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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Try, Try Again" (3/18)
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2013, 05:33:20 PM »
"Try, Try Again"



Kaila Swift was four days away from becoming an elder. With no children, she longed for one to call her own. Her mind tried to convince her not to try for a baby. After all she knew no one on the island but her boss, Pearl Yang, at Serpentine Labs. Even though her intellect reasoned against it, her heart whispered faintly, “You will bear a child soon. Trust in the ways of the Island.”



Julian Strong resented the island; its blistering hot climate caused the death of his wife. Julian’s family of three became a father/daughter relationship right after they settled into Shady Rest at 49 Paradise Circle. Ever since that day, the not-so-young dad was concerned for his daughter and her future. Julian wanted her to become a woman but feared losing her as soon as she turned into a young adult.



As her name suggested, Maggie Strong persevered through her mother’s passing without shedding a tear. However, on the inside, her soul cried out for someone to fill the void. She only resented her father for bringing them to the island, so she turned to young Edmund Carnegie for a shoulder to cry on. Maggie found true love through tragic circumstances, but her father remained worried and without a partner.



AN - This is my fourth attempt at a Random Town Jump. I think I'll finally get it off the ground! Encouragement is the best help of all. :) Thanks for your readership!
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“For the Love of Flame Fruit”

The Sunday morning sun shone bright over Kaila as she sauntered into her garden, eager to harvest the first flame fruits of the summer. To her disappointment, the bushes had not produced a single one in more days than she had kept track of.

“I’ll walk up the shoreline to Paradise Park and Garden to check its crops. I’ve been craving flame fruit pancakes all year!” she thought hungrily to herself.

No delicious fiery morsels were to be found there, but Kaila didn’t give up that easily. She made up her mind to go door to door, asking neighbors to spare a couple in exchange for her expert gardening tips.  Kaila’s time spent after hours at the science lab honed her skill enough to make her the most successful Green Thumb on the entire lagoon.

Little to no rewards were reaped from the search. Some residents were out enjoying a leisurely morning; others just did not garden whatsoever… Including the Strong household.

Julian heard a knock on the front door, which made him sit straight up in bed. The clock read 12 noon. He answered in his sleepwear and was promptly mortified to see Kaila Swift at his doorstep. She was an amazing cook, and although she was plump, Julian happened to find her features attractive. He blushed as she asked if he had any ripe orange delicacies in his pantry. Even without the goods she sought, he felt compelled to invite her in because she looked hot… As in at risk of a heat stroke.

“Do you need anything to cool down? A juice, fruit punch, or cold one?”

“I think I’ll be fine, if you don’t mind me relaxing in your air-conditioned home for a few moments,” she replied. “I’ve been hiking around the island for three hours, all for the love of flame fruit.”



All of a sudden a small light flickered above Kaila’s head. Perhaps that wasn’t what she was looking for…



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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Magnetism" (3/19)
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2013, 03:12:33 PM »
“Magnetism”

“Are you feeling dizzy, Kaila? You look weak; you need to lie down,” Julian insisted. Her body felt enervated from the hot weather and long walk, and he didn’t want her to faint or fall over onto the coffee table. Inside herself, conversely, her spirit was energized by the intriguing idea floating around in her head.

While she settled into the sofa, Kaila struck up a conversation with the gentleman.

“How’s your family?” she inquired with the best of intentions.

“I’m afraid that’s a tough question. My daughter, Maggie, is upstairs. She’s playing the guitar; I suppose that’s her manner of coping. I haven’t discovered mine yet,” Julian answered wearily. Suddenly Kaila remembered why; she read in ‘The Daily Tidal’ an obituary for Mrs. Strong. A look of panic spread across her face.

“I’m so sorry I asked. I didn’t mean to upset you,” she said remorsefully.

“Please don’t feel bad for it. It’s a circumstance we are coming to terms with, and I know you meant well.”

The conversation continued for hours afterwards. Julian and Kaila shared stories, laughs, and tears; they hit it off as if they had known each other in a past life. When the sun began to fade, she decided to take a taxi back home. Julian walked her to the car but stopped short of the road.

At that moment, a warm sensation spread across his entire body. Compelled by it, he asked Kaila to accompany him to Sunshine Park. What happened next was clearly the work of the ‘Island’.



“Kaila, no one can replace what I’ve lost, but I know you are the one to help me find life’s purpose. I feel like our souls are connected; it’s only been a day, but I want you to become my wife.”

Ms. Swift was taken aback by the proposal, but she felt the same about him. She jumped and wept for joy. As she hugged Julian, she looked up.

“The Island has its ways.”



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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Magnetism" (3/19)
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2013, 03:31:28 PM »
I will be reading! I haven't played Sunlit Tides much, I look forward to reading more!

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Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Magnetism" (3/19)
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2013, 03:31:51 PM »
You are very welcome. I love Twallen's Story Progression. But, note that you'll have to be very quick to decide on your heir's mate. I usually start them making friends in elementary school and lock them in as soon as they are teenagers. Otherwise, you need to be okay with breaking up an already established couple. I had to do that with my last heir but it worked out ;) Good luck!



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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Magnetism" (3/19)
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2013, 03:32:48 PM »
Very nice!  I love Sunlit Tides :)

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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Magnetism" (3/19)
« Reply #8 on: March 19, 2013, 03:37:23 PM »
bookmarked! 
ALready looking forward to noobo(s)  ;D

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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Captain Jack Approved" (3/20)
« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2013, 02:17:53 PM »
“Captain Jack Approved”

Preparations for the wedding were made on that very night. Kaila chose her attire, Julian booked a venue, and they both wrote their vows. Of course, Julian needed to tell Maggie about her future step-mother…

“Mags, I’m going to tell you something. You might not understand at this moment, but I believe you will in time.”

“What is it, Dad? Did you decide not to buy me a car?”

“No, dear. We are getting a car, but it will be for the whole family. Speaking of family…”

“I know; Mom’s not here. I’m sure you didn’t mean to say family.”

“But I did, Mags. I need you to know that I’m marrying Ms. Kaila Swift. Tomorrow.”

“What? Dad!”

“I found love, just as you did with Edmund. I know it seems sudden, but I’m getting older by the day.”

“Ok. Ok. Just breathe. I’ve gotta be strong for him,” Maggie thought to herself.

“I think I’ll be alright with it. I don’t expect to get along with her straight away, but as you said, I have a future with Edmund. I want you to have your own; you deserve it.”

“Oh, Mags… You’re so much more mature than I knew. You are, without a doubt, the best daughter I’ll ever ask for,” Julian cried as he hugged her tightly.

“Do you need help with the plans for tomorrow?”

“We ought to have a cake, and I know Midnight Moon Bistro won’t be able to take an order this late.”

“I’ve got it covered!” Maggie said with a grin.

With his daughter’s approval, Julian carried on attending to the details for a ceremony and reception. Before he knew it, morning light beamed through the kitchen window. This day was especially for him and his bride.

Maggie arrived at Kaila’s eclectic home to assist her in getting ready. They spoke at lengths concerning everything from boys to makeup, all while Maggie threaded Kaila’s lei and ironed the wrinkles out of her dress. She decided that having a step-mother was not as bad as it seemed in fairytales. She even began to build a stronger relationship with Kaila than with her father.

After assuring Kaila that a few last-minute tasks were taken care of, they took a taxi to Captain Jack’s Beach. Maggie and the beautifully radiant Kaila promenaded down the boardwalk towards the wedding arch Julian stood under; his eyes lit up when he caught a glimpse of his fiancée. Looking at each other with excited anticipation, Julian asked Kaila if she was ready. She nodded, and he began to read his vows.

“Kaila, even though Maggie is with me, I’ve been torn since my wife moved on in spirit. It’s been an ongoing struggle to get by as a single parent. Maggie is my number one girl, but I never expected to have another woman in my life again. Take this ring as a symbol of my newfound hope that will last forever.”

Kaila teared up as he placed it on her left index finger. She started into what she wrote for him.

“Julian, when I was lost in the shuffle and feeling insecure about myself as a whole, you found me. You saved me from a lifetime of solitude on an island where everyone else seems to find true love. I feel as if you are the missing piece in the puzzle of my life. Take this ring as a symbol of my eternal gratitude to you.”



They kissed, signifying the end of the ceremony…

(To Be Continued)



AN - Thanks Artsygirl, judewright, Tilia, and Ilessthan3TheSims! I've played Sunlit Tides as the "Island" version of my Simself, but this is my first time playing with its Townies. Judewright, I will keep that in mind; Maggie's already had trouble with it! There will be nooboo(s), but not for a few updates. Sorry, and thanks for your patience!
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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Captain Jack Approved" (3/20)
« Reply #10 on: March 21, 2013, 04:40:08 PM »
I love read your story. You're very good with words. Especially when choose the right word that apply in right situation.
Best wishes for Kaila and Julian :D

Good luck with your project. Don't forget to update it soon ^^
I'll reading too.
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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Babycakes" (3/21)
« Reply #11 on: March 21, 2013, 08:59:32 PM »
“Babycakes”

After the romantic smooch, the reception kicked off with a big surprise. Maggie had a cake shipped overnight, straight from Monte Vista! The bride, groom, and guests all took a slice and practically inhaled the deliciously frosted layers. Although with all things considered, what happened next was even more shocking…



Kaila’s face was overcome with an unfamiliar expression. She rose from the park bench and rubbed her stomach. Sure enough, she was pregnant. She ran over to her new husband, shouting his name.

“Julian! Julian!”

“Mmpphh?” he asked, his mouth stuffed with cake. He looked at his wife, gorgeous and glowing, waiting for her response.

“It’s happened; we’re going to have a baby!”

Julian nearly needed the Heimlich maneuver after that announcement. Once he properly recovered, he was overwhelmed with emotion. “How will Maggie feel? Will the baby be healthy, given Kaila’s age? What needs to be done to prepare our house for another child? Can I handle this?”

The noisy chatter filled his mind, but he composed himself to congratulate Kaila.

“Wow! Really? I can’t believe it; this is one day I will remember always, even when we’re old and feeble,” Julian smiled at her as he imagined holding their little one for the first time.

After the couple (and Maggie) arrived home, planning for the new arrival commenced. Julian told his daughter the news like he told her about the marriage; she received it quite well, even offering to decorate the nursery. Kaila read the latest pregnancy books and visited the doctor a few times; Julian massaged her back when she had those nagging pains. He frequently felt of, talked to, and listened to her tummy. Maggie adorned the baby’s renovated room with aquatic decorations reminiscent of the sea.

Soon, it was time. Kaila gave birth to a baby boy while tending to her coffee bean bushes. The newest member of the family was given the name Nohea, meaning “handsome” in Polynesian culture.



"I want to give him the world," remarked Kaila, cradling him in her arms.



AN - Thank you, Eldridge, for your kind words! It's very encouraging when I receive such a compliment. We'll see what Nohea looks like as a toddler soon, but I want to focus on Maggie in the next update. I don't want to neglect her; she's a great girl!
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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump, "Babycakes" (3/21)
« Reply #12 on: March 22, 2013, 03:57:41 PM »
Welcome little Nohea! Hope you will fit well with your new family! Sure, be focus with Maggie first :D

I love when you considering the meaning behind the name that you given. I also, seek the meaning before the nooboo is born. I believe in the real world, our parent give our name because there's a reason behind it. And it's also work as a prayer. Like little Nohea here, I believe his parent want him to be handsome like his name ^^

Plus, your storytelling style is so realistic. I love it. I hope that you didn't mind to share a little tips? :P
Regardless of that next update please :D
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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump
« Reply #13 on: March 29, 2013, 01:03:39 AM »
I feel the same about names, Eldridge. :)

As for tips, I feel like much of my writing style was shaped by one of my high school English teachers. She had a full list of guidelines we had to follow when writing a paper. I wish there was some way for me to get that page back because of how it shaped me! In addition, I keep a thesaurus with me whenever I write; this is how I choose better words for certain situations.

Well... Microsoft Word has failed me. It became corrupt. I don't have my story anymore. I'm very, very disappointed because I thought I had a good thing going here. After I reinstall, I'll start from the top. With a little different strategy, too! Plus I won't be writing in so much detail; this is supposed to be a 14 (or more) generation game, after all.  :o

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Re: Strong and Swift: A Random Town Jump
« Reply #14 on: March 30, 2013, 09:35:37 AM »
Thank you for the tips, MissPlumbBob ;D

So, sorry to hear about that... I am too usually write the story in Microsoft Word before I posting here but I am write the doc in separate chapter just to make things easy. Because the image things that make the file size heavy.

I'll surely check this page again when you posting something new :D
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