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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Interlude 4 Part 2 (11/10/12)
« Reply #600 on: October 11, 2012, 10:26:39 AM »
Awesome.

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Interlude 4 Part 2 (11/10/12)
« Reply #601 on: October 11, 2012, 11:04:45 AM »
Wow! The whole idea, the conversations, your writing... It's fabulous!  :D



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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Interlude 4 Part 2 (11/10/12)
« Reply #602 on: October 11, 2012, 04:42:57 PM »
Awesome chapter! I love the afterlife plot idea, and how the previous heirs get a to still be involved in the story.
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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Interlude 4 Part 2 (11/10/12)
« Reply #603 on: October 11, 2012, 07:16:54 PM »
I'm nervous for Kris... I get the distinct feeling Lexa is masterminding the afterlife, if that statement makes sense at all. Either way, there's precious little room for a good man like Kris in an evil, Lexa-run world. I'm earnestly worried about his fate there, and the possibility of it being indefinite...
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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Chapter 116 - Birthday #117
« Reply #604 on: October 12, 2012, 03:43:46 PM »
Thanks guys. Donatello, I'm scared too.

Birthday #117



So, this is it, the YA birthday of our heir.

Daniel: My dad just died. I don't really think I'm in the mood for this.

Now you're here you might as well blow out the candles. I mean, we've lit them and all, and you'll age up anyway.

Daniel: It just doesn't feel right to be celebrating.



Daniel: Woo! Birthday!

Okay...



Caitlyn: Go on smelly!



Tober: My little boy, all grown up. My son is an adult now, I can't believe how fast time goes.

Kieran: Hey! What about your other son?

Daniel: I think I look pretty hot.





A quick trip to the mirror and dresser never did anyone any harm though.



Umm, Daniel?

Daniel: What?

Your brother's birthday now?

Daniel: Really? Really? I won't become a bestselling author without actually writing any books!

You have a moodlet manager, you can do that all night. Come on.



Yeah, because aging up in your pants is always a good idea.





At least the game have you a shirt.

Kieran: My chest has been censored by the forum for being so smokin' hot.

No it really hasn't. And also, nobody even says smokin' hot anymore.

Tober: Oh he has a ponytail. Just like my darling Kris...

Kieran: Yeah, thanks watcher, thanks Mum. Anyone else want to embarass me?

Cait: Yeah, I'll have a go.



We get him off to the mirror before anything bad can happen, like full scale sibling war.



The game suggesting Kieran might like to cover his chest seems not to be for modesty reasons. His legs are a better feature! Speedos, a sports jacket and heavy boots are in style this season in Lunar Lakes. Burgundy is the new black, and white is the new... green?



For an everyday look, the fashionable sim this season is wearing a hospital gown and flip flops. Pale blue and brown are popular colours. Snap yours up today!



Yeah, actually we went for a checked shirt and jeans.

Kieran: Good.



Daniel signs up for the film career. He's hopefully going to be a director. Kieran also signs up for the film career to hopefully become an actor, but I don't have a screenie of that.

Daniel: S'ok. He's only a spare.



Kieran: Definitely hotter than you.

Daniel: You think?

Kieran: Yep. Your cardigan looks like something some granny would wear. Not Granny Lexa, obviously, but someone else's UNFASHIONABLE granny.

Daniel: At least I didn't think speedos and hospital gowns were good looks until the watcher talked me out of it.

Kieran: There's only one way to settle this.



Kieran and Daniel: One...two...three...



Kieran: Aha! Rock crushes scissors into oblivion, and I am the hottest CrumpleSteel of them all!

Daniel: I meant best of three!

Kieran: Liar! I wiiiinnnnn, I wiiinnnnn!

Daniel: Not fair!

Tober: Why, for the love of all that is plumbob, have they not grown out of this already?!

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Sibling rivalry of the most humorous variety. :) They've turned into handsome young men!




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These two kids would have Kris proud for the fire in their spirit.
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The boys aged up to be so handsome! ;D I'm very glad you talked Kieran out of the hospital gown.
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Hospital gowns are totally high fashion. I'm ashamed he gave it up.

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Oh, Kieran just made my day! I'm having the hiccups from giggling.
I'm with Donatello here: Kris would have been very proud of his boys!  :D

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Ah these boys crack me up!  Daniel has always been my favorite, but Kieran may have surpassed him in this chapter!

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Sibling rivalry of the most humorous variety. :) They've turned into handsome young men!

Haven't they just! I can't wait to see their kids.

lol I just love watching what the game suggests for clothes.

So do I. Particularly when it involves some of the weirder items like those speedos. And the flippers. I wish I'd never downloaded those flippers.

These two kids would have Kris proud for the fire in their spirit.

I'm sure he is proud of them. I can't believe he died only hours before they aged up, it just seemed so unfair.

The boys aged up to be so handsome! ;D I'm very glad you talked Kieran out of the hospital gown.

I can't decide whether it was that or the speedos that are the biggest problem...

Hospital gowns are totally high fashion. I'm ashamed he gave it up.

Of all the mad fashion trends, it's better than the speedos. Slightly.

Oh, Kieran just made my day! I'm having the hiccups from giggling.
I'm with Donatello here: Kris would have been very proud of his boys!  :D

Haha I'm glad it made you laugh. Not that it gave you the hiccups though, I hate the hiccups. But yeah, I think Kris is proud :)

Ah these boys crack me up!  Daniel has always been my favorite, but Kieran may have surpassed him in this chapter!

I think my favourite is either Daniel or Caitlyn, I can't quite decide. No offence Kieran. I'm glad I'm making you laugh though!

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Re: The CrumpleSteel DecaDynasty: Generation 7, Chapter 117 Three G's 16/10/12
« Reply #614 on: October 16, 2012, 01:52:25 PM »
Three G's

The Three G's of young adult life are, of course, Graduation, Girls and Ghosts.



It's time for the terrible two's graduation ceremony. Kieran wore a hat every day in his teen years, so he feels it's appropriate to wear one to graduation too. And then refuses to take it off when we point out that you get a cap anyway.

Kieran: Exactly. A cap.

Yes, that's what we were telling you.

Kieran: A cap is not a hat! Listen to the names people, the names!!

He's voted Most Popular.



Daniel gets Most Likely To Burn Down His House. Okay. He has the hidden pyromaniac trait I think because he has the option to 'burn something nearby' but that's the only reason he'd have got that award.

Daniel: What else was I? Go on, tell the forum.

He was also Valedictorian.

Daniel: Well done watcher.

Patronise me again, and I'll break you and Gabrielle up.

Daniel: You wouldn't!



Caitlyn: If you're Valedictorian, you can help me out with this homework!



And the creepy paparazzi who sometimes hovers round the house in her nightie came to the ceremony. In her nightie.



Kieran: Whhheeeee!

Shouldn't you be out getting a job?



Kieran: But I'm sad about Dad. Look. Really sad.

So am I. But we have to carry on sometime.

Kieran: But you bought us a waterslide!

Yeah, I thought that was the real reason.



Kieran signs up for the film career too. I can't work out if this is because he wants to actually be an actor or if he just wants to continue the sibling rivalry a little bit longer.

His work outfit is certainly interesting though. Again with the short shorts. What is it with this boy and his legs?

Kieran: They're awesome legs.

Random woman who just turned up in the house: OMG MARRY ME

Kieran: Eeeexactly. Awsome legs.



Daniel's isn't all that much better. He's inherited Kris' head-on-a-stick figure too.



And what of the girls?

Caity is determined that if she ages up with a stupidly revealing outfit she'll at least have the body for it.



Umm, Sophie?

Sophie: Sorry, creating.

Yeah but you're not actually painting on anything.



Sophie: I am.

So you are. My mistake for assuming that you couldn't have broken the laws of physics. Sorry.

Sophie: No worries!



And of course we have to remember the dead household members too. They deserve forum-time. Erik hasn't been out much but Amelia loves the waterslide almost as much as Kieran does.



Kris: Is Tober in?

I think she's playing guitar at the park.

Kris: Oh, no worries. I'll come back. I just have something to tell her.

I could pass it on?

Kris: No, you can't know. I have to tell her in person.



Kieran and Daniel pay Auntie Verity a visit. She spends a great deal of time explaining to Daniel the correct recipe for pancakes. And then explains it again.



Kieran, meanwhile, is a little distracted.

Kieran: So, have you got a boyfriend?

Laurel: No. I haven't been in Lunar Lakes all that long.



Laurel the Maid: I really should do some work.

Kieran: Well, meet me at the coffeehouse after your shift then. I'll show you the sights. And maybe a few other things too.

Laurel: Okay. Two hours time?

Kieran: Perfect.

You might want to get some better chat-up lines before then.



Kieran: And then, I said to him...

Laurel: You're so funny!

Kieran: I'm other things too.

Laurel: Like what?



Kieran: A good kisser.

That's so not one of your traits. Liar. Liar. Pants on fire!

Kieran: *whispers* Shhh! This is the first girl who's ever come near me! Don't mess it up!



Kieran: D'you reckon you'd be interested in...umm... a longer-term kissing arrangement?



Laurel: Are you asking me to be your girlfriend?

Kieran: I think so. Umm, yes! I mean yes!

Laurel: Then of course I'm interested.



Kieran: Yay!

Laurel: Ow.



In other news, Kieran met Rosa (Verity's daughter) at the consignment shop. Lexa finally has her evil minion. It's a shame she wasn't around to see it.

Next Time: More ghosts, more girl-stuff, and a gig. Let's keep with the G theme, kids.