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The Edwards Legacy| Chapter 3- Pink and Purple Teenage Years
« on: January 24, 2015, 11:00:16 PM »
Hai :) i'm not a very good writer or story teller but i'll try my best.any tips are appreciated!

Instead of posting each small part here,I decided to put it all in one place so its easier to find and this post is free to say how you feel ,suggestions on the story,baby names(please? :P).
The Edwards Legacy: The Prologue
The Edwards Legacy:Chapter 1-The Next Big Step
The Edwards Legacy: Chapter 2-Midnight Surprises
The Edwards Legacy: Chapter 3- Pink and Purple Teenage Years
R U L E S
1.Start on the largest plot of land.
2.no cheats are to be used ,only to reset a sim.
3.the children will have random traits
4.i will have a poll when all the kids in that generation are young adults.

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2015, 11:14:28 AM »
Great start so far! Camilla is very pretty. Looking forward to seeing if she ends up with Ron  :)



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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2015, 11:28:51 AM »
Welcome to the forum =]

Camilla is so pretty and Storybrook County is one of my favourite custom worlds.
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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #3 on: January 25, 2015, 11:35:07 AM »
It looks like Ron won't be needing her stylist services!

Good start. :)
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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #4 on: January 25, 2015, 02:31:22 PM »
thank you everyone C: i'm going to try to improve as i go.i'll be posting the next part very soon today.is the pictures to big?o-o

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #5 on: January 25, 2015, 04:03:29 PM »
Great beginning!

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2015, 05:55:02 PM »
The house is cute, actually!



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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #7 on: January 25, 2015, 06:00:32 PM »
The house is really nice! Glad to see that Ron came around at the end and he and Camilla were able to patch things up  :)

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #8 on: January 26, 2015, 03:02:21 AM »
I have made a blog to post with,and will be updating the first post in this thread as I make another chapter.also i needs baby names @[email protected] i have no clue what to name the baby.for those of you who dont know what i'm talking about and may have read about the house the last time,the prologue has something extra at the end for you.hope you all enjoy!

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #9 on: January 26, 2015, 04:19:58 AM »
I like the format better in your blog. I'm really excited about what Camilla and Ron will get up to. The makeovers are so well done and the house loves lovely.
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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #10 on: January 26, 2015, 04:40:58 AM »
I like the format better in your blog. I'm really excited about what Camilla and Ron will get up to. The makeovers are so well done and the house loves lovely.
Thank you :) I'm going to try to take more time on writing when I start composing the post.i am still shocked Ron disappeared into thin air when Camilla said goodnight to him o-o maybe he is a ninja .have to watch out for this one .this is the first family I am writing a story to go with the pictures.
I was thinking of adding more characters to the characters such as more thoughts and feelings to them.hope Ron doesn't poof into space o-o do not want that to happen to any male sim ever again

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Re: The Edwards Legacy
« Reply #11 on: January 26, 2015, 11:37:21 AM »
I have made a blog to post with,and will be updating the first post in this thread as I make another chapter.also i needs baby names @[email protected] i have no clue what to name the baby.for those of you who dont know what i'm talking about and may have read about the house the last time,the prologue has something extra at the end for you.hope you all enjoy!

I totally understand with names. When it comes time to name the heir, I stare at the screen for a few minutes, trying to decide what name I might want  ;). One of the things I like to do would be name themes (colors, nature, celestial terms, places...) and name my heirs accordingly. That helps narrow things down quite a bit. Otherwise, there are random name generators. I use those for my stories in real life when I need to name a minor character on the fly. Hope that helps  ;D

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Re: The Edwards Legacy| Chapter 1 - The Next Big Step
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Re: The Edwards Legacy| Chapter 1 - The Next Big Step
« Reply #13 on: January 29, 2015, 11:17:10 AM »
Aw, welcome Vincent. I forgot to mention what a beautiful wedding, love the outfits and the poses you used.
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Re: The Edwards Legacy| Chapter 1 - The Next Big Step
« Reply #14 on: January 29, 2015, 01:34:08 PM »
Aw, welcome Vincent. I forgot to mention what a beautiful wedding, love the outfits and the poses you used.
thank you  :D i'm hoping to start adding some more dialog to make it longer and full of life.baby vincent is so adorable *squee*^-^