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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #450 on: September 16, 2012, 07:58:19 PM »
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #451 on: September 16, 2012, 10:29:51 PM »
Well, Esther, you could do Agnes' Story again and turn her into a crazy cat lady. ;D Name them after things on the forum, name them after the cat ladies, especially.



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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #452 on: September 17, 2012, 11:53:20 PM »
Lol I've taken way too much time completing this one, if I did another one it might take double the time haha. I really think I can only handle one at a time, and since this one is almost finished, next one I concentrate on will be my Dynasty.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #453 on: September 18, 2012, 10:06:18 PM »
Ok folks. Got a serious problem. I know for a fact Zalise will grow up, get married, pregnant and move out. I also have the perfect ending statement that Agnes will say. But, beyond that, I've got a serious case of writer's block. So, that being said, I have the perfect way to end this story. I will have a reader's choice ending. The rules are simple.

This contest will be open for a whole week, giving all my devoted and loyal reader's plenty of time to get in on this. I want each and every one of you to tell me the way this story should end. No idea is too small, or to big, if it can be done in-game without mods I'll do it. After the week is up, I will take all the ideas and collaborate them into the perfect ending, chosen by the people I love and respect the most. I can't wait to read all the endings you guys come up with and I also can't wait to play the final game, written in essence by you.

Since it's only a couple hours from midnight where I am, I choose to start on 9/19/2012 and the ending will be Wednesday, 9/26/2012. I hope this will be allowed, as I know Metro comes up with most the challenges on the forum, but this isn't a challenge per se. I remember when I started this, it was because some fans requested another story from me while my last Dynasty was on hiatus until Generations came out. So, in my mind the perfect ending will be from my loyal fans who have stuck with me no matter how long I needed a break. I love you all. 

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #454 on: September 18, 2012, 10:51:04 PM »
Lol I've taken way too much time completing this one, if I did another one it might take double the time haha. I really think I can only handle one at a time, and since this one is almost finished, next one I concentrate on will be my Dynasty.

I think I'll do a cat lady story, then. I'll be with Hetty Lionheart in AP, and I'll have to name all the cats after forum member pets, besides Pam's. ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #455 on: September 18, 2012, 11:25:19 PM »
I think I'll do a cat lady story, then. I'll be with Hetty Lionheart in AP, and I'll have to name all the cats after forum member pets, besides Pam's. ;D
Sounds good to me!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #456 on: September 19, 2012, 12:06:17 AM »
It's nice to see you back, Esther.

Congrats to Agnes on the book worth over 20,000! I have never played a writer long enough to know that this was even possible.

It's bedtime for me so I don't have any ideas for a story ending, but I will be reading it.
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #457 on: September 19, 2012, 03:14:58 AM »
How about Erik and Agnes drink an Age Freeze potion so they can spend eternity together?

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #458 on: September 19, 2012, 10:59:02 PM »
Thanks Lily! I didn't either, she is the very first one to get that much for one! It was a best seller masterpiece. It's all good! I can't wait to read everyone's ending!

Thanks Seabody! Awesome idea!

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #459 on: September 26, 2012, 10:31:58 PM »
Hey guys. It's the 26th. But, my mom's best friends dad who was like my grandpa died in a car wreck yesterday. So I won't be playing this until after the funeral and stuff so you all still have time to get your endings in.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #460 on: October 02, 2012, 08:33:11 PM »
Calling hours and funeral is behind me now, but I'm so not in the mood to play Agnes, so you still got time. I'll just say cut off is Friday, the 5th. Hopefully that will give me time to feel better and give you all more time to say how you think this should end.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #461 on: October 02, 2012, 08:47:12 PM »
Explosive divorce with everyone dying alone, except for two potted plants named for cartoon characters. How's that?
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #462 on: October 02, 2012, 08:58:34 PM »
Lol. I'll see if I can work that in, but with them drinking age freeze they won't die without a little help! And 2 potted plants?? Can you have a house with no sims? I'll try my best to do it. Maybe they all die, than get resurrected?

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #463 on: October 02, 2012, 09:11:26 PM »
Explosive Divorce is easy, Fire can kill them,and for the two potted plants, just have Agnes yelling "Goodbye, *Insert names here*", and then the game ends, or just have her continually babble on while facing two potted plants   :P

Edit: It now seems like you misunderstood what I said about the potted plants. I was thinking Agnes divorces Erik and her two remaining friends are the potted plants, then she dies in a fire yelling goodbye  ::)
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #464 on: October 03, 2012, 03:33:49 AM »
How about breaking all those rocks get to be too much for Erik and he decided to return to nerverworld? Agnes reveals a lifelong secret dream to become a witch and after Erik is gone decide to move to Moonlight falls. Agnes will be a awesome witch. Maybe she can persuade Esther to join her and become a witch as well.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #465 on: October 04, 2012, 12:55:04 PM »
Ok, I got ya Wiry. Awesome idea!

Awesome idea Joanne!

I'm having alot of fun writing the ending, and playing it will be even more fun!! I love these creative answers!!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #466 on: October 06, 2012, 08:53:30 AM »
Ok, I'm seriously not saying when this will end any more.  ::) My older sis had surgery on her ankle and needs my help while she recuperates. Not only is the file in Mt Vernon, my note pad and other stuff is in Mt Vernon and I'm in Marion, so I will only say this. It will end one of these days.  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #467 on: October 10, 2012, 01:27:29 PM »
I think I will be going home friday, so hopefully sometime after friday it will be finished. Fingers crossed for me!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #468 on: October 12, 2012, 06:36:24 PM »
I'm home now!  ;D Not sure when I'll be ending it for sure but it will be done soon as long as nothing else happens.

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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #469 on: October 14, 2012, 06:12:54 PM »
Esther's words:
Sorry it's been so long. Also, I'm fighting a nasty cold, and even though I have played through to the ending, I don't feel like posting it right now, but it is completed on my computer, and I just need to feel better to post it. Thanks for everyone's support and love.


Zalise grew up, and turned her IF Zap real. They got married.

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On an awesome note, I figured out how to get the family tree pics! Yancy and Zalise haven't had theirs yet, but here is A-F!

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That's it for this time. Stay tuned for the ending of my story.

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« Reply #470 on: October 14, 2012, 06:18:05 PM »
Whee! Can't wait for the ending. Holy moly, that's a massive family tree
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Re: Agnes's Story
« Reply #471 on: October 17, 2012, 05:56:42 PM »
As I gazed into Erik's eyes, I knew my pain was gone forever. Never again would I be the bitter old woman I was when I started this. Erik has totally changed me forever. He is the love of my life, and always will be.

Erik and I drunk age freeze so we could spend eternity together, never worrying about getting old.

All of a sudden, something horrific happened. I caught Erik with another woman, so I filed for divorce, screaming at him I don't know how he could do this to me.

Suddenly, a fire started, and I could see death. My two potted plants, named Spongebob and Patrick were the only thing I could see through the smoke. As the fire enveloped me, I screamed "goodbye" to my plants as I let death take me.

As the smoke cleared, the Grim Reaper himself appeared infront of me. I could feel my soul being ripped from my body. All of a sudden, the pain stopped. I looked up and he was holding the deathflower I had in my pocket in his hand. He said it was his favorite flower, and he disappeared as quickly as he had appeared. My heart was racing like it had never raced before. Erik was gone. Only me and Esther were still there. Esther's eyes were filled with tears as she ran to me and hugged me. Her words "Mom, I thought I'd lost you forever!" were ringing in my ears. I hugged her back, than told her she would never lose me. I looked deep in my daughters eyes and told her, "My work in Sunset Valley is done. There is nothing here for us anymore. I have always longed to be a witch, with superpowers. Do you want to move with me to Moonlight Falls?" She laughed and said "Yes! I'd also love to be a witch! Let's go!"

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Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #472 on: October 17, 2012, 06:17:59 PM »
Wow, what a ending! Esther that was great. Could we be hearing more from these two ladies in the future?

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #473 on: October 17, 2012, 07:07:29 PM »
Thanks Wiry, I hope it lived up to your expectations! Yes it is impressive!

Thanks Sdhoey! I don't have anything planned, but who knows? The future is bright for them!  ;D

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Re: Agnes's Story - Completed
« Reply #474 on: October 17, 2012, 07:09:45 PM »
Congratulations Esther.  I'm moving you to the completed stories board right now!
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