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« Reply #375 on: May 09, 2015, 07:46:46 PM »
Chapter 84: Things Don't Go So Well


Zahra: I've got some pretty big news Julius, I'm not sure that you're going to be too pleased...
Julius: You can tell me anything hun.





Zahra: We're going to have a baby!
Julius: Oh plumbob...what have I done?
Zahra: <gasp>!
Julius: Oh Zahra, your new job! You are just beginning your life and I've gone and ruined everything. I'm so sorry....





Julius: I promise to stand by you... I'll do everything I can for you and our nooboo....It will be ok.
Zahra: <confused> Sure.





Julius: I want you to marry me. Marry me Zahra so we can make everything right.





Zahra: I don't plumbob think so.... How could you!








Zahra: I don't need your fixes. I don't need your sympathy.... I don't even need YOU.





Julius: Oh Zahra. I'm so sorry...
Zahra: Yeah, <bitterly> So you keep saying.





Julius: I am... Zahra, can't you see that I want to do the right thing with you?
Zahra: Look Julius, I just thought you should know. I've got some things I need to do. I'll see you later.





Mal: We need to talk.
Julius: Yes, I know.





Mal: Of all the sneaky, double handed, despicable, underhanded .....





Mal: You're plumbob lucky I don't knock your head off.





Mal: ...and I'm telling you now, if I could throw your dishonourable backside out on the street, I'd be doing it so fast your feet wouldn't be touching the ground.
Julius: Mal, wait, it's not like that...





Mal: Don't you even start making excuses... I don't want to hear any of your lies or excuses or ANYTHING.





Zahra: Hey, grandpa?
Dude: Yeah hun?
Zahra: I've got some big news to share with you.... I'm having a nooboo.





Dude: Oh that's great! Congratulations hun! Who's the lucky guy?





Zahra: Julius.
Dude: Julius?





Dude: Oh my plumbob! Zahra, what were you thinking?





Dude: Zahra! He's fathered more nooboo's than grains of sand on the beach.... OMG!
Zahra: Only 'cos that's what everyone has made him do... he's not like that...
Dude: Don't be so naïve.





Dude: Zahra Hollingsworth, as part of this dynasty I expected an awful lot more from you.








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« Reply #376 on: May 09, 2015, 07:56:17 PM »
Awww, poor Zahra!  Poor Julius!  --sniffles--



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« Reply #377 on: May 09, 2015, 08:05:56 PM »
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« Reply #378 on: May 09, 2015, 10:09:45 PM »
9 exams done 4 to go. Finally all caught up (^_^) and this story is absolutely incredible. Per the norm of course  ;)
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« Reply #379 on: May 09, 2015, 10:38:09 PM »
I don't know who I feel more sorry for.. Julius or Zahra! I would imagine that in RL - exactly the same reaction would have come about!

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« Reply #380 on: May 10, 2015, 12:47:08 AM »
Awww, the Hollingsworth men are so anti-Julius, poor guy!
Zahra doesn't like his proposal but still sticks up for him with Winston....hmmmm

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« Reply #381 on: May 10, 2015, 02:41:17 AM »
Thanks everyone. Glad your exams are heading for the home straight Wolffie!  :)
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« Reply #382 on: May 10, 2015, 03:17:57 AM »
Chapter 85: Turmoil



Dude: I feel like my blood's boiling...
Why? What on earth's going on?
Dude: <Angry snort> The drama of the century.... Zahra's having a baby...
But that's good, isn't it?
Dude: With Julius!
Julius??





Dude: After everything we've given you and after opening our house to you....
Woah! Steady on Dude!
Dude: Keep out of this watcher!





Dude: You go and treat our Zahra like a... like a....
Julius: No! It's not like that...





Dude: I can't believe you have the nerve to even show your face here.





Right! Enough! This stops NOW! Good plumbob! I can't even leave you all alone for a day and you're all fighting!
Julius, what on earth has happened?

Mal: He's got Zahra pregnant.
Julius: NO, well yes, but I keep trying to tell you, it's not like that. I'm not like that... I love her. And I'm starting to really resent you both tearing strips off me and not even giving me the benefit of the doubt.
I agree. It's been plainly obvious that the two of them have been in love for ages.





Dude: Well, if that's the case why haven't you done the right thing and one, talked to us about this and two married her?
Julius: I wanted to but Zahra wanted to wait so I agreed to letting her do this in her time and I want to marry her.... I've asked her.
Good for you!





Julius: But she wouldn't have me <rueful smile> I asked her desperately to marry me. I want to spend every last breathing moment with her....
Oh Julius! Why did she say no? I can't believe it. I know she loves you.
Mal: I think I owe you an apology Julius.
Julius: It's ok. I understand, I do. I probably would have reacted the same way... I knew that not telling everyone about us was a mistake but I didn't have the heart to go against Zahra's wish.





Zahra: Mum?
Mac: Yes dear?
Zahra: I've made a terrible mistake and both dad and grandpa are furious with me... and disappointed...
Mac: Oh darling, they'll calm down. They just both want to protect you from life's hurts and trials.




Zahra: And there's more.... Julius asked me to marry him... <sobs>
Mac: Oh! But that's good... isn't it? I thought you loved him?
Zahra: I <sob> doooo.





Mac: Then why the tears love? This is wonderful news.
Zahra: No it's not <sob>. I said no...
Mac: Good heaven's! I think you've got a bad case of pregnancy hormones love. What made you say no?
Zahra: <sniff> He said <sob> sorry.
Mac: Oh...I see.





Mac: Come here love. You know that when Julius said sorry that was his way of saying 'I love you and I want to take care of you', right?
Zahra: I just needed to hear him tell me he loved me... not that he'd ruined my life.
Mac: Oh the silly man. And silly you. I think the two of you need everyone else to butt out and to talk things through together.
You know Mac, I couldn't have said that better myself.





Mal: Oh darling! I'm so excited for your nooboo, and so excited for you! I love you hun and I'm sorry I haven't really been there for you. I guess I got a little side-tracked. This time should be really special, not full of your dad being all mad and out of sorts. I'm sorry Zahra.
Zahra: That's ok dad. I should have told you ages ago how I felt. I now realize that keeping secrets really doesn't help anyone.





Mal: You know Zahra, I have made a serious error in judgement about Julius and I'm sorry for that but I know the two of you will come through this with flying colours.
Zahra: Thanks dad.





Well... what's the long face for?
Dude: I guess I stuffed up big time... I can't figure out where I went wrong really... Just know that it all turned to custard pretty quickly.




Hmm, well I wouldn't beat yourself up too badly, after all I can see why you thought Julius was just, er... umm, playing around with Zahra. But maybe you should have asked him about his intentions before blasting him with both barrels eh?
Dude: *Huge sigh* You're right there watcher... I really should have. Poor guy. I still wish Zahra had chosen someone else, he's nearly as old as Malakai and it's going to be heart breaking for her when Grim comes knocking...
Least she will have spent time with her true love... better than never having had a chance to love at all. You can't protect everyone from the heart ache of life and death. It's just the way the world works Winston.
Dude: I know, doesn't stop me from trying though.


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« Reply #383 on: May 10, 2015, 03:52:13 AM »
I'm glad no one is angry anymore. It was very emotional to watch them all fighting. I really hope Julius and Zahra can work it out and spend whatever time they have left together and not arguing  :)

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« Reply #384 on: May 10, 2015, 03:58:53 AM »
@Cristina , I agree! It was quite emotional writing it all too! I'm sure with a little watcher intervention and a little more of Mac's sensible and down-to-earth approach the Hollingsworth's will get it sorted!  :)
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Re: Another Hollingsworth Dynasty Story
« Reply #385 on: May 10, 2015, 04:22:39 AM »
Chapter 86: A Proposal



Mal: I'm sorry I went off at the deep end love.
Mac: I was a little surprised at you I must admit. You're normally so calm.





Mac: Julius is a really lovely guy, surely you can see how right he is for Zahra?
Mal: I can, I guess I was holding his, err... previous girlfriends against him.
Mac: I can understand that love, but they have the right to choose for themselves you know. Zahra's not a little girl anymore!
Mal: Aw, I know...





Mac: Anyway, that was a lovely apology.
Mal: Thanks, I hope it's done the trick.
Mac: It has. I love you.
Mal: I don't know what I'd do without you!





Zahra: Oh such a sore back watcher!
Sounds like you need Julius to rub it...
Zahra: Oh, it's a little awkward between us at the moment.
Rubbish.





Julius: I'm not going to always say things the right way Zahra but I love you from the bottom of my heart.





Zahra: That was pretty good from where I'm sitting.
Julius: Was it?
Zahra: Oh yes!





Zahra: I love you too Julius, can you forgive...
Julius: <interrupting>...There's nothing to forgive. Only two people who love each other, right?
Zahra: Right.





Julius: You know what? I don't want to spend one more minute apart from you.









Julius: Zahra Hollingsworth...





Julius: ...will you do me the biggest favour in the world and ease my breaking heart by becoming my wife?
Zahra: Oh ... yes!





Zahra: Yes, Julius I will, I will! I love you.





Zahra: I'm glad you found the ring... after I threw it away...
Julius: Darling, if I hadn't I'd have bought 100 more, and not stopped buying them until you said yes!





Zahra: <Whispering> I love you.
Julius: <Whispering back> I love you more.





Julius: And you know what? You've made me the happiest man on the planet!





Zahra: If I were any more happier I think I'd explode.
Julius: Oh! lol, don't say that... you actually might!
<Both laugh>





Zahra: Come on, let's go tell everyone.





Dude: My sincere congratulations Julius. I know you'll make a great husband.
Blaize: Wow dad, that's high praise coming from you!
Dude: Let's just say that Julius and I have got to know each other better.
Julius: Thanks Winston. I appreciate it.





Mal: Darling, I'm truly delighted.
Zahra: Thanks dad. I knew you would be.





Mac: How exciting hun!
Jasmine: I agree! Oh I love planning weddings!
Zahra: Lol, just as well as I don't have any time off work until after the wedding, I'm going to need all the help you can give me Auntie Jasmine!





Dude: Come here Julius. I'm proud of you. You stuck to your guns even when the going got tough. I'm pleased to call you a friend.





Julius: Thanks, that means a lot.



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« Reply #386 on: May 10, 2015, 05:34:10 AM »
So much has happened since yesterday! Wow, did not expect all the tension and as usual you played it out and smoothed things over in a wonderful way. Lovely.
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« Reply #387 on: May 10, 2015, 10:04:35 AM »
What a great way the family all came together and not only realised that they were in love, but walked away from the drama! Great read  ;D

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« Reply #388 on: May 10, 2015, 02:52:42 PM »
Thanks Nettlejuice and KTK10  :)
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« Reply #389 on: May 10, 2015, 03:18:25 PM »
Chapter 87: A New Family Member



Mal: I think we're the two luckiest guys out. It's something special to be married into this family.
Julius: I agree Malakai.





Julius: For my love.
Zahra: Do you know that you have given me a rose everyday since we first kissed.
Julius: I do.





Julius: Hi little baby, I hope you're minding your manners and not kicking your mummy.
Zahra: lol





Julius: Oh he did kick! Amazing!





Julius: I love you so much Zahra.









Mal: So now that you've maxed out your fitness you need to keep at it each day, just a steady workout should keep your fitness at it's peak.
Julius: Nice, I can do that.





Zahra: Ohhh... incoming!
Julius: Oh my gosh! Is everything ready.... what do we do?





Julius: I need to get the cot.
Already done that!





Julius: We're all set to go then.
Um, yeah, just need the mother, ya know!





Zahra: <Breathing calmly...>
Julius: You're amazing love! You're doing brilliantly.
I agree!
Zahra: Well, no need to panic about something that women do everyday.






Zahra: Oh welcome little Caleb!
Awwww





Julius: He's just perfect Zah, you're perfect!





Thought you might like to know you are grandparents. *Grin*
Mal: Oh my!
Mac: That's wonderful!





Julius: Hi my wee boy..





Julius: You are so amazing!





Dude: Congratulations Zahra! Well done!
Zahra: Thanks Grandpa! Or should that be great grandpa now!





Mac: Oh my! You are a little honey aren't you Caleb.
Mal: Congratulations luv! A little boy!
Zahra: Thanks dad.





Dude: Gosh! here we all are, four generations in one room! How special is that?





Dude: Congrats Julius!
Mal: Are you going to work today? Really?
Zahra: Yeah, I have to, there isn't anyone available to cover my shift!
Mal: Oh hun! You're amazing! Just don't over do it!





Mal: Well, my grandson... who'd have thought. my goodness isn't he just so perfect?
He is indeed.





Mal: You know this means you won't sleep now for the next few years or so, lol.
Julius: Lol, thanks for the encouragement!





Dude: Aww, Caleb's nearly asleep.




Well, I guess all's well in the Hollingworth's house then eh?
Dude: It is watcher, it is. Isn't it wee man...what a lot you have to do with your life. Good thing is, you won't have to do it alone.


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« Reply #390 on: May 10, 2015, 03:37:16 PM »
Chapter 88: Baby Time


Mac: Oh this is impossible.
Mal: Just got to push through those last two reps, the rest is easy.





Mac: Easy? You call this easy? Arghhh, give me running any day.





Julius: Is Caleb asleep?
Zahra: Hm hmm.





Julius: You look more beautiful each time I see you.





Zahra: I can't wait to be married!
Julius: Not long now. Have a great day at work hun.





Oh! I thought Caleb was asleep!
Jasmine: I just thought I'd top him up so that he slept longer.
Either that or poop his pants quicker!
Jasmine: lol watcher!





Oh, you're wide awake now aren't you Caleb! lol You are so cute!





Wow! You're looking mega pumped!
Julius: That scientific shower sure does get you energized!





Mal: Need any pointers?
Julius: No, I'm good thanks.





Mac: I could look at him all day. Something quite special about your grandchild.
I know. Besides that, he actually is pretty cute.
Mac: I'm glad Malakai was able to meet his grand son.
Oh I'm sure he'll live for ages yet Mac.
Mac: Malakia had his last warning a while ago now. Every day is borrowed time.
Oh Mac, I'm not ready for Mal to go.
Mac: Me neither watcher, me neither.





Mal: There you are!
Mac: I was cuddling our grandson.
Mal: I wonder what he'll do with his life?
Mac: Whatever it is you can be sure he'll succeed, after all he'll have a houseful of 'encouragers'! lol
Malakai: True!





Malakai: I love you Mackenzie.
Mackenzie: I love you more.
Mal: Impossible.





Mac: Coming for a swim?
Mal: You bet!





Woo! A promotion! Way to go Zahra!
Zahra: Thanks watcher.





Blaize: He's smiling at me!





Blaize: Isn't it funny how babies make you want to smile and coo silly stuff... don't you wee man?
I know...It's so funny but you just can't help yourself!





Blaize: Woah! Hungry little man? I guess you're going to need lots of food to grow up big and strong! He is so cute! lol

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« Reply #391 on: May 10, 2015, 03:43:20 PM »
I love this family sooo much!  They are all so sweet and awesome!  Even the tension from earlier was due to the fact that they all care immensely about each other.  --sighs-- Grim, you just stay away a good long time now!

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« Reply #392 on: May 10, 2015, 03:49:11 PM »
What a nice family! Everyone getting to know the new addition to the household.  :)  It is just update after update. Good job, Playalot, I am loving the family (and story).
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« Reply #393 on: May 10, 2015, 04:00:03 PM »
I know they all look the same but Caleb is so precious. Congratulations to Zahra on her promotion, no doubt she'll also have her adult life free to do as she pleases =D
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« Reply #394 on: May 10, 2015, 04:01:46 PM »
Chapter 89: Jasmine's Elder Birthday


What are you doing?
Julius: Just drawing a few more mathematical diagrams for Zah so she can put them around the hospital. Helps her to stay focused.
Cool. That's a nice thing to do.
Julius: There isn't anything I wouldn't do for Zah.





Julius: Morning wee man, ready for your bottle?





Julius: Whoop! Maybe a quick diaper change first eh? Mr poopy pants.





Who's the cake for?
Dude: Jasmine. *sigh*
Oh. I see.





Jasmine: A beautiful cake dad, thanks.
Dude: You're welcome.
Jasmine: Hmm, what to wish for...








Dude: Happy birthday my darling.
Jasmine: Thanks dad.





Blaize: Happy birthday sis, welcome to the world of creaking bones and bladder failure!
Jasmine: Oh yuk! lol, Thanks Blaize!





Mac: Happy birthday sis, I love you.
Jasmine: Thanks Mac, I love you too.





You still up here?
Julius: Yeah, I should drag myself away, but I don't really want to.
You're fine. Everyone's just chatting and stuff.





Oh I think Caleb's turning into a daddy's boy!
Julius: I think you mean a man's man.... daddy's boy sounds... well strange.
Well, either way Caleb sure loves you.





Dude: Argh, another bad draw. Think my luck's deserted me.
Mal: Either that or I didn't shuffle the deck well.
Dude: Or maybe you shuffled the deck too well....
Mal: Lol





Mal: Hmm... yeah, I don't think I shuffled the deck very well at all....
Dude: Restart?
Mal: Might as well, I got nothing.





Julius: Hmm, you guys been fixing the deck?
Mal: lol, no.





Dude: Hmm...I'll take a pass.
Julius: I think you can't, you took a pass last time round.
Dude: Oh rats!





Zahra: Well, you be a good boy for everyone and mummy will see you when she gets home.
Have a good shift at the hospital Zahra.
Zahra: Thanks watcher. ummm... do you want to come too?
Sure!





Zahra: Hmm, your temperature is 101. I think we can say you have a fever Mr Smith.





Zhara: Ah ha! I see....





Zahra: Just stand in the middle, it doesn't hurt. In fact you won't really feel anything. All you'll see is a bright light.





Mr Smith: Oh I'm so hot!
Zahra: We'll have you feeling better very soon.





Zahra: There we go, holding still there. Thank you. All done!





Zahra: Well Mr Smith I think we can reliably say you have a contracted LLama Flu.
Mr Smith: That would certainly explain why I feel so terrible.





Zahra: There we go, all done.
Mr Smith: I feel wonderful! Thank you so much!
Zahra: You are most welcome. Stay well Mr Smith!



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Re: Another Hollingsworth Dynasty Story
« Reply #395 on: May 10, 2015, 04:07:16 PM »
Daddy's boy definitely is not what we want to call Caleb, lol. Great to see Zahra back at work (actively this time). Happy birthday, Jas, it feels too soon  :-\
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« Reply #396 on: May 10, 2015, 04:12:40 PM »
@Nettlejuice  @SLF @Shewolf13 , thanks for your comments! The doctor career is proving very, very tricky. Zahra actually lost over half her progress bar during that work shift as she *cough*  the watcher misdiagnosed a patient. We had completed all the possible tests and still had three illnesses to choose from...and despite staying late and correctly diagnosing two more patients we only clawed back one segment.
I was quite stunned how much progress we lost, the bar went right down into the red! Eeek! Not good! Luckily Zahra could phone to negotiate a bonus so we ended up back at the half way point...but that was where she had actually started the day! I think Zahra will manage to max out the career due to her still only being a young adult but I don't think we'll get it done much before she turns an elder. Time will tell I guess.

I've got a few more chapters to post then I'll be caught up to where I am in-game!  :)
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« Reply #397 on: May 10, 2015, 04:42:51 PM »
Chapter 90: The Wedding Part One


Sorry to wake you, but I need someone to get Caleb...
Mal: I'll go....*yawn*
Mac: Thanks hun, I'll get up in a min.





Hope you don't mind, it's just that Zahra's only just got home from the hospital...
Mal: I don't mind in the least! It's lovely having Caleb all to myself.
Cool
Mal: Well, the big day eh watcher!
Indeed. I love weddings.
Mal: So do I. How 'bout you Caleb? I bet you love 'em too... *Happy sigh* I love my wee grand son...





Mal:...and then he just went back off to sleep in my arms...
Julius: Ah! You must have the  golden touch then! Lol
Mal: He's a sweet wee fellow... Now have you got everything organised for today?
Julius: Yep, think so. Just need the cake.
Mal: Right, I'll bake that!
Julius! Awesome! That's everything then.





Gosh! Be careful, last thing we need is the groom getting fried!
Julius: lol, I got it.





Dude: Good to see you Katelyn. Got your dress all organised for the wedding?
Katelyn: Yep. I went shopping yesterday in Magnolia Promenade. It's lovely down there.
How many drinks are you making Mal?
Mal: Just a couple more, don't want to be caught short during the party.





Zahra: O.K. here we go, calling it up!
Jasmine: Ohhh so exciting!





Julius: Oh my plumbob! You look stunning! Are you ready?
Zahra: I am so ready!





Julius: I knew you were special from the minute I saw you caring for others, for your friends and your family. I never dreamed though that one day you would be my wife but Zahra, I want to spend the rest of my life and every minute in between, with you by my side.





Zahra: I always knew that I wanted to marry you, even when I was just a little girl, I knew that marrying you would be all my dreams coming true.





Dude: Aww cripes, they'll have me crying in a minute.
<sniff> Me too...





Julius: I think this is where we exchange rings. By the way... I love you.





Oh! Why is no one sitting down?
Dude: I don't know, it doesn't matter.... the ceremony is so beautiful.
Mal: Oh Mac, our little girl is now married! I'm so happy!
Mac: So am I...how beautiful they both are!





Congratulations Mr and Mrs Julius and Zahra Hollingsworth!





Julius: Oh I love you.
Zahra: I love you too husband!





Everybody cheered and celebrated as the bride cut the cake.





And as the bride and groom began to share the first slice.... Malakai's long life began to come to an end.





Julius: What on earth is HE doing here?
Don't let Zahra see....oh no....Julius, quick, take Zahra inside before she see's....





Julius: Huney, let's go in and have our first dance....





Blaize: Oh Mac....it's so terrible....
Grim: Well, you Hollingsworths are sure making a big fuss about this...





Clinton: Oh Malakai! You will be missed by us all...
<sob> Thank you for everything you did Malakai... you have no idea how much I will miss you.





Grim: So is everyone finished crying...?
Shut up Grim. You've picked the worst possible time on purpose and you're not welcome here.
Grim: Too bad watcher, I've got a job to do.





Mac: Oh my husband, oh Malakai....how will I live without you?









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Re: Another Hollingsworth Dynasty Story
« Reply #398 on: May 10, 2015, 05:05:57 PM »
Chapter 91: The Wedding Part Two, And A Birthday



Oh Mac, come inside.
Mac: I'm not leaving my husband out here all alone.
Grim: Good grief, what's all the fuss about.
Go away Grim...Your jobs done so just leave.
Grim: I know when I'm not wanted.
No you don't , unfortunately.





Zahra better not see you Grim...
Grim: Keep your hair on watcher.
Aden: How rude...
Katelyn: I think we should be able to make a formal complaint to someone about this.





Grim: Well, you sure know how to throw a killer party watcher! Hahahaha!





Jaron: You sure look beautiful Zahra. Congratulations!
Zahra: Thank you! Are you enjoying yourself?
Jaron: Of course...it's... a lovely wedding...





Mac, please, come inside....<sob> You can't sit out here all night.
Mac: I'm not leaving Mal. I'm not.





Aden: Who's going to tell Zahra?
Aline: Julius will....let her enjoy as much of her wedding as she can...Good grief, it's just so awful.
Clinton: It's terrible. I still can't believe it.





Julius: Dry your tears my love. Your dad always said that he wanted everyone to remember the good times.
Zahra: I can't ... I can't stop crying. It feels like I never will.





Julius: There, let me see. Malakia was so proud of you and he got his hearts desire which was to see you married....
Zahra: <Sob> I know... I just miss him so much.




Zahra: Kiss me.
Julius: I love you.





Katelyn: Mac...I'm so sorry. Everyone loved Mal.
Mac: I know. Thank you. You go inside and keep Zahra company. I'll be in soon.





Oh gosh... Caleb's birthday too.
Julius: I can't wait to hug him.





Caleb: Whoop!
Happy birthday Caleb!





Julius: Happy birthday my wee man!
Caleb: Thanks dad!





Zahra: Happy birthday darling. It's so good to be able to give you a big hug!
Caleb: Lol, love you mum.





Dude: Come on love... Malakai wouldn't want you being alone.
Mac: I know....





Oh Blaize....
Blaize: I miss him so much....
I know.





Mac: I don't think I can ever be happy again watcher.
You just take all the time you need. You're not alone you know. Even though it feels like that for you... you're not alone.





Dude: Good girl... keep your chin up for Caleb's sake. And for your mum, she's going to need us to be strong for her.
Zahra: Oh grandpa.





Danika: Such a sad thing for your birthday Caleb, are you ok?
Caleb: Yeah, I am. I guess it's my job to keep everyone happy...you know, remind them that life goes on no matter how sad it feels.
Danika: That's a very wise thought for such a young boy.
Caleb: Well, we Hollingsworths are a pretty smart bunch ya know!


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Re: Another Hollingsworth Dynasty Story
« Reply #399 on: May 10, 2015, 05:06:48 PM »
Oh no!!!! Grim stinks

 

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