I feel the same about names, Eldridge.

As for tips, I feel like much of my writing style was shaped by one of my high school English teachers. She had a full list of guidelines we had to follow when writing a paper. I wish there was some way for me to get that page back because of how it shaped me! In addition, I keep a thesaurus with me whenever I write; this is how I choose better words for certain situations.
Well... Microsoft Word has failed me. It became corrupt. I don't have my story anymore. I'm very, very disappointed because I thought I had a good thing going here. After I reinstall, I'll start from the top. With a little different strategy, too! Plus I won't be writing in so much detail; this is supposed to be a 14 (or more) generation game, after all.

Check back soon!