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Re: The Ithaca Legacy
« Reply #90 on: September 20, 2013, 02:47:11 PM »
Awesome chapter! Kleio and Donte are so cute!  ;D

Thank you :D
Aren't they, though?! I'm so in love with those two.

That was wonderful! You tell such a beautiful story. Perhaps top some the text might be daunting at first glance but one they read it, they have to be charmed. I really like Donte, though I do have an affinity for those hero types.

Aw, thank you :) I'm glad at least that some seem to like it ^_^ And perhaps it's only a good idea that I focus more on the story and how much I can't help but telling it, and less on others' opinion.

Oh please, keep the text coming!  That was wonderful!  Kase is right.  Though the text might be slightly intimidating to some, once they actually read it, it is totally worth it!  So I say keep it coming!  And you are most definitely NOT messing things up!

Thank you so much :D <3 Ah, I'm glad that you enjoy it! Especially with these longer chapters - it takes more time to write/shoot them, but when I have the feeling that people actually like it, it feels like they're worth it.



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« Reply #91 on: September 24, 2013, 04:18:18 AM »
3.2. Once Upon a Time in Moonlight Falls
(Donte)

These days, I was hardly staying at the old house. Compared to the Ithaca house, it was small and cold and felt less like home. Could be because Kleio wasn’t there, could be because Pasiphaë had stopped snarling at me. Maybe a combo.

I had to go there now, though. I just needed a change of clothes and nothing more. I hadn’t expected anyone to be there, but the lights were on, and I was met by an unpleasant, blue gaze when I entered the living room.



“Grandmother?” I got chills. I knew this wasn’t good. “What are you doing here?”

“I might ask you the same,” she said, but she didn’t sound at all surprised. “But then again, I don’t think I have to ask you. Is the girl well?”

“Kleio is great, thank you.”

She let out a deep sigh. “So the two of you are right back where you left off, I take it?”

I nodded. She shook her head and said: “It’s stupid and selfish of you. I hope you know that.”

It felt like I had been slapped for a moment. She had a way of saying things – never did like going easy on me when she felt I’d made a mistake, and the worst part was that a voice in my own head was saying basically the same thing. Stupid. Selfish.

“It’s not just because it’s dangerous. I’m thinking of the girl, too.”

“I’d believe that if you stopped calling her ‘girl’. She’s a grown woman.”



“You know perfectly well that I have nothing against her. Stop acting like a love-sick teen and think. It’s risky. Everybody has warned you, over and over again. Imagine what could happen – the two of you could be on your way to making a disaster.”

“I… I know that. But it doesn’t have to happen. Kleio and I…”

“Hush. Boy. I’ve already contacted your uncle. He’s on his way here, and he’s going to put a stop to this madness once and for all. Understood?”

A chill went down my spine. “Understood.”

I was backing out of the door now, trying not to shake. My uncle. She was mad. He was a good man, all in all, but he was crazy. There was no saying how he would solve the problem – would he magically teleport me to Egypt? Turn Kleio into a toad?

“I have to go… say goodbye,” I told my grandmother. “I’ll be back.”

I didn’t stay long enough to hear her reply, but I’m pretty sure I heard her sigh deeply. She knew I wasn’t coming back.



I hurried home. Home. If I hadn’t been so worried, I think I might have smiled at the thought that I felt that way about the Ithaca house. I felt it even stronger as I went into Kleio’s room and found her sitting on the bed. She looked up with a smile but it faded as she saw what I assumed must be a less cheerful expression on my face.

“What’s going on?” she said.

“Something kind of bad.” I knelt down in front of her, trying my best to smile. “I have to leave again.”

I could see that she knew what I meant. I didn’t mean the house up the hill where I’d lived with grandma. I meant away.

“Remember how I said I’d explain everything? About why I moved back then?” She nodded. “Well, I think I owe it to you. Do you have time?”

“Yeah. I’ve been waiting for this,” she said. I sat down next to her and thought for a second. Where to start?

“I guess, it’s about both our families. You have an affinity for magic, I already mentioned that. And well, so does everyone in my family.”



“Both the Ithacas…”



“… And the Vicentias once lived in Moonlight Falls.”

“Wait… Vicentias? Your name is Gentry.”

“Well, I’ll get to that. Grandma and I changed names many years ago. I wasn’t born a Gentry, and neither was she. We were name Vicentia.”



“And both families were magic. They didn’t just have an affinity for it – they were all full-blown magicians.”



“But it all went wrong when the families mixed.”

“Wait, we’re related?!”

“What? No, no, we’re from different branches. Don’t worry. They were both big families. Big families with very strong magic powers – and when they mixed, it had disastrous results.”



“Medea. From the time she was a teen until she grew up, she caused havoc all over Moonlight Falls. Where the families had previous openly practised magic and given a helping hand to the community when needed, they now had to go into hiding.

“Not that it worked. Medea was out of control – every time they thought they’d contained her or talked some sense into her, she went off again.”



“It ended in tragedy. Her own father’s death at her hand turned out to be the last straw for the other members of the family.”



“They made a final, drastic decision and locked her deep in a basement under her family’s house. Her mother joined her in captivity because she – despite everything – wouldn’t give up on her daughter.”



“After that, the Ithacas left Moonlight Falls and swore off magic for good. From what I’ve heard, they went to Sunset Valley.”



“The Vicentias stayed and they kept practising magic, but in secret. My family has stayed there for generations. It was where I was born and where I lived when my parents were still alive.

“However, there are some people in my family who look back on the time of Medea and admire her grandness, her power, her ruthlessness – they curse the fact that we have to live in secret and to never show our magic to outsiders.”



“My parents were among them, and after they got themselves killed trying to bring back Medea’s power, my grandmother took me away from Moonlight Falls and fled, changed our names. We fled for years, from town to town, and eventually ended up in Monte Vista.”

“Where you met me.”

“Much to my grandmother’s despair, yeah. Our family is still looking for us, and, even worse, they’re still looking for you.”

“For me?”

“Well, not you specifically. Your family. Any Ithaca will do. They hope that by merging the families again, they can make another Medea. And that’s why my grandmother immediately moved away again when she found out who you were. She didn’t have anything against you at all; in all honesty, I think she likes you. But there’s always a risk, so she’s contacted my uncle. He’s not one of the bad members of my family but he is… ruthless. He’ll do anything to keep us away from each other – he won’t settle for moving to another town, and that’s why I have to leave.”

“And that’s why I have to go with you.”

I started and looked up at her. “You didn’t hear me? We could create a monster if we ever have children together – and if not, we’ll probably be hunted by my insane relatives who want to turn our children into monsters.”

“We just won’t have any children, then. Simple. I never said I wanted children, did I?”

She didn’t, and I looked away, blushing. I’d always wanted children myself, but I didn’t say that. If I had Kleio, surely it didn’t matter. And she looked resolved.



“In that case…” I said. “Kleio, please, will you marry me?”


[Author’s note: Yes, this crazy lady just made her heir promise not to have children. What could possibly go wrong?

And yeah - they're moving from Monte Vista. It was starting to lag, I was getting bored and because I didn't think to change some settings in the StoryProgression mod, everybody had hyphenated names. It would have become completely ridiculous in time.]





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Re: The Ithaca Legacy
« Reply #92 on: September 24, 2013, 02:10:43 PM »
Oh wow!  ExceptExcellent screenshots there and excellent story telling!  Good luck where they end up!

EDIT: D'oh!  Fingers moving faster than brain again XD

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« Reply #93 on: September 24, 2013, 02:40:47 PM »
I love this! The story is so wonderful, Louise.

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Re: The Ithaca Legacy
« Reply #94 on: September 24, 2013, 05:41:37 PM »
Oh wow!  ExceptExcellent screenshots there and excellent story telling!  Good luck where they end up!

EDIT: D'oh!  Fingers moving faster than brain again XD

Thank you so much :D Glad you like the screenshots. If it isn't painfully obvious, I'm experimenting with them :P

I love this! The story is so wonderful, Louise.

Thank you so very much! :D



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Re: The Ithaca Legacy
« Reply #95 on: September 24, 2013, 07:23:37 PM »
Aww. I'm a sucker for these love stories. Amazing chapter!

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« Reply #96 on: September 24, 2013, 07:43:18 PM »
I may not have commented on this yet, but I love this story! Your characters are gorgeous, your writing is amazing, and your back-stories are magnificent! I just want to say, great story! ;D
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Re: The Ithaca Legacy
« Reply #97 on: September 25, 2013, 02:17:02 AM »
Aww. I'm a sucker for these love stories. Amazing chapter!

Thank you so much :D I'm quite fond of love stories myself (if that wasn't obvious).

I may not have commented on this yet, but I love this story! Your characters are gorgeous, your writing is amazing, and your back-stories are magnificent! I just want to say, great story! ;D

Oh, thank you so much ^_^ Glad to know that there are more people enjoying it!



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« Reply #98 on: September 25, 2013, 04:27:41 AM »
3.3. The Wedding Guest
(Kleio)

The new house still felt big and foreign and Starlight Shores felt big and foreign. I’d never left Monte Vista in my life and my mother had only ever left to go on one vacation. It was all strange and uncomfortable and if not for Donte taking my hands and smiling at me, I would have run screaming over the hills.

Because the idea of getting married was big and foreign, too.



“Are you sure you want to do this?” he asked. “You can still get out if you want.”

“Of course I’m sure.” That much was true. I was sure I wanted to do this, even if part of me was shaking and my legs wanted to run away.

“Then we’re doing it,” he said with a smile.

We could hear the doorbell ringing and I heard familiar voices. I ran out and flung myself at Penny.



“Heeey, there she is.” She hugged me hard. “Oh, you look gorgeous, Kleio. Look at you.”

She stood back to look at my dress. Hebe was there, too. We had invited the two of them and the rest of my siblings, but both Hector and Thalia were too busy to go all the way from Monte Vista to Starlight Shores.

“Ready to tie yourself down to one guy for the rest of your life,” Penelope said. “Big step.”

“Says the woman who married our plumber privately and on a whim.”

“Hey, it wasn’t a whim,” Penelope said. “Hebe is my one true love forever and ever.”

“Oh, shut it,” Hebe said. But as she passed her wife, she kissed her on the cheek.



The time to get married came. We married indoors. Dad cleared away the dining table and made room for an arch, and it all passed in a blur. So fast. Before I knew it, the ring was on my fingers and we were married.

It wasn’t like us to have a wild, crazy party. Like I said to Penny – I’d had my share of wild, crazy parties in my university days. Our mother looked at us funny and shook her head, probably thinking it was a joke. All I could do was share a look with Donte and Penny and shrug. I really had partied at university. But never voluntarily.

Even if it was our wedding, it was fairly uneventful. We cut the cake, ate food from the buffet and talked, and it would have been fairly uneventful if it hadn’t been for what happened just after sunset. I was talking to Penelope and Donte, when he suddenly started and stared at the door fixedly, like he had seen a ghost out there.

He excused himself and left. Penny shot me a look, and I hurried after him.



I arrived just in time to hear him say: “Go away.”

“My, my, what a way to greet your own dear cousin.”



“And we haven’t seen each other for so long, Donny. You’re being terribly rude.”

The woman who stood at our front door was unpleasantly beautiful and she had a smirk on her face, a smirk that grew into a smile as she saw me.

“Ah, your lovely bride. Kleio Ithaca, I presume.”



“I told you to go away, Minerva.”

“Donte?”

“Kleio, you should probably go inside. Remember I told you about my crazy family?” I nodded. “Well, she’s one of them.”

“Rude! Donny! And to think, my own favourite cousin.” Minerva began pacing, her eyes fixed on me. “Hm, yeah, she’s pretty, and she has quite the magic potential, too – I can feel it. Nice catch, Donny. The rest of us have been searching high and low for a real Ithaca and you just stumbled on one. Nice going.”

“Go. Away.”



“Why do I get the feeling that you’re not happy to see me?” She chuckled. “But I have to say – bravo. Well done. Can’t wait to see the children.”

“There won’t be any,” I said, probably sounding braver than I felt.

“Oh – none? I say, Donte, you trained her well.”

For a second I was sure Donte was going to curse her but he didn’t get his wand out, he just looked like he could have cursed her using his eyes. “Don’t talk like that about her. And go away. Now.”

Minerva laughed. “You’re like a broken record; and on your own wedding day, too. Oh well, I know when I’ve overstayed my welcome. I’ll be back later.”

We watched her stroll down the road, calmly and confidently and then I turned to Donte. “Do we have to move again?”

He shook his head. “No, it should be okay. If she does anything, I’ll call my grandmother and she can talk to my uncle. So long as she doesn’t know where the rest of your family is, it’s okay. Don’t worry.”

Easy for him to say. And easier said than done, apparently. Already the day after the wedding, he asked me to come with him to the alchemy store, where we looked through all the ingredients, apparently looking for something specific. “I have a potion recipe you need to figure out,” he said. “I don’t think we’ll need it of course but…”

He handed me a list of ingredients and a recipe and I took a look at it. “Wow, Donte, what is this? It’s pretty complicated. Are you even sure I can make this?”



“Of course you can,” he laughed and he tickled me. “You can do anything.”

“Hey, Donte!”

“You can do anything and as long as I’m with you, I can do anything, too.”

Or I couldn’t exactly do it without the ingredients. They were pretty rare. “We’ll just have to check regularly, and I’ll see what I can conjure up.” I had a feeling he meant the ‘conjure’ literally. “It’s no rush. I’m sure we won’t have much trouble from Minerva.”



I wish I felt the same way, and I told him that when we got home. “Didn’t I tell you we can do anything?”

And for a second, it felt that way. For a couple of weeks, anyway. A couple of weeks that were completely free of worries until I started noticing something. I felt weird – not bad, but just strange.

And it struck me. Complete and utter panic.



I tried to keep myself together until I could confirm it, but then I did. I’d been right. It almost felt like a full moon - my head was light and I almost blacked out. I huddled up on the floor and tried not to cry.

That’s how my mother found me. She’d been in the basement, working on something when she found me.

“Kleio? What are you…?”



“Mum!” I clung to her like I hadn’t since my teens and I heard the worry in her voice as she stroked my hair.

“Sweetie, what is it?”

I couldn’t tell her. I kept crying and all I managed to say was: “We made a mistake… we made a mistake…”


[Author's note: It should be fairly obvious what's "wrong" I think :P Me and my clumsy writing!]



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« Reply #99 on: September 25, 2013, 02:53:45 PM »
Oh boy... This was a nice chapter to come home to. Kleio is such a beautiful bride!

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« Reply #100 on: September 25, 2013, 05:39:45 PM »
Oooo!  Minerva is gorgeous... and such a bad egg, it's not even funny XD  And I wouldn't call that clumsy at all.  Wonderful chapter!  The wedding was gorgeous and I can definitely guess what's 'wrong'.

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« Reply #101 on: September 25, 2013, 06:58:49 PM »
Clumsy writing? Not at all! It wasn't the most cheerful chapter, but it was very interesting and brilliantly written!
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« Reply #102 on: September 26, 2013, 12:47:49 AM »
I love Minerva. She's got exactly the right look for s shady character. Beautiful, and girl you know I love that CC hair. I havve it on the back burner for a more wild child. Looks like you found yours first!

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« Reply #103 on: September 26, 2013, 06:57:25 AM »
Oh boy... This was a nice chapter to come home to. Kleio is such a beautiful bride!

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Oooo!  Minerva is gorgeous... and such a bad egg, it's not even funny XD  And I wouldn't call that clumsy at all.  Wonderful chapter!  The wedding was gorgeous and I can definitely guess what's 'wrong'.

Thank you very much :) Heh, I'm just overly critical of my own writing as usual (I didn't just say it to get attention, though - I'm not that happy with this chapter but... well, I'm apparently the only one who thinks it's clumsy :P)
Heh, in legacies, it's just about the only thing that's 'wrong' isn't it? :P

Clumsy writing? Not at all! It wasn't the most cheerful chapter, but it was very interesting and brilliantly written!

Thank you very much :D Not very cheerful at all - and considering it's a wedding, one can only conclude that I'm not very nice to my characters at all xD

I love Minerva. She's got exactly the right look for s shady character. Beautiful, and girl you know I love that CC hair. I havve it on the back burner for a more wild child. Looks like you found yours first!

I had a feeling people would like Minerva - it seems that simmers, not just on this forum, like their evil/shady sims in general :P
I love it when I see you (and others) use some of the same CC I do, I'm all like: 'Oh, that's "Kleio's" hair' or 'That's "Passie's" hair' xD



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« Reply #104 on: September 26, 2013, 07:39:37 AM »
3.4. The Problem
(Donte)



I don’t know what shocked me more: the fact that Pasiphaë started snarling at me again (she had at least cut down on the snarling since the wedding), that she snarled ‘Someone’s here to see you’ or the fact that the someone was Penelope.



“Sorry to barge in, and I have to leave soon. I’m off to work and I have to get back to Monte Vista for that.” She asked me to sit. “I just came because… I want to know what you’ve done to my sister.”

I shrunk under her gaze. “Done? What…?”

“Haven’t you noticed how she’s acting?”

I shrunk further. I had, but I’d tried to chalk it down to worry about the whole Minerva thing. I realised now that it was naïve of me. Kleio wasn’t happy lately. She’d tried to hide it behind her work, saying that she was just busy, but it wasn’t like I hadn’t noticed. Sometimes it felt like she was just on the brink of breaking down crying and then it felt like she wanted to say something but didn’t.

“So you have noticed,” Penelope said. “Look, the thing with Kleio is: she doesn’t do talking about feelings. She keeps it in until she bursts – she’s like Mum in that respect. Except with me. She always tells me, you understand? But I called her to try and talk to her about what’s wrong, because Mum told me, and you know what? She wouldn’t tell. Not a word. If she won’t tell me, Donte, how bad is it?”

“I don’t know. I really don’t. She just says she’s… busy. Stressed.”

“That’s not good enough.” She shook her head. “Look, I believe you’re a good guy, but you’re a bit stupid right now. You need to talk to her, you hear me?”

I almost saluted her, such was the strength in her voice. “Yes. I understand.”



So that’s what I did. The same evening. I told her everything about Penelope’s visit, and I saw something stirring. Like she’d been holding up a façade for so long and now it was slowly on its way to crumbling.

“What is it?” I asked. “Whatever it is, you can tell me. Please, Kleio.”

“I can’t… I can’t say. I don’t know what to do.” She didn’t cry, but she was so close. I could see how close she was to falling apart.

“You can say. It’s me. You can tell me everything. No matter what. Please, love.”

She didn’t look at me, and her voice shook as she spoke again. “Even if… even if I’m pregnant?” The room was suddenly spinning. I had to grab her shoulders harder and she finally met my eyes. “I’m sorry.”

“You mean…?”

She nodded. I looked at her, looking for a word to describe this feeling. Fear. Red hot and intense, but overshadowed by… joy. This was horrible. This was a disaster and everything my grandmother had ever feared and… it was wonderful.



“Donte? S-say something.”

“It’s… it’s wonderful. I…”

“It was a mistake.”

“No, no, no, no, please, don’t say that.” I pulled her close. “It’s not a mistake. It’s never a mistake – remember: we can do anything. Anything.”

“But… Medea…”

“Oh, hang Medea. We’re going to have a child. I don’t care about anything else, and neither should you. Oh, we have to decorate a nursery, and you shouldn’t work while you’re pregnant, and certainly not with elixirs. It could go completely wrong, and…”

“Donte!” I saw the first ghost of a smile on her lips. “Do you really think we can handle it? Without creating a monster?”

“Of course we can. Of course!” I gave her a kiss, and pushed away the fear. For now, it didn’t matter… I told her we wouldn’t worry. All we would do would be to make her pregnancy the easiest, most comfortable pregnancy. The best time of her life…

And it was. With her parents involved, the next couple of months were happy, almost normal. I almost got the feeling that I was the only one who was ever worried.



The months passed until one night, I woke up on the bathroom floor, bathed in the eerie, greenish light of the full moon. I groaned – I thought I was over this. It had been years since I’d had a black-out, and even Kleio didn’t feel the effects of the moon that severely these days.

I got up and went to check on her. Even when I wasn’t weird and woke up in the bathroom, I had a habit of seeing to it that she was okay.



And she was. She was sleeping soundly. In her athletic wear, sure, but she was sleeping. I chuckled at the thought that she had actually done better than me this time around. I was turning around to go to my own bed, when she suddenly sat up and stared at me.

“Kleio?”

“It’s now.”

“… what?”

“The baby. It’s coming. Right now.”



So I jumped around for five minutes screaming, before Kleio calmly told me to take her to the hospital. And then, at the hospital, with the full moon still in the sky, our sons were born.



Orestes.



And Orpheus.



Orestes was showing signs of clumsiness and seemed neurotic.



While Orpheus was already turning out quite the artist and a brave little guy.

And, for now at least, they looked to be normal, healthy boys.



[Author’s note: Now, I’m not much for the baby phase (hence mostly skipping it in the story) but how adorable are the animations for babies in the swing:



I was almost disappointed in the toddler animations because they aren’t nearly as adorable. What’s up with that?

Anyway – names!

Orestes: The name of the son of Agamemnon and Klytaimnestra. After Klytaimnestra and her lover Aigisthos killed Agamemnon, Orestes, then only a baby, was sent away to safety – he later returned to avenge his father’s death by killing his mother and Aigisthos.

Orpheus: A legendary musician and poet, he was said to be able to charm even stones with his music. When he lost his wife, Eurydice, he went to the Underworld to get her back and he was allowed to take her back under the condition that he would not look at her until he was out of there again. Of course he did it anyway and she was returned to the Underworld. Nice going there, dude.]



 

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