduction
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2012, 06:17:24 AM »
The New

In a land 500 years on from the previous location, the people known as Caridans are striving for survival at the end of the universe after being chased off Earth 200 years earlier. Their commander's name is unknown but his wife is called Daffy. They suffered great losses in their previous battle with the green people also known as "Witches" and their remaining 2 crew members are researching a way to "revive the dead".
"Proton disintegrator?"
"Check!"
"Mummified remains?"
"Check!"
"Laser?"
"Check!"

"Neu... What's that!?"
A child appears fom a cloud of yellow light.

"This could be our biggest discovery yet! Let's tell the Boss!"
"Right!"
They pick up the child and teleport to the Bosses Chamber.

"Boss!"

"Booooooosssss!"
They reach their boss, out of breath and puffing.
"What is it now you two...?"
"We found..a...a...a..ummmmm..."
"It's a pink thing, and it's alive!"

"Awww, look how cute it is!"

"Put her down now! She's a human!"
"Why does that matter? Human's never hurt us!"
"Why do you think we fled to the end of the universe?!"

"Dear, please... You couldn't harm someone this cute, could you?"

The Man sighs...
"Very well, we will send her to Sunset Valley.
"You two! Follow us to the space pod!"
"Right!"
They approach the space pod, and the woman gently places the child on the ground.
"Go on dear, off you pop."

The child enters the space pod.

And is sent flying towards Sunset Valley.


She lands by a lake and forms a massive crator, right next to Jamie Jolina.

"Oh my! What on earth... I can't leave you here can I?"
Jamie picks up the child.

"You're coming to live with me sweetie."
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"Welcome to your new home!"

Then the child's eyes turn purple for a moment...


What could it mean?
To be continued...



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Re: The Old & The New - The New
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2012, 07:56:41 AM »
Oh my! What could the purple eyes mean? Very interesting story. Love the sets you've build. ;D

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Re: The Old & The New - The New
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2012, 08:01:46 AM »
That was very cool! Are we going to be seeing more of the commander and his wife? I also love the sets it looks as though you put lots of time and effort into this story and I appreciate that.  :D
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Re: The Old & The New - The New
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2012, 08:49:34 AM »
Oh my! What could the purple eyes mean? Very interesting story. Love the sets you've build. ;D

Thank you!

That was very cool! Are we going to be seeing more of the commander and his wife? I also love the sets it looks as though you put lots of time and effort into this story and I appreciate that.  :D

The next chapter will be sometime today, 2 hours or so, it will be on The child's life with Jamie on Earth and then we will be seeing more of the commander  ;D

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Re: The Old & The New - The New
« Reply #10 on: April 28, 2012, 09:52:50 AM »
Jamie's Diary: Entry 1

A lot has gone on recently, but the best of all was finding little Sasha (That's what I named her) by the lake! The Social workers were baffled, so ended up giving me parental control. I'm not exactly the "Family Type" but I love my little girl and I will do anything for her. Due to me being a single mother, the adoption agency gave me 18,000 Simoleans to furnish my home into a more "Child-Friendly" place.
First I bought a car.

And I refurnished my room.

Furnished Sasha's room.

Upgraded the Bathroom.

And made the kitchen a bit better.

Yep, there on the sofa, that's me, I had my adult birthday the day Sasha arrived and got a gorgeous makeover!
Since I have late shifts the babysitter helps around the house a lot.
She takes out the "Potty Trash".

And plays with Sasha!

Meanwhile I was promoted to Gene Therapist!

Even though I was really busy I still found time for Sasha,
I Taught her to speak;

To walk;

And to use the potty! (Sorry no suitable picture)

I even had to time to socialise. We became Best Friends!

After a few days it was Sasha's birthday, so I threw a party;

Everyone had a great time!

And before long, she was a beautiful child!

To be continued...

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Re: The Old & The New - Jamie's Diary: Entry 1
« Reply #11 on: April 28, 2012, 11:00:26 AM »
The Darkness Approaching

At the same time as Sasha's birthday;
The commander and his wife were chatting in their ship after losing their last two comrades in a meteor storm.
"That girl..."
"What about her?"
"She seemed to posess something, I'm not sure what but...something..."
"Hmmm."
"I feel sorry for her, having no one there for her."
"Maybe there is, maybe someone in Sunset Valley took her in."
"Maybe..."
"Well lets be thankful we have each other!"

The lights flickered, and suddenly a mysterious figure appeared at the door...
"You..."
"Yes me, did you think you could hide from me Commander? I became a vampire just to live to see this day. Now where's the girl?!"

"I'll never tell you!"
"I see... well, I guess I have no choice... You must die!"
The Witch shot a streak of fire towards to commander.
"Noooo!"
Daffy jumped in the way and took the blow.

"Daffy!"
The Witch Chuckled.
"Where is she Commander?"

"...Sunset Valley..."
"Thank you commander. You will receive your reward once I get her head!"
The Witch dissapeared.

She appeared in Sunset Valley!

"I can just taste her blood!"
The Witch laughed and ran towards the town centre.

To be continued...

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Re: The Old & The New - The Darkness Approaching
« Reply #12 on: April 28, 2012, 11:35:49 AM »
Hide Sasha! HIDE!!! One word to describe this story is... Suspenseful.

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Re: The Old & The New - The Darkness Approaching
« Reply #13 on: April 28, 2012, 01:20:50 PM »
Hide Sasha! HIDE!!! One word to describe this story is... Suspenseful.

You could say that  :P Luckily the Witch doesn't encounter Sasha just yet  ;)

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« Reply #14 on: April 28, 2012, 01:38:18 PM »
Jamie's Diary: Entry 2

First of all, apparently a strange green woman has been running around town saying: "WHERE IS SHE!". And to be honest, we just all go with the hint that maybe she's mad? So we ignore her. Next up! Sasha's Imagionery Friend became real! His name is Skip, and he looks like this:

-So we had to get bunkbeds~ Sasha and Skip are best friends, maybe they will get married in the future? I hope so!
Skip has been experimenting with the building blocks;

While Sasha started painting!

And I went off on home calls after being promoted 2 times, to a Neuro Surgeon!

Sasha and Skip had their first day of school.

And a gorgeous policeman named Hank came round warning me about the Green Lady, apparently she's dangerous. - But I thought nothing of it.

Things hit off, and we became Boyfriend and Girlfriend!

Finally, Sasha painted this strange picture, she said it was her "homeland", honestly, sometimes I worry for that Girl. But perhaps there's more than meets the eye?

To be continued...